Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более связно и избегайте повторов. Начните с простой темы: «Yes, I like reading.» Затем добавьте конкретную причину и пример. Практикуйте сокращение пауз и заполнителей (например, «I, I, I»). Постройте ответ из 2–3 предложений, первое — тема, второе — поддержка с деталями (когда/что читаете).

예시: Yes, I like reading. I often read novels in the evening because it helps me relax after work, for example I usually read for about an hour before bed.

제안: Будьте точнее и избегайте бессмысленных слов. Сформулируйте прямое утверждение: «I prefer…» и объясните почему, используя связующее слово (because/so). Добавьте конкретный пример (например, книгу или устройство). Ограничьтесь 2–3 предложениями, избегайте искажённых слов и повторов.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and I enjoy the feeling of turning pages. For example, I like reading paper novels on weekends when I can relax.

제안: Давайте развернутый, логичный ответ: назовите два случая (когда нужно читать внимательно и когда нет) и используйте связку «while» или «but» для контраста. Избегайте междометий («uh») и неоконченных фраз. Добавьте конкретный пример, чтобы показать умение детализировать.

예시: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or sign important documents because mistakes can be costly. But I don’t read carefully when I skim news headlines or social media posts, since they are usually short and low-risk.

제안: Чётко выразите предпочтение и укажите причину с примером. Используйте связочные слова (because/so) и избегайте звуковых пауз. Дайте одно предложение с темой и одно поддерживающее с деталями (когда используете сканирование или детальное чтение).

예시: I prefer scanning because it helps me find important information quickly, for example when I look through emails or articles for key points. However, I read in detail when I study or need to understand complicated instructions.

× I I I I like reading because I often I know I relaxing.

✓ I like reading because I often relax.

The student repeats pronouns unnecessarily and uses 'relaxing' incorrectly. Use the subject 'I' once and the verb 'relax' in simple present for a habitual action. Remove extra fillers and repetitions. Suggestion: say 'I like reading because I often relax.'

× I prefer to reach on on Papillon and no no under popular.

✓ I prefer to read on paper and not on a screen.

Multiple errors: 'reach' is incorrect verb form (should be 'read'), repeated words and wrong nouns ('Papillon' and 'under popular' unclear). Prepositions: use 'on paper' and 'on a screen'. Also include 'a' before 'screen'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to read on paper and not on a screen.'

× Uh, in the topic, uh, in the, uh, important.

✓ I need to read carefully when the topic is important.

Original sentence is fragmented with repetitions and lacks a clear verb and subject. Reconstruct to a full sentence with subject 'I' and a clear condition 'when the topic is important'. Suggestion: 'I need to read carefully when the topic is important.'

× Uh, I like, prefer scanning, uh, because I, umm, I love.

✓ I prefer scanning because I enjoy it.

The sentence has unnecessary repetitions and uses 'like, prefer' together; choose one verb ('prefer'). 'Love' needs an object; use 'enjoy it' to refer to scanning. Use simple present for a general preference. Suggestion: 'I prefer scanning because I enjoy it.'