Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clear, concise sentences. Begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and use correct verb forms and articles. Add one specific example with relevant detail and connect ideas using simple linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because', 'so').

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new things and improve my skills. For example, I recently read a short self-help book about time management, which taught me practical techniques to organize my daily tasks. Because of that book, I now plan my day with a simple to-do list and finish more work on time.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and support it with two concise, specific reasons linked logically. Correct prepositions and simplify sentences to avoid confusion. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information. For example, when I read a printed article, I can annotate margins and connect ideas more easily. Also, paper reduces eye strain compared with long periods on a screen.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence answering both parts (when to read carefully and when not). Provide two specific examples and avoid vague phrases. Use correct nouns and verb forms, and link ideas with 'for example' and 'but' to contrast situations.

예시: You should read carefully when the text affects your health, money, or legal rights, such as a doctor’s prescription or an official contract. However, you might not need to read carefully when reading light entertainment like short poems or casual social media posts.

제안: Give a direct preference or say you use both and explain with a clear reason and one example for each type. Reduce hesitation and repetition; use linking words ('for instance', 'while') to compare purposes of scanning and detailed reading.

예시: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on my goal. For example, I scan news headlines to find articles I need quickly, while I read research articles in detail to understand methods and results thoroughly.

× Yes, I like to reading because it's enhance my knowledge.

✓ Yes, I like to read because it enhances my knowledge.

The verb after 'like to' should be in base form, not -ing. Also 'it' refers to reading and requires the third-person singular present verb 'enhances' for subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'like to read' or 'like reading', and use 'enhances' for present habitual action.

× Also, I gather a lot of enthusiasm knowledge through reading.

✓ Also, I gain a lot of enthusiastic knowledge through reading.

The phrase 'enthusiasm knowledge' is incorrect: 'enthusiasm' is a noun meaning eagerness, and cannot directly modify 'knowledge'. Use an adjective such as 'enthusiastic' or rephrase to 'gain a lot of knowledge and enthusiasm'. Suggestion: 'gain a lot of knowledge through reading' or 'gain both knowledge and enthusiasm'.

× For example, recently I started, uh, one story book, which is habitat and usually it's learned me a lot of things how to manage my daily work schedule.

✓ For example, recently I started a storybook called 'Habitat', and it has taught me many things about how to manage my daily work schedule.

Problems: wrong article 'one story book' should be 'a storybook'; 'which is habitat' likely the title needs 'called'; 'it's learned me' incorrectly uses passive/past forms — correct is 'it has taught me' (present perfect). Also word order and connectors were unclear. Suggestion: use 'a storybook called...' and 'it has taught me many things about how to...'.

× So it is quite, uh, essential for everyone to reading is very, umm, very.

✓ So it is quite essential for everyone to read; reading is very important.

'to reading' is incorrect - after 'to' use base form 'read' or restructure the sentence. The original also repeats and lacks clarity. Suggestion: 'essential for everyone to read' or 'reading is very important'.

× Actually, I prefer to read in paper rather than on in screen or mobile phone because when I read a newspaper or any magazine, I can understand more deeply because the word meaning and sentence the exam behind the reason and also connected each other through the paper rather than any uh screen.

✓ Actually, I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen or a mobile phone because when I read a newspaper or a magazine, I can understand more deeply; the words and sentences are better connected on paper than on a screen.

Use of preposition: 'in paper' should be 'on paper'; 'on in screen' is incorrect. Also missing articles 'a newspaper'/'a magazine'. The phrase 'word meaning and sentence the exam behind the reason' is unclear; rephrase to 'the words and sentences are better connected'. Suggestion: use 'on paper' and include articles before countable nouns.

× So it is quite beneficial to read on paper uh.

✓ So it is quite beneficial to read on paper.

Minor filler words removed; sentence otherwise fine. Ensure no extra 'uh'. Suggestion: avoid filler words in formal responses.

× Reading an important, no comment and official work, you should carefully notice them, for example, uh, as doctor prescription and any official documents and rather than any school exam and other varieties of which is related for our uh important and documentary, you should notice carefully rather than when should any poem an unusual.

✓ For important or official reading, you should read carefully. For example, a doctor's prescription and official documents require careful attention; school exams and other important documents also need careful reading.

The original sentence has many structural problems: missing articles, incorrect word order, unclear phrases ('no comment', 'other varieties of which is related for our important and documentary'), and incorrect verb forms. Simplify into clear sentences: state the general rule, then give examples. Use 'a doctor's prescription', 'official documents', and 'read carefully'.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?

Question form needs auxiliary 'do' for the second clause to be parallel and grammatically complete. Suggestion: use 'when do you not' or 'when don't you need to read carefully?'.

× Reading an important, no comment and official work, you should carefully notice them, for example, uh, as doctor prescription and any official documents and rather than any school exam and other varieties of which is related for our uh important and documentary, you should notice carefully rather than when should any poem an unusual.

✓ Important or official reading requires careful attention; for example, a doctor's prescription and official documents should be read carefully, as should school exams and other important records.

Multiple article errors: 'doctor prescription' should be 'a doctor's prescription'; 'official documents' may need 'the' depending on context but 'official documents' is acceptable. 'School exam' should be 'school exams'. Also replace vague phrases with clear nouns. Suggestion: use possessive for doctor's prescription and pluralize countable nouns.

× Well, I always try to prefer both scanning and detailed reading.

✓ Well, I always prefer both scanning and detailed reading.

'Try to prefer' is incorrect: 'prefer' is a stative verb and does not combine with 'try to' in this context. Use 'I prefer' or 'I try to use both'. Suggestion: 'I prefer both scanning and detailed reading' or 'I try to use both scanning and detailed reading'.

× Both are important, uh, and use something try to understand deeply.

✓ Both are important, and I try to use both to understand the text deeply.

Missing subject 'I' and awkward phrase 'use something try to understand deeply'. Add subject and clarify purpose: 'I try to use both to understand the text deeply.' Suggestion: always include subject for clarity.

× You should uh, uh, read detail everything like what's the happening and what's going through.

✓ You should read everything in detail, such as what is happening and what is going on.

'read detail' should be 'read in detail'; 'what's the happening' incorrect word order; 'what's going through' should be 'what is going on'. Suggestion: use 'in detail' and standard question-word order for embedded clauses.

× And rather than scanning is a important as well, uh, you try to enhance their knowledge and.

✓ Scanning is also important; it helps to enhance knowledge.

'Rather than' is misused here (it indicates contrast). 'is a important' article error: should be 'an important'. 'you try to enhance their knowledge' has wrong pronoun and awkward structure. Suggestion: state positively: 'Scanning is also important; it helps to enhance knowledge.'