Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama tekrarlamalar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha akıcı ve düzgün cümle yapısı kullanmalısın. Ayrıca doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlayıp 1–2 destekleyici neden eklemelisin. Örneğin, neden kitap okumayı sevdiğini ve ne tür kitapları tercih ettiğini belirt.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I find it relaxing and it helps me learn new things, especially fiction and history books.

제안: Cevap net ve anlaşılır fakat tekrarlama ve bazı küçük dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Bağlaç kullanımı iyi ama cümleleri daha kısa ve doğru yapıda kurmalısın. Göz yorulması sebebini biraz daha özel hale getir (ör. odaklanma, not alma).

예시: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes and make it hard to concentrate. Also, I can easily underline and make notes on physical pages.

제안: Cevapta amaç belli ama dilbilgisi, telaffuz yazılı ifade hataları ve tekrarlamalar var. Daha net bir topic sentence kurup nedenleri mantıklı bağlaçlarla belirtmelisin. "Don't want to forget" yerine daha uygun ifadeler kullan (e.g. "so I can remember key facts"). Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarları çıkar.

예시: I need to read carefully when the material is important, such as history or psychology, because I want to remember key facts and understand complex ideas. For light reading like novels or blogs, I usually skim.

제안: Cevap amacı anlaşılır fakat dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi ciddi şekilde gelişmeye ihtiyaç duyuyor. "I'm search to important somethings" gibi ifadeler yerine doğru fiil formları kullan; ayrıca son cümlenin anlamı belirsiz. Cevabı bir topic sentence ile başlat, ardından nedenlerini bağlaçlarla açıkla ve bir örnek ekle.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I usually look for important information and want to understand it fully. For example, when studying a topic I take notes and read each paragraph carefully.

× Yeah, I I really like it reading a book.

✓ Yeah, I really like reading books.

The original sentence has extra words and wrong word order: 'I I' is a repetition and 'it reading a book' is ungrammatical. Correct structure places the verb phrase 'really like reading' followed by the object 'books' (general preference uses plural). Suggestion: remove the repeated 'I' and 'it', use 'reading books' to express a general habit.

× I prefer to read it read on paper because when I look at screen I feel my eyes so tired.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I look at a screen my eyes feel very tired.

The phrase contains an unnecessary pronoun 'it' and missing article 'a' before 'screen'; 'so tired' is unnatural in this context — use 'very tired' or 'very strained'. Also word order should be 'my eyes feel very tired'. Suggestion: remove 'it', add 'a', and replace 'so' with 'very' for clearer meaning.

× I prefer to read on paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper.

This sentence is already correct. No grammatical changes needed. Keep as is to express preference.

× I if I reading some things important like history, like psychology, I need to read carefully because I don't wanna, I don't want to forget anythings.

✓ If I read something important, like history or psychology, I need to read carefully because I don't want to forget anything.

Multiple issues: 'If I reading' is incorrect — after 'if' use base form 'read' for simple present conditional; 'some things important' should be 'something important' (singular) and use 'or' to list examples; 'wanna' is informal — use 'want to'; 'anythings' is incorrect plural — use 'anything'. Suggestion: use 'If I read something important', replace 'like' with 'or' between examples, and use 'anything'.

× I wanna remember every, uh, knowledge.

✓ I want to remember all the knowledge.

'Wanna' is informal and not appropriate for formal transcripts; 'every knowledge' is ungrammatical — use 'all the knowledge' or 'everything I learn'. Suggestion: replace 'wanna' with 'want to' and rephrase 'every knowledge' to 'all the knowledge' or 'everything'.

× I prefer detailed reading because I'm search to important somethings in the book.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I'm searching for important things in the book.

'I'm search' is incorrect present continuous — use present participle 'searching'. Preposition 'for' is needed after 'searching'. 'Important somethings' is ungrammatical — use 'important things' or 'important information'. Suggestion: use 'I'm searching for important things'.

× When I reading somethings I like to see that old.

✓ When I read something, I like to study it carefully.

'When I reading' is incorrect; after 'when' use base form 'read' for simple present. 'Somethings' should be 'something' and 'I like to see that old' is unclear and ungrammatical — likely intended 'study it carefully' or 'look at it closely'. Suggestion: use 'When I read something, I like to study it carefully' for clarity.