Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm câu chủ đề, tránh lỗi như "Is not" và số nhiều/đơn ("way" → "ways" hoặc dùng "a way"). Giảm độ dài câu và dùng tối đa 3 câu: câu trả lời trực tiếp, một chi tiết hỗ trợ và một ví dụ ngắn nếu cần. Sử dụng từ nối đơn giản như "and" hoặc "which" để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I do. Reading is one of my favorite ways to relax after a long day, and it helps me unwind. It also lets me discover new ideas and perspectives, which I enjoy.

제안: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng ("hundreds of book" → "hundreds of books"; "for no words" unclear — có thể là "for novels" hoặc "for long words"). Tránh câu mơ hồ; rút gọn ý bằng 2–3 câu, dùng liên từ như "however" để nối đối lập rõ ràng.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable, allowing me to carry hundreds of books on my phone. However, for long novels or when I want a more comfortable experience, I still prefer physical books.

제안: Sửa lỗi danh từ số nhiều/đơn và trật tự từ ("academic material, contracts, or instructions"). Dùng cụm từ chính xác hơn và rút gọn câu để rõ ràng. Thêm liên từ "because" hợp lý và tránh lặp từ như 'read'.

예시: I read carefully when I'm studying academic materials, contracts, or instructions because accuracy is crucial. But for news articles or social media posts, I usually skim to get the main idea quickly.

제안: Sửa lỗi cú pháp và dạng động từ ("Is depends" → "It depends"; "really interest me" → "really interest me" → "really interest me" should be "really interest me" → correct: "really interest me" → actually "really interest me" is wrong: use "really interest me"? Better: "really interest me" → "really interest me" unclear). Hãy dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Giữ dưới 3 câu và kết nối bằng "if"/"but".

예시: It depends on the purpose. If I'm short on time or looking for specific facts, I prefer scanning. But if a topic really interests me, I choose detailed reading so I can fully understand and enjoy the content.

× Reading is one of my favorite way to relax, especially after a long day.

✓ Reading is one of my favorite ways to relax, especially after a long day.

'one of my favorite' requires a plural noun 'ways' to match the construction; use 'ways' not 'way'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'one of' (e.g., 'one of my favorite ways').

× Is not only have me unwind but also allow me to learn new ideas and perspective at the same time.

✓ It not only helps me unwind but also allows me to learn new ideas and perspectives at the same time.

Missing subject 'It' and incorrect verb forms: the construction 'not only... but also...' needs parallel verbs ('helps' and 'allows') and subject. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' when referring to multiple ideas. Suggestion: Include the subject and keep verbs parallel; use plural for countable nouns when appropriate.

× I can access hundreds of book on my phone or tablet.

✓ I can access hundreds of books on my phone or tablet.

After 'hundreds of' the noun should be plural ('books'). Suggestion: Use plural nouns after quantifiers like 'hundreds of'. Also ensure preposition 'on' is correct for devices.

× Although for no words or long reading sessions, I still enjoy the view of my physical book.

✓ Although for now, or during long reading sessions, I still enjoy the feel of my physical book.

'no words' is incorrect; likely meant 'now' or 'short' — context suggests 'now' or 'for long reading sessions'. 'View' is odd for books; 'feel' or 'experience' fits better. Pronoun/word choices were incorrect. Suggestion: Choose the correct adverb ('now') and a noun that matches the sense ('feel' of a book). If intended 'no words' clarify meaning.

× I read carefully when I'm studying academic or material contracts or instruction because accuracy is very important.

✓ I read carefully when I'm studying academic material, contracts, or instructions because accuracy is very important.

Word order and forms: 'academic material' is a compound noun; 'contracts or instruction' should use plural 'instructions' to match items in a list. Use commas to separate items. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and separate list items with commas; ensure parallel structure.

× However, when I read news article or social media posts, I tend to skim them to just to get the main idea.

✓ However, when I read news articles or social media posts, I tend to skim them just to get the main idea.

'news article' should be plural 'news articles' to match 'social media posts'. Also remove the extra 'to' in 'to just to get'. Suggestion: Keep parallel number (plural) across similar items and avoid duplicate words.

× Is depends on the purpose.

✓ It depends on the purpose.

Missing subject 'It' and verb must agree with third person singular: 'depends' is correct but needs subject 'It'. Suggestion: Always include an explicit subject in English declarative sentences.

× But when the topics are really interest me, I enjoy detailed reading so I can fully understand and appreciate the content.

✓ But when the topics really interest me, I enjoy detailed reading so I can fully understand and appreciate the content.

Incorrect verb form 'are really interest me' — remove 'are' and use 'interest' for the subjects 'topics' (they interest me). The clause should be 'when the topics really interest me'. Suggestion: Use correct verb pattern: 'subject + interest + object' (e.g., 'topics interest me').