Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 직접적이긴 하나 문장이 어색하고 문법 실수(단수/복수, 동사 형태)와 표현 반복이 있습니다. 답변을 더 자연스럽게 만들려면 주제 문장을 명확히 한 뒤 이유와 예시를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 논리를 분명히 하고 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 유지하세요. 또한 'activity' 대신 정확한 활동 유형(예: sports, outdoor activities)을 사용하면 더 구체적입니다.

예시: I don't enjoy reading very much because I prefer physical activities like hiking and team sports. For example, I usually spend my weekends playing football or going on long walks, which makes sitting and reading feel less appealing.

제안: 의미 전달이 불분명하고 문법 및 어휘 선택에 오류가 많습니다('eyes are heart or screen' 등). 명확한 주제문을 쓰고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요(예: 눈의 피로, 더 좋은 집중). 'prefer to read on paper'을 뒷받침하는 구체적 이유와 한 예시를 덧붙이세요.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate. For instance, when I study from a textbook, I find it simpler to flip pages and make notes directly on the paper.

제안: 답변이 매우 단편적이고 비문(문법과 단어 선택 오류)이 많아 의미를 파악하기 어렵습니다. 질문에 바로 답하는 주제문을 제시하고, '언제'에 대한 구체적 상황(예: 학업 자료, 계약서 vs. 소셜 미디어 게시물)과 이유를 각각 한두 문장으로 설명하세요. 불필요한 말버릇(uh, umm)을 줄이세요.

예시: You need to read carefully when dealing with important texts like contracts or academic articles because mistakes can have serious consequences. On the other hand, casual posts or short messages don't usually require close reading.

제안: 의견은 제시되었지만 표현이 반복적이고 구체성이 부족합니다. '왜 지루한지'와 '대신 어떤 방법을 쓰는지'를 연결어(so, because, however)를 사용해 설명하세요. 또한 'scanning'과 'detailed reading'의 차이를 짧게 정의하면 더 설득력있습니다.

예시: I don't enjoy detailed reading very much because it can be tedious and time-consuming. Instead, I usually use scanning to find key information quickly, especially when I'm looking for facts or dates.

× I don't like reading too much because I love to do activity so I do not prefer to read the book.

✓ I don't like reading too much because I love doing activities, so I do not prefer to read books.

The sentence has article and noun number errors. 'the book' implies a specific book; general preference requires plural 'books' or no article. Also 'to do activity' is ungrammatical; use the gerund 'doing activities' for general activities. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and gerunds after 'love'.

× I love to read on paper because I read on screen like a book or textbook.

✓ I love to read on paper because reading on a screen, like a book or textbook, strains my eyes.

The original misuses 'read on screen like a book or textbook' and lacks clarity. Also needs verb agreement and a subject. Use 'reading on a screen' as a noun phrase and add a clear verb 'strains' to express the effect. Suggestion: rephrase unclear prepositional phrase and include a main verb.

× My eyes are heart or screen and so I prefer to read all.

✓ My eyes hurt from screens, so I prefer to read on paper.

'My eyes are heart' is incorrect: 'hurt' is a verb, not adjective 'heart'. 'Or screen' is unclear. 'I prefer to read all' is ungrammatical; specify 'on paper'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'hurt' and clear prepositional phrase 'from screens'.

× I think in book we have to read all parting carefully because, uh, writer they umm.

✓ I think in books we have to read every part carefully because the writer provides important information.

Sentence fragment and word choice errors: 'in book' should be 'in books' for generalization; 'read all parting' should be 'read every part' or 'all parts'; 'writer they' is ungrammatical—use 'the writer'. Suggestion: use plural for general statements, correct noun forms, and include a clear reason clause.

× I do not prefer scanning or detail reading a lot because it is boring things that I think, so I don't really really want to do that.

✓ I don't prefer scanning or detailed reading much because I think it is boring, so I really don't want to do it.

Tense is present but word forms are incorrect: 'detail reading' should be 'detailed reading' (adjective form), 'a lot' mispositioned—use 'much' or place 'a lot' differently. 'It is boring things that I think' is awkward; use 'I think it is boring'. Avoid double 'really'. Suggestion: use correct adjective form 'detailed', place adverbs properly, and simplify the clause order.