Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitive words, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, but, however) and correct grammar (e.g., "Absolutely" or "Yes, I do"). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading in my free time, especially novels, because they help me relax after studying. For example, I often read historical fiction for a few hours on weekends, which lets me escape and learn about the past.

제안: Be direct and reduce repetition. State your preference in one sentence, then give one clear reason and an example. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "distractions" instead of "distractors"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and link ideas with words like "because" or "however."

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and avoid distractions. For example, when I read printed books I’m less tempted to check my phone, so I can read for longer periods.

제안: Reduce hesitations and be clearer about different situations. Start with a topic sentence that contrasts careful and quick reading, then give specific examples and use linking words like "however" or "when." Avoid filler words such as "uh." Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I read carefully when studying for university or when a text is important, because I need to understand details. However, I skim messages or informal texts from friends when I just need the main point quickly.

제안: Clarify your meaning and correct contradictions (scanning is for getting main ideas, detailed reading for specifics). Give one clear statement about which method you prefer for which materials and include an example. Use linking words like "for instance" and finish the thought.

예시: It depends: for novels I often read in detail to enjoy the language and scenes, but for some university materials I scan the text to get the main ideas quickly. For instance, I might scan lecture slides before class but read chapters in full when preparing for exams.

× Absolutely is yes.

✓ Absolutely, yes.

The original has incorrect word order. English requires the adverb 'absolutely' before the interjection 'yes' with a comma. Use 'Absolutely, yes.' or simply 'Yes, absolutely.' to sound natural.

× I really like and I enjoy everything every time I'm reading and when I have a free time I really like to read a lot of books as much as I can.

✓ I really like reading and enjoy it all the time; when I have free time, I like to read as many books as I can.

The sentence is repetitive and has awkward structure. Combine related ideas, remove unnecessary fillers ('a' before 'free time'), and use 'as many books as I can' for countable plural. Use present participle 'reading' as the activity.

× Most of the time I really concentrate on my lessons after university, but every time I have opportunity to read I can really enjoy it and especially I really enjoy it for novel of books.

✓ Most of the time I really concentrate on my lessons after university, but whenever I have the opportunity to read, I really enjoy it, especially novels.

Missing article 'the' before 'opportunity' and awkward phrase 'novel of books'. Use 'whenever' for repeated occasions, and 'novels' (plural) is the correct noun form. Simplify redundant 'really enjoy it'.

× I do like both of them.

✓ I do like both.

'Both of them' is unnecessary without a clear referent; 'both' suffices. This makes the sentence more natural.

× But if I have to choose one of them, I will say reading by paper which is really more, I think you can concentrate a lot.

✓ But if I have to choose one, I would say reading on paper because I think you can concentrate more.

Use conditional 'would' for preference. Use 'reading on paper' (correct preposition) and 'concentrate more' (adverb placement). Remove 'one of them' and redundant words.

× But if you are reading the script, you can get a lot of distractors.

✓ But if you are reading on a screen, you can be distracted by many things.

'Script' is incorrect here; 'on a screen' fits the question. 'Get a lot of distractors' is unnatural—use 'be distracted by many things'.

× But if you are someone who really concentrate, keep your attention on that, it will be fine.

✓ But if you are someone who really concentrates and keeps your attention on it, it will be fine.

Third person singular requires 'concentrates' and parallel structure needs 'keeps'. Use 'it' to refer to the reading medium.

× But for personal I would prefer to read on a paper.

✓ But personally, I would prefer to read on paper.

Use the adverb 'personally' instead of 'for personal'. 'Read on paper' is the natural phrase; do not use the article 'a' before 'paper' in this context.

× Almost every time I really try to, uh, treat carefully everything I'm reading because uh, uh, I wanted to get what I'm reading really deeply now.

✓ Almost every time I try to read carefully because I want to understand deeply what I'm reading.

Mixing tenses: 'try' (present) should match 'want' (present), not 'wanted' (past). 'Treat carefully' is unnatural; use 'read carefully' and place 'deeply' appropriately.

× But sometimes when I get a message from my friend, they are really just, uh, great, uh, as soon as possible.

✓ But sometimes when I get a message from a friend, I just want a quick reply.

Using 'they' to refer to 'my friend' is unclear. The original meaning seems to be wanting a quick response; rephrase to 'I just want a quick reply.' Avoid filler words.

× But if I'm reading a book, I will really concentrate.

✓ But if I'm reading a book, I really concentrate.

Use present simple 'really concentrate' for habitual actions. 'Will' is unnecessary for a general statement.

× So it depends what I'm reading for some time is when I'm trying to read for novel books, I really like to read by scanning because I want to get every detail that I can get.

✓ It depends on what I'm reading. When I read novels, I like detailed reading because I want to get every detail I can.

The original is convoluted and contradictory (scanning vs wanting every detail). Clarify intent: if reading novels, detailed reading fits. Use 'depends on' and 'novels' (plural). Remove awkward 'that I can get.'

× But if there's something that for example, for what I'm studying for my university classes, sometimes there's a lecture that you need just to get an idea about. So for that I really.

✓ But if I'm studying for my university classes and just need an overview of a lecture, I prefer scanning to get the main idea.

Original is incomplete and unclear. Complete the sentence by stating the preference and purpose: 'scan to get the main idea.' Use 'prefer scanning' or 'I prefer to scan' to finish the thought.