Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 応答は内容が明確ですが、文法ミス（時制、主語-動詞一致、冠詞の欠如）、冗長表現、そして論理のつながりがやや弱いです。具体的には「it help」→「it helps」「feel relax」→「feel relaxed」「so I want to read a lot of books」は理由と目的の繋がりが不明瞭です。改善方法：①主語と動詞の一致と形容詞・副詞の使い分けを確認する（helps, relaxed）。②接続詞や因果を示す表現（because, so, therefore, which is why）で論理を明確にする。③5文以内で簡潔に話し、冗長な部分を削る。

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and broadens my outlook on life. However, recently I have been spending more time on social media, which I find unhealthy, so I’m trying to read more books to reduce screen time.

제안: 答えは意図が分かりますが、文法と流暢さの問題が目立ちます。句の断片（"On the screen."）、動名詞の誤用（"when I reading"→"when I read"）、繰り返し("tired"が重複)が改善点です。改善方法：①一貫した完全な文で答える（短くてもOK）。②動詞の原形・過去形・現在分詞の使い分けを正す。③同じ語を繰り返さずに類義語を使う（e.g. fatigued, strain）。

예시: I prefer reading on paper. When I read on a screen, my eyes become strained from the blue light, so I find paper books more comfortable and relaxing.

제안: 応答が混乱しており、質問の前半と後半（いつ注意深く読むか、いつそうしないか）に明確に答えられていません。語の抜け（"come back the."）や言い淀み（"uh"）が多いです。改善方法：①質問の両側面に分けて明確に答える（e.g. I read carefully for study, but casually for pleasure before bed）。②理由を簡潔に述べ、結論を持たせる。③言い淀みを減らすために短い準備時間で話す。

예시: I usually need to read carefully when I study or when I’m reading technical material, because I need to understand details. By contrast, I read less carefully before bed, since I often get sleepy and tend to skim or fall asleep.

제안: 回答は途中で終わっており、具体的な比較（いつスキャン、いつ詳読するか）が不十分です。結論は出ているものの、理由と具体例が不足しています。改善方法：①文を最後まで完成させる習慣をつける。②具体例や理由を一つか二つ挙げる（e.g. nonfiction requires detailed reading for facts）。③接続詞を使って論理を明確に（e.g. however, because）。

예시: It depends on the material. For novels I often skim to follow the story quickly, but for nonfiction or study texts I read in detail so I can remember facts and understand arguments.

× Yes I do, I like reading because it help me feel relax and broaden my outlook on life.

✓ Yes, I do. I like reading because it helps me feel relaxed and broadens my outlook on life.

The subject 'I' requires the verb to agree in number: use 'helps' and 'broadens' (third person singular form is not needed here, but verbs still must be correct for 'I'). Also 'help me feel relax' is incorrect: 'relaxed' is the adjective describing the subject's state. Use 'helps me feel relaxed' to convey the result. Suggestions: always ensure verbs match the subject and use appropriate adjective forms after verbs like 'feel'.

× But these days I spend more time on social media so I think it's not good for my health so I want to read a lot of books.

✓ But these days I spend more time on social media, so I think it's not good for my health and I want to read more books.

Tense is present habitual ('spend') so keep present forms. The original is awkward with repeated 'so'. Replace with 'and' and use 'more books' (quantity) rather than 'a lot of books' for naturalness. Suggestion: avoid repeating conjunctions and maintain consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× I prefer reading on paper too. On the screen. Uh, when I reading a book on the screen I feel tired more easily because the blue light makes my eyes tired so I prefer.

✓ I prefer reading on paper. When I read a book on the screen, I get tired more easily because the blue light strains my eyes, so I prefer paper.

Use the base form 'read' after subject 'I' for simple present habitual. 'When I reading' is ungrammatical; correct to 'When I read'. 'Feel tired more easily' is better as 'get tired more easily'. 'Makes my eyes tired' is awkward; 'strains my eyes' is more natural. Suggestion: for habits use simple present ('I read'), and choose natural collocations like 'get tired' and 'strain one's eyes'.

× I need to read carefully at night because I uh, when I read a book just before going to bed, I often feel sleepy and end up falling asleep and it's hard to come back the.

✓ I need to read carefully at night because, when I read a book just before going to bed, I often feel sleepy and end up falling asleep, and it's hard to wake up and continue reading.

Maintain present habitual tense. The phrase 'come back the' is incomplete and incorrect; replace with 'wake up and continue reading' to express returning to the book. Also add commas to improve clarity. Suggestion: complete phrasal verbs and ensure sentences end with a clear object or action.

× It depends on the books. When I read novels, I prefer scanning because I think I don't need to read very carefully, but it's important to understand the basic storyline. But when I read.

✓ It depends on the book. When I read novels, I prefer scanning because I don't need to read very carefully; it's important to understand the basic storyline. But when I read non-fiction or study material, I read more carefully.

'Depends on the books' is acceptable, but 'depends on the book' is more natural. The final fragment 'But when I read.' is incomplete; supply a contrasting complete clause such as 'But when I read non-fiction or study material, I read more carefully.' Also simplify 'I think I don't need' to 'I don't need'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and complete contrasts with full clauses; ensure subject and object are clear.