Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сделайте ответ более естественным и связным: начните с прямого предложения о своих предпочтениях, затем приведите одно-двa конкретных примера жанров и причину. Избегайте лишних слов и грамматических ошибок (напр. "of my spree time", "not basically"). Работайте над правильным порядком слов и согласованием.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I like different genres, especially fiction and history, because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, I often read short stories before bed and history articles at weekends.

제안: Сделайте ответ чётким, с правильной грамматикой и связкой причин и примера. Исправьте ошибки местоимений и формы существительных ("a books plot", "feel himself comfortable"). Используйте связку "because" и приведите конкретную причину и пример использования бумаги.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and enjoy the book's plot. For example, when I read a physical novel at home I rarely check my phone and I remember the story better.

제안: Сформулируйте чёткий тезис: когда нужно читать внимательно и когда можно просматривать. Избегайте повторов и неверных конструкций ("during the reading books"). Приводите конкретные ситуации и результаты чтения внимательно.

예시: You should read carefully when studying for exams or following instructions, because details matter in those cases. But you can skim news articles or emails when you only need the main idea.

제안: Ответ хорош: краткий, по теме и использует причину. Чтобы повысить балл, добавьте ещё одно конкретное примера и плавное связующее слово. Работайте над уверенностью (избегайте "MMM").

예시: I prefer scanning at first because it helps me spot key information quickly and decide if the text is worth a detailed read. For instance, I scan academic papers for headings and conclusions before reading the full article.

× Yes, I like reading some different books of other interesting genres of my spree time.

✓ Yes, I like reading different books from interesting genres in my free time.

The sentence uses incorrect word choices and word order. 'some different books of other interesting genres of my spree time' is ungrammatical. Replace 'some different books of other interesting genres' with 'different books from interesting genres' and 'my spree time' with 'my free time'. Ensure proper noun phrases and prepositions: 'books from genres' and 'in my free time'. Suggestion: simplify phrases and use common collocations (free time, from genres).

× I want to spend my free time not basically with interesting facts and readings, so I like.

✓ I don't mainly want to spend my free time on interesting facts and readings, so I prefer other activities.

The original misuses 'not basically' and has unclear structure. Use negation and quantifier/adverb correctly: 'I don't mainly want to spend' or 'I don't basically want to spend' (but 'mainly' is more natural). Also use correct preposition 'on' for activities or topics. Clarify the concluding clause: 'so I prefer other activities.' Suggestion: use clear negation and natural adverbs (mainly, basically) and correct prepositions (spend time on).

× To be honest, when I read a book on a screen I usually pay attention to the other things, not a books plot.

✓ To be honest, when I read a book on a screen I usually pay attention to other things, not the book's plot.

Problems: incorrect article and possessive form. Use 'other things' (no 'the'), and possessive 'book's plot' instead of 'a books plot'. Also include 'the' before 'book's plot' to refer to that book. Suggestion: use singular possessive (book's) and correct articles ('the book's plot').

× So I prefer to read on paper because on paper you can feel himself comfortable and collection the books.

✓ So I prefer to read on paper because on paper you can feel comfortable and collect the books.

Errors: incorrect reflexive pronoun 'himself' used for general 'you' — use 'yourself' or simply 'comfortable'. 'Collection the books' is incorrect verb; use 'collect books' or 'browse a collection of books'. Suggestion: match pronouns to subject (you/yourself) and use correct verbs (collect, browse) and omit unnecessary definite article if speaking generally. Revised to natural phrasing: 'feel comfortable and collect books.'

× I think always need to read books carefully because by reading books during the reading books you improve your skills like technical and speech skills.

✓ I think we always need to read books carefully because reading improves skills such as technical and speaking skills.

The original repeats phrases ('reading books during the reading books'), omits subject ('always need'), and uses awkward phrase 'speech skills'. Add subject 'we' and simplify: 'reading improves skills such as technical and speaking skills.' Use 'speaking' instead of 'speech' to describe the skill. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use clear subject-verb structure; use 'such as' to list examples.

× I think it's not a reason to not have a carefully.

✓ I don't think that's a reason not to read carefully.

Multiple issues: wrong article and adverb form. 'Have a carefully' is ungrammatical. Use 'read carefully' (verb + adverb). Place negation naturally: 'I don't think that's a reason not to...'. Suggestion: use verb + adverb constructions and place negation correctly.

× MMM, I prefer scanning when I first approach a text because it helps me find key information quickly and decide whether to read further.

✓ I prefer scanning when I first approach a text because it helps me find key information quickly and decide whether to read further.

Original is mostly correct; remove filler 'MMM'. Tense is appropriate (present simple) for habitual actions. Suggestion: avoid filler sounds in formal speech and keep present simple for habits.