Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and possibly a brief consequence. Avoid absolute words like "definitely" when giving a negative opinion and reduce hesitation.

예시: Not really. I don't have much time for recreational reading because I spend most of my day attending lectures and studying for exams, so I usually prioritise coursework over novels.

제안: Give a direct answer (paper or screen), then give two clear, specific reasons connected with linking words. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g., "it is convenient" or "they are convenient").

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient for studying, and it stores a lot of materials digitally, so I can access lecture notes and ebooks anywhere.

제안: Provide a full, direct response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Explain specific situations for careful reading and when skimming is fine, using linking words to contrast the two cases.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm reviewing reports or academic essays to understand arguments and check facts; in contrast, I don't read carefully when I'm browsing news headlines or checking emails, because I just want the main points.

제안: Answer directly and give clearer, more specific reasons. Use linking words to explain benefits and limitations, and avoid vague phrases like "I can read all."

예시: I usually prefer scanning because it's faster and helps me find key information quickly; however, I use detailed reading when I need to fully understand complex material or prepare for exams.

× I like everything in screen because it convenient and it has a big storage.

✓ I like everything on screen because it is convenient and it has a lot of storage.

Use the preposition on with 'screen' (we say on screen). Also 'it convenient' lacks the verb to be in the third person singular present; use 'it is convenient' (third person singular issue). 'a big storage' is unnatural: use 'a lot of storage' or 'large storage' or 'a lot of storage space'. Suggestion: say 'on screen', include 'is' for the verb, and replace 'a big storage' with 'a lot of storage' or 'ample storage space'.

× I like everything in screen because it convenient and it has a big storage.

✓ I like everything on screen because it is convenient and it has a lot of storage.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'is' in present simple (third person singular). The original omitted 'is' ('it convenient'), which is grammatically incorrect. Suggestion: always include 'is' after third-person singular pronouns when using adjectives: 'it is convenient'.

× I like everything in screen because it convenient and it has a big storage.

✓ I like everything on screen because it is convenient and it has a lot of storage.

The phrase 'a big storage' is not a natural quantifier/collocation in English. Use 'a lot of storage' or 'plenty of storage' or 'ample storage space'. Suggestion: choose common collocations for storage (e.g., 'a lot of storage', 'ample storage space').

× When I read a report or essay.

✓ When I read a report or an essay, I need to read carefully.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause (no finite verb completing the thought). The question asked 'When do you need to read carefully, and when not?' so the answer should present when the speaker needs to read carefully. Suggestion: supply a main clause that answers the question, e.g., 'When I read a report or an essay, I need to read carefully.'

× I like scanning because it's, uh, fast and I can read, uh, all.

✓ I like scanning because it's fast and I can read everything quickly.

The original ends with 'I can read, uh, all,' which is a fragment and informal filler 'uh'. It lacks a clear object and natural phrasing. Replace fillers and supply a complete object: 'everything' or 'a lot of text' and consider adding 'quickly' or 'fast' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid fillers and complete the idea: 'I can read everything quickly.'