Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and repetition.

예시: I don't enjoy reading books very much, but I read a lot of news and online articles. However, I would like to improve my book-reading skills because reading longer texts helps me deepen my knowledge and concentration.

제안: Give a concise opinion followed by two clear reasons linked logically. Use fewer repetitions and correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., "on paper", "pay more attention").

예시: I prefer reading on paper because the physical book helps me focus more, and I find screens distracting due to notifications and glare.

제안: Answer directly with a clear distinction between situations that require careful reading and those that don't. Use linking words (for example, but, because) and provide specific examples. Correct grammar and avoid hesitations.

예시: I need to read carefully when the material affects my work or when I'm studying for exams because I must understand details and implications. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm browsing social media or skimming news headlines for a general idea.

제안: State your preference clearly and use a contrasting linking phrase (e.g., "however" or "but") to explain differences between contexts. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "pay full attention", "scan") and avoid pronunciation/word-choice errors like "buy as my attention".

예시: It depends: for work-related texts I prefer detailed reading because mistakes can affect my team and procedures; however, for everyday personal reading I usually scan to get the main points quickly.

× I personally don't like reading books.

✓ I personally don't like reading books.

No grammatical correction needed; this sentence is acceptable. It may be stylistically improved by removing 'personally' if redundant, but that is not a grammatical issue.

× I think it's something I should uh, learn how to read a book because it really helpful if I have a if I have a chance, I would like to be able to read more books, but umm, I do read a lot of news and uh, articles.

✓ I think it's something I should learn: how to read a book, because it would be really helpful. If I had the chance, I would like to be able to read more books, but I do read a lot of news and articles.

Multiple issues: missing 'be' before 'really helpful' (there be/verb form), incorrect conditional tense 'if I have a chance' should be 'if I had the chance' for a hypothetical (past tense/conditional), and unnecessary filler words. Corrections: add 'be' or change to 'would be' to match conditional meaning (There be issue and tense consistency). Use past subjunctive 'had' for hypothetical and simplify structure.

× I personally think I would prefer reading on a paper because I I need to feel the physical touch with the book so I can be by more attention to what I'm doing.

✓ I personally think I would prefer reading on paper because I need to feel the physical touch of the book so I can pay more attention to what I'm doing.

Errors: 'on a paper' is incorrect; use 'on paper' (article error). 'Physical touch with the book' should be 'touch of the book' (preposition/article). 'be by more attention' is incorrect verb phrase; correct is 'pay more attention' (verb choice). Also remove duplicate 'I'.

× Uh, I got a bit of distraction from reading on, uh, on the, uh, screen.

✓ I get a bit distracted when reading on the screen.

Use present simple for habitual action ('get' not 'got'). 'A bit of distraction from reading' is awkward; use adjective 'distracted'. 'on the screen' is fine but compress to 'when reading on the screen' for natural structure (tense and sentence structure).

× I'll think I'll put pay more attention to the top pick of uh, uh, what I'm reading because uh, is where I can think of what happened and umm, form the topic.

✓ I think I'll pay more attention to the main topic of what I'm reading because that is where I can understand what happened and form the topic.

Original has redundant 'I'll think I'll' and incorrect phrases 'put pay' and 'top pick'. 'Main topic' replaces 'top pick'. 'is where' needs a clear subject 'that' or 'which'. Use 'understand' instead of 'think of' for clarity. This fixes sentence structure and verb usage.

× I can understand what the uh, writer trying to tell me and.

✓ I can understand what the writer is trying to tell me.

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' before 'trying' (present continuous form). Remove trailing conjunction 'and'. Fixes verb form (present continuous) and completes the clause.

× Well, I will say it depends if it is related to work, I would buy as my attention as I as I can because it's fine affect on my whole team and uh, uh, procedures,

✓ Well, I would say it depends. If it is related to work, I would pay as much attention as I can because it can affect my whole team and the procedures.

Errors: 'I will say' is OK but 'I would say' is more tentative. 'Depends' needs clearer clause division. 'buy as my attention' is incorrect; correct verb is 'pay' and quantifier 'as much'. 'it's fine affect' should be 'it can affect' (modal/verb form). Add article 'the' before 'procedures' for specificity.

× but with personal, uh, uh, in everyday life, I wouldn't pay much attention to.

✓ But in personal everyday life, I don't pay much attention to it.

Use consistent present tense for habitual actions: 'don't pay' instead of 'wouldn't pay' which sounds conditional. 'I wouldn't pay much attention to' is unfinished; add 'it' to complete the object. Reorder phrase to 'personal everyday life' for clarity.