Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant with a topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, correct small grammar issues and use plural/singular agreement (e.g., "allows me to unwind" and "different genres"). Add one brief example to be more specific and avoid redundancy (drop "favorite" + "hobby" duplication). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me unwind and escape daily stress. I especially like science fiction and history; for example, I recently read a historical biography that gave me new insights into World War II.

제안: Good direct response and reasons provided. Fix grammar and wording ("I much prefer reading on paper", "I find it more comfortable for my eyes", "distractions that come"). Add a concise linking word (e.g., "because" or "therefore") and a brief specific example of a distraction to make it more concrete.

예시: I much prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable for my eyes and I can concentrate better. For example, when I read on a tablet I often get distracted by notifications and social media, which breaks my focus.

제안: The answer addresses the question directly but has repetition and grammar mistakes ("missing even one small detail", remove duplicate words "on even", use one modal "can" or "could"). Add a contrasting example of when careful reading is not necessary and use a linking word (e.g., "however"). Keep it concise.

예시: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents like contracts or official emails because missing even one small detail could cause serious problems. However, I don't read carefully when I'm skimming news headlines or casual social media posts.

제안: The idea is clear but there are several pronunciation/spelling and grammar errors: use "scanning" (not "skiing"), correct sentence structure ("when I need to find information quickly, such as during exams or when searching online"). Use a linking word (e.g., "for example") and give one specific instance of how scanning helps. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I generally prefer scanning when I need to find information quickly, for example during exams or when I'm searching for facts online. Scanning helps me locate keywords fast so I can save time and focus on the most relevant parts.

× Absolutely, reading is one of my favorite hobbies because it allows me unwind and escape from my daily stress.

✓ Absolutely, reading is one of my favorite hobbies because it allows me to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

Missing to before verb: after 'allows me' the correct structure is 'allows me to + base verb'. Add 'to' before 'unwind' to form the infinitive 'to unwind'. This fixes the verb pattern and makes the sentence grammatical.

× I enjoy exploring different genre like science fiction and history.

✓ I enjoy exploring different genres like science fiction and history.

Count noun 'genre' should be plural when referring to more than one type; use 'genres'. Also 'different' modifies plural noun. This fixes number agreement between adjective and noun.

× Personally I much prefer reading on paper.

✓ Personally, I much prefer reading on paper.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Personally'. While not strictly a verb tense error, punctuation improves clarity. The present tense 'prefer' is correct; add comma for natural flow.

× I find it for more comfortable for my eyes, plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that comes with digital devices.

✓ I find it far more comfortable for my eyes, plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that come with digital devices.

Use 'far' instead of 'for' to mean 'much more'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'distractions' is plural so use 'come' not 'comes'. These correct word choice and agreement errors.

× I definitely need to read carefully when I'm dealing with important documents such as contracts or official e-mail.

✓ I definitely need to read carefully when I'm dealing with important documents such as contracts or official emails.

Hyphenation/spelling: 'e-mail' is acceptable but 'emails' or 'email' as plural is more common. Use plural 'emails' to match 'documents'. Tense and structure are otherwise correct.

× Missing even on even a small detail in this situation can could lead to serious mistakes.

✓ Missing even a small detail in this situation could lead to serious mistakes.

Extra words: remove redundant 'on' and one of the modal verbs. Use a single modal 'could' to indicate possibility. Also collapse 'even on even' to 'even a' for correct phrasing.

× I generally prefer skiing when I find when I need to find information quickly, especially during exams or I'm searching for in something online.

✓ I generally prefer skimming when I need to find information quickly, especially during exams or when I'm searching for something online.

Wrong word: 'skiing' should be 'skimming' (reading quickly). Remove duplicate 'when' and correct word order: 'when I'm searching for something online'. Also remove extra preposition 'in'. This fixes word choice and sentence structure.