Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar, give a brief reason or example. Keep answer concise (1–3 sentences). Avoid errors like “news book.” Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail. For example, say what types of books you like or how often you read.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often visit bookstores to look for new novels, especially contemporary fiction, and I usually buy one book every month.

제안: Correct pronunciation and grammar (read, not lead). Start with a clear preference sentence, then contrast with a reason using a linking word (but, however). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy turning the pages and the physical feel of a book. However, I often read on a screen nowadays because my work requires me to read articles and documents online.

제안: Use clearer structure: state when you read carefully, give a specific example and reason, then contrast with when you skim. Fix grammar (read, academic, complicated). Use linking words like because and while.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm studying academic books because I must understand complex details and concepts. By contrast, I don’t read carefully when I read fiction; I usually skim or read for pleasure.

제안: Be concise and organized. Give a clear preference, explain why with a specific reason, and avoid vague, repetitive phrasing. Correct grammar (detailed reading, sometimes, habit, remind). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to fully understand and remember the ideas, so I often reread passages. This habit helps me remember important points, even though it can be time-consuming.

× Yes I do. I often visit the bookstore to find the news book.

✓ Yes, I do. I often visit the bookstore to find new books.

'News' is an uncountable noun meaning current events; the intended word is the adjective 'new'. Also 'book' should be plural 'books' because someone visiting a bookstore looks for books in general. Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken punctuation.

× I prefer to lead on a paper because I love the feel that we turn the book page, but can deny that this day I have to lead on the screen more than a book because I have to work on this.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I love the feeling of turning the pages, but I must admit that nowadays I have to read on a screen more than a book because of my work.

The main verb should be 'read' not 'lead' (spelling). 'Feel' should be the noun 'feeling' and 'turn the book page' should be 'turning the pages' (gerund and natural phrase). 'Can deny' is incorrect; use 'must admit' or 'cannot deny' depending on meaning. 'This day' is awkward; use 'nowadays'. 'Have to work on this' is unclear; 'because of my work' fits better. Also add 'I' before 'must admit' for subject clarity.

× I concentrate when I'm leading carefully, when I have to read a academic book to make me understand the detail of the complicated thing, and I do not do it when I lead a fiction.

✓ I concentrate when I'm reading carefully, for example when I have to read an academic book to understand the details of a complicated topic, and I do not do this when I read fiction.

Use 'reading' not 'leading' (spelling). 'A academic' should be 'an academic' due to vowel sound. 'To make me understand' is awkward; use 'to understand'. 'The detail' should be plural 'the details' or 'details'. 'Complicated thing' is better as 'complicated topic'. 'Lead a fiction' should be 'read fiction'. Replace 'do it' with 'do this' for clarity.

× I kind of like the person that detail reading because when I read a book sometime I have an obsession to read it again and again and it is like in my habit I don't want to do this but is going like this. I don't know why but I think because I want to remind.

✓ I kind of like detailed reading because sometimes when I read a book I become obsessed with reading it again and again. It's a habit I don't want to have, but it happens. I don't know why, but I think it's because I want to remember.

'The person that detail reading' is ungrammatical; the intended idea is 'detailed reading' (adjective). Use 'sometimes' not 'sometime'. 'I have an obsession to read' should be 'I become obsessed with reading'. 'It is like in my habit' is awkward; use 'It's a habit I don't want to have'. 'Is going like this' -> 'it happens'. 'I want to remind' should be 'I want to remember'. Overall sentence structure was confusing; breaking into shorter sentences improves clarity.