Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and grammatical by using a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "educational" and "add more knowledge" convey similar ideas). Use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new things and broaden my perspective. For example, I often read short non‑fiction articles about history and science, which I can apply to my studies and conversations.

제안: Give a clear preference or explain a balanced view with linking words. Correct grammar ("faster" not "more faster", add articles and verbs). Keep to two or three sentences and be specific about why each format is better.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen for convenience because it's faster and easy to carry many books. However, I find paper books more comfortable for long reading sessions since they reduce eye strain and feel nicer to hold.

제안: Answer directly with a topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, mmm), and explain reasons using linking words. Be specific about what makes the text require careful reading and give an example of when skimming is acceptable.

예시: I need to read carefully when studying historical or technical texts because they contain complex facts and dates that I must remember. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when browsing social media or news headlines where I just need the main idea.

제안: Use the correct vocabulary ("detailed reading" not "detailed treating") and give a brief reason with a linking word. Expand slightly to show ability to compare approaches within the five‑sentence limit.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand ideas fully and remember important points. However, when I am short on time I sometimes scan texts to find only the key information.

× Yes, I really like reading, it's a very educational and add more knowledge.

✓ Yes, I really like reading; it's very educational and adds knowledge.

The phrase 'add more knowledge' is incorrect because 'add' needs to agree with singular subject 'it' and should be 'adds'. Also 'very educational' is correct but 'a very educational' before an uncountable idea is unnecessary; remove the article 'a'. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'it adds knowledge' or 'it helps me gain more knowledge'.

× I think it's very popular hobby.

✓ I think it's a very popular hobby.

The noun 'hobby' is singular and needs an article. 'Very popular' modifies the singular noun, so include the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: 'a very popular hobby' or 'a popular pastime'.

× I like to read on a screen because it's more faster than on paper, but for me more comfortable read on paper books.

✓ I like to read on a screen because it's faster than reading on paper, but for me it is more comfortable to read paper books.

'More faster' is incorrect; 'faster' is the comparative form and should not be preceded by 'more'. Also 'read on paper' needs the gerund 'reading' or 'to read' construction. 'For me more comfortable read on paper books' is ungrammatical: add subject 'it is' and infinitive 'to read', and 'paper books' is acceptable. Suggestion: 'it's faster than reading on paper, but I find reading paper books more comfortable.'

× I must read carefully, uh, historical books, uh, there are so many difficult information that I need to. MMM, Remember, memorize.

✓ I must read historical books carefully because there is so much difficult information that I need to remember and memorize.

Placement of 'carefully' should follow the verb phrase 'read'. 'There are so many difficult information' is incorrect: 'information' is uncountable, so use 'there is' and 'much' instead of 'many'. Also 'that I need to.' is incomplete; supply verbs 'to remember and memorize'. Combine 'remember' and 'memorize' appropriately (they are similar; choose one or explain difference). Suggestion: 'I must read historical books carefully because there is a lot of difficult information I need to remember.'

× I prefer detailed treating. I like it.

✓ I prefer detailed reading. I like it.

The noun 'treating' is inappropriate here; the correct noun contrasting 'scanning' is 'detailed reading'. Use 'reading' as the noun form. Suggestion: 'I prefer detailed reading' or 'I prefer to read in detail.'