Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınız təbii və müsbət olsa da, çoxlu dayanmalar (“umm”, “uh”) və təkrarlanan fikirlər cavabın axıcılığına və səlisliyinə mənfi təsir edir. Mövzu cümləsi daha qısa və aydın olmalı, dəstək verən cümlələr konkret səbəblər və nümunələrlə genişləndirilməlidir. Həmçinin maksimum 3-4 cümlə ilə və keçid sözlərindən (for example, because, therefore) istifadə edərək daha səliqəli struktur yaradın.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading a wide range of books. For example, I often read history and fiction because they teach me new ideas and help me relax after a busy day. Therefore, reading is both educational and enjoyable for me.

제안: Cavabınız konkret və mövzuya uyğun olsa da, dil xətaları (reading screen→reading on a screen; I can't concentrate myself→I can't concentrate) və təkrarlamalar var. Cümlələri daha düzgün qrammatik struktura salın və bir və ya iki dəstək cümləsi ilə səbəb göstərin. Keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin (because, however) və söz ehtiyatını bir az zənginləşdirin.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and helps me focus better. When I read on a screen, I get distracted easily and my eyes tire quickly, so paper is much easier for long reading sessions.

제안: Cavabınız mövzunu aydın izah edir, lakin ifadədə qrammatik və stil səhvləri var (a story books→story books or a story book; read carefully the books→read books carefully). Dayanmaları və sözdüzülüşünü azaldın, konkret nümunə və səbəb əlavə edin. İki əsas halı aydın ayırmaq üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin (for example, whereas, when).

예시: I don't need to read stories very carefully because I mainly enjoy the plot and characters. However, when I study history or academic material, I read carefully to understand dates, facts and arguments, since accuracy is important for exams.

제안: Fikriniz aydındır, amma çox təkrarlamalar və qrammatik uyğunsuzluq var (if they if they import→if the information is important; isn't necessary very much→isn't very important). Cümlələri daha qısa və düzgün strukturda təqdim edin, səbəb-nəticə əlaqəsini aydın ifadə edin və nümunə gətirin.

예시: I'm generally an impatient person, so I prefer scanning texts to find the main points quickly. However, if the information is important—such as study material or detailed instructions—I switch to careful, detailed reading.

× I feel umm, me so comfortable and so umm, enjoyable.

✓ I feel very comfortable and enjoy it.

The reflexive pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used; the correct structure is 'I feel comfortable' and use the verb 'enjoy' to express enjoyment. Use 'very' for emphasis rather than 'so umm'. Təklif: 'I feel very comfortable and enjoy it.' ifadəsini istifadə edin.

× I really like reading different types of books because when I'm reading books, umm, firstly, I learn a lot of things from the books and the secondly, uh, I feel umm, me so comfortable and so umm, enjoyable.

✓ I really like reading different types of books because when I'm reading them, firstly, I learn a lot from the books and secondly, I feel very comfortable and enjoy it.

Redundant words and incorrect articles/phrasing: 'a lot of things' can be reduced to 'a lot' and 'the secondly' is wrong; use 'secondly'. Also replace repeated 'books' with 'them' to avoid repetition. Təklif: 'I really like reading different types of books because when I'm reading them, firstly, I learn a lot from the books and secondly, I feel very comfortable and enjoy it.'.

× I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier than reading screen, uh, it helps me read something comfortable and, uh, in easy form.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier than reading on a screen; it helps me read more comfortably and more easily.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'a screen'. Use adverbs 'more comfortably' and 'more easily' instead of awkward phrases 'read something comfortable' and 'in easy form'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. Təklif: 'I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier than reading on a screen; it helps me read more comfortably and more easily.'.

× Also, when I'm reading on on a screen, I can't concentrate myself very well.

✓ Also, when I'm reading on a screen, I can't concentrate very well.

The reflexive 'myself' is unnecessary with 'concentrate'; 'concentrate' is intransitive here. Also there is a duplicated 'on'. Təklif: 'Also, when I'm reading on a screen, I can't concentrate very well.'.

× For example, when I'm reading a story books, I don't need to concentrate very much, but when I'm reading, uh, history or when I'm learning something important for my education, I really need, uh, to read carefully the books.

✓ For example, when I'm reading story books, I don't need to concentrate very much, but when I'm reading history or when I'm learning something important for my education, I really need to read the books carefully.

Mismatch 'a story books' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'books'; use 'story books' or 'a story book'. Also word order: place 'carefully' after the object 'the books' or better 'read the books carefully'. Təklif: 'For example, when I'm reading story books, I don't need to concentrate very much, but when I'm reading history or when I'm learning something important for my education, I really need to read the books carefully.'.

× I'm a little bit impatient person, that's why generally I prefer scanning instead of detailed reading, because if they if they import, if the information isn't necessary very much, I just prefer scanning, but if there's something is important, I read.

✓ I'm a little impatient person; that's why I generally prefer skimming instead of detailed reading, because if the information isn't very important, I just skim, but if something is important, I read it carefully.

Use 'a little impatient' rather than 'a little bit impatient person' or say 'I'm a little impatient'. 'Scanning' is acceptable but 'skimming' is more natural. Remove duplicated 'if they if they import' and correct 'isn't necessary very much' to 'isn't very important'. Add object 'it' after 'read'. Təklif: 'I'm a little impatient person; that's why I generally prefer skimming instead of detailed reading, because if the information isn't very important, I just skim, but if something is important, I read it carefully.'.