Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g. "I love reading books"), and give one specific supporting detail. Use a linking phrase if adding a reason.

예시: Yes, I love reading books. I especially enjoy historical novels because they help me understand different cultures and make me feel more knowledgeable, so I usually carry a book with me when I travel.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain with two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases ("I'm an old paper") and filler words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier on my eyes and I enjoy the physical feel of turning pages. However, I know many people prefer screens for convenience and portability.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence that contrasts the two situations. Use specific examples (e.g., study materials vs. novels) and linking words such as "when" or "but". Correct verb forms and reduce hesitations.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for exams or reading technical information because accuracy matters. But I don't read carefully when I'm reading light fiction for enjoyment; I skim more and focus on the plot.

제안: Provide a clear, structured answer: state both preferences and when you use each, with clear linking words and correct grammar. Give specific examples (e.g., textbooks vs. novels). Avoid fragmented sentences.

예시: It depends on the purpose. For my major subjects I read in detail to fully understand concepts, but for most novels or newspapers I usually scan to get the main ideas quickly and avoid stress.

× Absolutely, I love this reading a book, uh, I learn I really like feel smart so I always bring a book.

✓ Absolutely, I love reading books. I feel smart when I learn, so I always bring a book.

The original sentence uses 'this reading a book' incorrectly and mixes clauses. Use the gerund 'reading' without 'this' for general habit and plural 'books' for general preference (article error). Also restructure to separate ideas: 'I feel smart when I learn' clarifies meaning and fixes article misuse. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and split into clear sentences.

× I prefer paper because I'm an old paper, but these days money many people is prefer on screen.

✓ I prefer paper because I like physical books, but these days many people prefer screens.

'I'm an old paper' is incorrect pronoun and noun usage; likely meant 'I like physical books' or 'I'm old-fashioned.' 'Money' is a wrong word (should be 'many'), and 'many people is prefer' has wrong verb form and pronoun agreement. Corrected to 'many people prefer screens' to fix pronoun/noun misuse and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('people', 'screens') and match verb forms to the subject.

× So about uh because it's more comfortable, better than paper, but I like paper.

✓ Screens are more comfortable and better than paper in many ways, but I still like paper.

The fragment 'it's more comfortable, better than paper' is vague and has unclear subject 'it'. Make the subject explicit ('screens') and use parallel comparative structure ('more comfortable and better than'). Also add conjunction to contrast preference. Suggestion: state the subject clearly and use parallel adjectives.

× I always need to care for umm maybe if fair information in book so.

✓ I always need to read carefully, for example, if there is important information in a book.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'need to care for' and 'maybe if fair information' are incorrect structures. Use 'read carefully' to express the intended meaning and add 'if there is important information' with proper 'there is' construction. Suggestion: use 'there is' for existence and 'read carefully' for the action.

× It is very different what I want. I'm leading my major books, I'm very detailed and reading.

✓ It depends on what I want. When I'm reading books for my major, I read very carefully and in detail.

'It is very different what I want' is awkward; use 'It depends on what I want.' 'I'm leading my major books' misuses 'leading' (should be 'reading' or 'when I'm reading books for my major'). 'Very detailed and reading' is incorrect combination; use adverbial phrase 'read very carefully and in detail.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms and adverb placement with -ing only when appropriate.

× But. Most books I read very scanning because no bursts stress.

✓ But for most books I scan quickly because they are not stressful or urgent.

Fragmented 'But.' is incorrect sentence structure. 'Most books I read very scanning' misuses verb forms; use 'I scan' or 'I scan quickly.' 'No bursts stress' is unclear; likely intended 'not stressful' or 'not urgent.' Correct tense and choice of adjectives to make meaning clear. Suggestion: use simple present 'I scan' for habitual action and clear adjectives.