Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid unclear words (e.g. “hurtful”) and grammar mistakes, and limit to up to 4–5 sentences. Use simple linking words (because, so) and provide one or two specific examples of what you read. Also correct basic grammar (I love reading; it enhances my knowledge).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read in my leisure time because I have a hectic job, so I try to read whenever I get a spare hour. I prefer non-fiction books and articles about personal development because they help me improve my skills and thinking. For example, last month I finished a book about time management that gave me useful tips for my daily routine.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then give a clear reason and one short specific example. Avoid filler words (uh, like) and small grammar errors (it depends on the importance of the document). Use linking words (however, for example) to make structure clear.

예시: It depends on the situation. For important documents such as bank forms or contracts, I prefer reading on paper because it is easier to notice details and sign safely. However, for casual reading or news I usually use my phone or tablet since it is more convenient when I am commuting.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence and finish your thought. Give one or two concise reasons and an example. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (before signing an agreement). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I need to read carefully when I deal with legal or financial documents, such as loan agreements or contracts, because small mistakes can cause problems later. In contrast, when I read for relaxation or entertainment, I read more casually and do not pay close attention to every detail. For instance, I skim social media posts but read contract terms word by word before signing.

제안: Start with a clear statement (I use both techniques) then explain when you use each with linking words (when, however). Fix wording: ‘read in detail’ rather than ‘read in briefly’. Be specific about types of texts and give a short example. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases.

예시: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on the text. When I am short on time or the material is not important, I scan to get the main idea quickly. However, for contracts, official emails or technical articles I read in detail to avoid mistakes. For example, I scan news headlines but read product manuals carefully before using new equipment.

× I am hurtful person who love readings in in their leisure time because as you know right now I'm working as it is feature.

✓ I am a helpful person who loves reading in my leisure time because, as you know, right now I'm working as a teacher.

Errors: missing article before 'helpful person', wrong adjective 'hurtful' vs 'helpful', subject-verb agreement 'who loves', incorrect noun form 'readings' -> 'reading', repeated 'in', wrong pronoun 'their' -> 'my', unclear phrase 'working as it is feature' likely 'working as a teacher'. Suggestions: use the correct adjective meaning, include the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun, ensure verb agrees with singular subject, use the gerund 'reading' for activity, correct pronouns to match speaker, and clarify occupation phrase. Note: I corrected to 'helpful' assuming the intended meaning; if another adjective was meant, replace accordingly.

× I have a hectic schedule but I do not get enough time.

✓ I have a hectic schedule but I do not get enough time.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is grammatically correct. It was included to confirm subject-verb agreement: 'I have' and 'I do not get' are correct.

× But whenever I get a chance I would like to read something because it enhance my knowledge as well as my consideration power.

✓ But whenever I get a chance, I like to read something because it enhances my knowledge as well as my power of concentration.

Errors: modal 'would like' is not wrong but 'like' fits habitual action; missing comma after introductory clause; verb agrees 'enhances' for singular impersonal 'it' or better 'it' referring to reading; 'consideration power' is incorrect collocation, use 'power of concentration' or 'ability to concentrate'. Suggestion: use correct verb agreement and choose accurate collocations for clarity.

× Honestly speaking, it totally relies on time as well as important of work.

✓ Honestly speaking, it totally depends on the time and the importance of the work.

Errors: 'relies on' is normally 'depends on' for situations; missing articles 'the time' and 'the importance'; 'important of work' is incorrect noun form; use 'importance of the work'. Suggestion: use 'depends on' and include definite articles when referring to specific things.

× If I have to read some important papers like bank papers, contract paper, agreements paper, then I prefer to read on paper instead of screening.

✓ If I have to read important documents like bank papers, contracts, or agreements, then I prefer to read on paper instead of on a screen.

Errors: pluralization and word choice: 'important papers' -> 'important documents', mix of singular/plural 'contract paper, agreements paper' -> 'contracts or agreements'; 'read on paper instead of screening' incorrect verb/noun usage -> 'on a screen'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and standard terms ('documents', 'contracts'), and use 'on a screen' for digital reading.

× But in case uh, I'm just uh, reading for to kill my leisure time, then I prefer to read on screen and sometimes on paper.

✓ But in case I'm just reading to pass my leisure time, then I prefer to read on a screen and sometimes on paper.

Errors: extra filler words removed for clarity; 'reading for to kill my leisure time' is ungrammatical — use 'reading to pass my leisure time' or 'to kill time'; 'on screen' -> 'on a screen'. Suggestion: use 'to' + verb for purpose and include article with 'screen'.

× As I mentioned earlier, in case of important documents, then I prefer to read carefully before signature the agreement or before signature any contract like bank, loans, documents, any other anything else.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, in the case of important documents, I prefer to read carefully before signing an agreement or signing any contract related to banks, loans, or other matters.

Errors: 'in case of' should be 'in the case of' for this meaning; 'before signature the agreement' is wrong form — use 'before signing the agreement'; article use: 'an agreement'; awkward word list 'bank, loans, documents' clarified to 'banks, loans, or other matters'. Suggestion: use gerund 'signing' after 'before' and include appropriate articles and parallel list structure.

× But in case of uh, reading for my to overcome my stress, then I'm just keeping the.

✓ But if I am reading to overcome my stress, then I'm just relaxing.

Errors: ungrammatical structure 'reading for my to overcome my stress' should be 'reading to overcome my stress'; incomplete clause 'I'm just keeping the.' needs completion — likely 'relaxing' or 'calming down'. Suggestion: use 'reading to' for purpose and complete the sentence with the appropriate verb describing the action.

× I prefer both scanning in that case is when I do not have enough time and, uh, if something not important, but in important documents, I always prefer to read in briefly so that I do not make any mistake for that.

✓ I prefer both. I scan when I do not have enough time or if something is not important, but for important documents I always prefer to read carefully so that I do not make any mistakes later.

Errors: run-on and unclear phrasing. 'Prefer both scanning in that case is when' restructured; missing 'is' in 'if something not important' -> 'if something is not important'; 'in briefly' wrong -> 'carefully' or 'in detail'; 'for that' unclear -> 'later' or 'in the future'. Suggestion: break into sentences, ensure needed verbs, and choose correct adverb ('carefully' or 'in detail') for detailed reading context.

× Uh, I have to be worried about in future. So I can say that, uh, I do both as per.

✓ I'm worried about mistakes in the future. So I can say that I do both, depending on the situation.

Errors: 'I have to be worried about in future' is ungrammatical — use 'I'm worried about mistakes in the future'; 'do both as per' is incomplete/casual — use 'depending on the situation'. Suggestion: express concerns with correct tense and include the object ('mistakes'), and use 'depending on' to indicate variability.