Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp hơn, ngắn gọn và dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác. Tránh lỗi chia động từ (ví dụ: 'readings' -> 'reading', 'I reading' -> 'I read'), và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: đưa câu chủ đề, rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể và lý do. Hạn chế dài dòng và lặp từ. Ngoài ra, dùng từ phù hợp hơn (ví dụ: 'psychology' thay vì 'psychologist').

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read novels and sometimes books about psychology because they help me relax and understand human behavior better.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do rõ ràng. Sửa lỗi cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'prefer to choose' -> 'prefer', 'readings with my piece' unclear, 'ring' likely 'phone' or 'screen'). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp ('hold a book', 'feel comfortable', 'read on a screen'). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu và dùng liên từ nếu cần.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I like the physical feel of holding a book and it helps me concentrate. However, I sometimes read on my phone when I’m commuting.

제안: Phát biểu rõ ràng hơn: nêu tình huống cần đọc kỹ và tình huống không cần. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng ('starting for exam' -> 'preparing for an exam', 'your concept' -> 'the concepts', 'skip the test' -> 'scan', 'downgrade every word' -> 'don’t read every word'). Dùng liên từ như 'whereas' hoặc 'but' để so sánh. Giữ câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc.

예시: I need to read carefully when I’m preparing for an exam because I must understand concepts and remember details. But when I’m just browsing news or checking emails, I usually scan the text and don’t read every word.

제안: Trả lời nên rõ ràng: nêu sở thích chính rồi giải thích bằng ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng ('If I have to show' unclear, 'detail readings' -> 'detailed reading', 'need to can in' unclear). Nên dùng cấu trúc như 'I prefer detailed reading when... but I often scan when...'. Giới hạn 2-3 câu trọng tâm.

예시: I prefer detailed reading when I study or research because it helps me understand complex information. However, I often scan texts when I’m short on time and just need the main idea.

× I definitely enjoy readings, I usually read the novels and sometimes I reading the book on.

✓ I definitely enjoy reading. I usually read novels and sometimes read a book on-site.

The noun 'readings' is incorrect here; the gerund 'reading' or the plural 'books' is appropriate. 'the novels' should be 'novels' unless referring to specific novels. 'I reading the book' is ungrammatical; use the base verb 'read' or 'am reading'. 'on-site' is the correct adjective form. Suggestions: use 'reading' for the activity, drop unnecessary articles, and use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I usually read novels').

× On site psychologist because it's helped me to relax and understand.

✓ On-site psychology because it has helped me to relax and understand.

'Psychologist' (a person) is incorrect in context; likely intended 'psychology' (the subject). 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' as the present perfect. Use 'on-site' as a compound adjective. Suggestion: choose the correct noun and use the present perfect 'has helped' to indicate past actions with present relevance.

× If I have to choose, I would prefer to choose the reading on paper because I enjoy the feel when I hold it, the book on my hands and readings with my piece and I feel comfortable.

✓ If I have to choose, I would prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the feel when I hold the book in my hands and feel comfortable.

Redundant 'prefer to choose' and awkward 'the reading on paper' should be 'reading on paper'. 'the book on my hands' should be 'the book in my hands'. 'readings with my piece' is unclear; likely 'and feel at peace' or simply 'and feel comfortable'. Suggestion: remove redundancy and use correct preposition 'in my hands' and clear phrases like 'feel at peace'.

× Then I read it on the ring.

✓ Then I read it in the evening.

'on the ring' is meaningless here; likely a mispronunciation of 'in the evening' or 'in bed'. Choose an appropriate time expression. Suggestion: replace with a correct time phrase such as 'in the evening' or 'before bed'.

× When I'm starting for exam I need to read carefully because I have to concentrate fully to understand your concept and remember details.

✓ When I'm studying for an exam I need to read carefully because I have to concentrate fully to understand the concepts and remember details.

'starting for exam' is incorrect; use 'studying for an exam' or 'preparing for an exam'. 'your concept' is wrong pronoun and singular; use 'the concepts' or 'a concept' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'studying' for the activity and plural 'concepts' when talking generally.

× But when I just browsing news or checking e-mail I usually skip the test and downgrade every word.

✓ But when I'm just browsing the news or checking email I usually skim and ignore most words.

'when I just browsing' needs auxiliary: 'when I'm just browsing'. 'news' often takes 'the' in this context. 'skip the test' and 'downgrade every word' are incorrect collocations; better 'skim' and 'ignore most words'. Suggestion: use correct progressive form and appropriate verbs 'skim'/'ignore'.

× If I have to show, I would like to detail readings, but actually I don't have time to read every word.

✓ If I have to show, I would like to do detailed reading, but actually I don't have time to read every word.

'detail readings' is incorrect; use 'detailed reading' or 'read in detail'. 'If I have to show' is unclear—perhaps 'If I have to study' or 'If I have to present'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and choose clear verbs like 'study' or 'read in detail'.

× When I research some story and learn something, I need to can in and make the general idea.

✓ When I research a topic and want to learn something, I need to scan it and form a general idea.

'research some story' should be 'research a topic' or 'research a story'. 'I need to can in' is ungrammatical; likely 'scan it'. 'make the general idea' should be 'form a general idea'. Suggestion: use correct collocations 'research a topic', 'scan', and 'form an idea'.