Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say you enjoy reading, mention what you read and why, and give a brief example.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading; it’s one of my favorite hobbies. I mainly read novels and non-fiction books because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, I often read history books to understand different cultures.

제안: Be more fluent and concise: remove hesitations, use correct vocabulary (‘e-books’, ‘online magazines’), and explain reason with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include a specific advantage.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen, such as e-books and online magazines, because it’s more convenient. For example, I can carry hundreds of books on my tablet and search for keywords quickly.

제안: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct verb forms, articles, and clearer linking words (e.g., 'when'/'but'). Give specific examples of tasks requiring careful reading and contrast with casual reading for leisure.

예시: I need to read carefully when I’m doing university assignments or official reports because accuracy matters. However, when I read short news stories or humorous articles for fun, I don’t concentrate as much.

제안: Organize your answer: state a clear preference or say you use both depending on purpose, then give specific reasons and a concise example. Correct tense and phrase usage, avoid repetitive words, and link ideas logically.

예시: It depends on the situation: I use detailed reading for critical material like research articles because I need to understand everything. But when I’m reviewing many documents quickly, for example while preparing for a health test, I prefer scanning to find key information fast.

× Yes, I prefer reading, it is one of my favorite hobby and I read book a lot.

✓ Yes, I prefer reading; it is one of my favorite hobbies and I read books a lot.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural ('hobbies') because 'one of my favorite' refers to one item in a group. 'Book' should be plural ('books') when speaking generally about reading many books. Also a semicolon or conjunction improves sentence flow.

× Also sometimes I read articles near news.

✓ Also, sometimes I read news articles.

The preposition 'near' is incorrect here. Use 'news articles' to combine the noun and adjective correctly and place 'sometimes' after a comma for clarity.

× I personally prefer, uh, electronic, uh, book and also electric magazine and because, uh, now in this modern era, technology make it easier to read everything.

✓ I personally prefer electronic books and online magazines because, in this modern era, technology makes it easier to read everything.

Use 'electronic books' (plural) and 'online magazines' (more natural than 'electric magazine'). Remove filler 'uh'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'technology' (subject-verb agreement). Also combine clauses with 'because' and place commas appropriately.

× Honestly, when I do any university assignment or my official work this time I need to concern more.

✓ Honestly, when I do any university assignment or official work, I need to be more careful and pay more attention.

The phrase 'need to concern more' is incorrect; use 'need to be more careful' or 'need to pay more attention'. Add commas for clarity and remove 'this time' which is awkward in this context.

× But when I reading some article or some funny things this time I don't need to more concentrate.

✓ But when I read some articles or light, amusing things, I don't need to concentrate as much.

Use base form 'read' after 'when' (correct verb form), make nouns plural ('articles'), and use 'concentrate as much' rather than 'need to more concentrate'. 'This time' is unnecessary and awkward.

× I love both, especially when I do any critical things and I get interest anything on anything.

✓ I love both, especially when I do critical tasks and find something interesting.

'Any critical things' is awkward; use 'critical tasks'. 'I get interest anything on anything' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'find something interesting'.

× There's time I prefer to details but now last few days I had take it have been taking preparation for my health test so this time I need to more concerned about for scanning.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to read in detail, but in the last few days I have been preparing for my health test, so recently I have needed to focus more on scanning.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'There's time' -> 'Sometimes'; 'prefer to details' -> 'prefer to read in detail'; 'last few days I had take it have been taking preparation' is incorrect—use present perfect continuous 'have been preparing'. 'Need to more concerned about for scanning' should be 'have needed to focus more on scanning'. Ensure tense consistency and proper prepositions.