Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは肯定的で理由も述べていますが、文法の誤りや冗長さがあります。短く明確なトピック文を作り、理由と具体例を1つ追加してください。接続語（because, and, especially）を正しく使い、不要な語を省くことを意識しましょう。例えば、‘that may it makes me feel excited’ の代わりに ‘because they excite me’ と言うと自然です。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading both books and comics because they excite me. For example, I like romance novels for their emotional stories, and I read comedy comics to relax after a long day.

제안: 答えは明確で理由も述べていますが、最後の文が不完全で語彙の選択や文法が不自然です。ひとつの意見（紙が好き）を示した後、理由は2つ以内にまとめ、接続語でつなげてください。また感覚を表す表現は簡潔に表現しましょう。

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and helps me concentrate. Turning physical pages gives me a better sense of progress, which I find satisfying.

제안: 質問には概ね答えていますが、文法の混乱と不完全な文が多く、意図がわかりにくくなっています。まずは簡潔な主題文（’I need to read carefully when...’）を作り、その後で具体例（contracts, official emails）と理由（to avoid mistakes or misunderstandings）を明確に述べてください。不要な繰り返しを避け、文を完結させましょう。

예시: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as contracts or official emails, because a small mistake can cause serious problems. In contrast, I don’t read carefully when I’m skimming social media posts or casual messages.

제안: 意見は表されているものの、表現が不自然で失礼に聞こえる可能性があります（’without using brain’）。また文法エラーと語順の問題があります。まずは簡潔な主題文を作り、その後で具体的な状況（例：目的や種類の本）と理由を丁寧に説明してください。適切な語彙（scan, skim, detailed reading）を使いましょう。

예시: I usually prefer scanning or skimming because I often read to find specific information quickly. For example, when I read a novel I might read in detail, but when I search for facts or ideas I just skim the pages.

× 'Yes I do I like reading books and comics because that may it makes me feel excited.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. I like reading books and comics because they make me feel excited.'

'This sentence has incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and mixed pronouns causing awkwardness. The phrase "that may it makes" is grammatically incorrect and redundant. Replace with the plural pronoun "they" to refer back to "books and comics," and use the simple present "make" for habitual feelings. Also add punctuation to separate clauses.'

× 'I especially like books about romance and comics about.'

✓ 'I especially like books about romance and comics about romance.'

'The original sentence is incomplete and uses an adjective phrase without an object. "Comics about" needs a noun to be complete. Repeating "romance" clarifies the intended meaning.'

× 'I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and helps me concentrate better. The sensation of the open opening the next page.'

✓ 'I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and helps me concentrate better. I like the sensation of opening the next page.'

'The second sentence has incorrect word order and a redundant word "open opening." Reordering to "I like the sensation of opening the next page" places words in a natural English order and removes redundancy.'

× 'I I have to read carefully when I look at the important documents such as contract official emails because they are. They are. It is essential for them to avoid.'

✓ 'I have to read carefully when I look at important documents such as contracts and official emails because it is essential to avoid mistakes.'

'This passage has tense and present tense usage issues and sentence structure problems: repeated words ("I I"), missing plural forms ("contract"->"contracts"), and incomplete clauses ("because they are. They are. It is essential for them to avoid"). Use present simple for habitual actions, pluralize nouns when needed, and complete the purpose clause: "because it is essential to avoid mistakes.'

× 'I prefer scanning because I can I can read without using brain. I usually scanning when I read book.'

✓ 'I prefer scanning because I can read without using my brain. I usually scan when I read a book.'

'Issues include verb + -ing form misuse and other errors. "I usually scanning" should be "I usually scan" (auxiliary + base verb or adverb + base verb). Add the possessive "my" before "brain." Use singular article "a" before "book.'