Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and correct tense/word forms (e.g., 'brings', 'a hobby', 'helps me relax'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' only once.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. It brings me a lot of knowledge and new perspectives, and I often read fiction to relax after work.

제안: Make one clear statement of preference, then give a specific reason with correct grammar and a linking phrase. Avoid fillers and fragmented sentences. Use a concise reason such as eye strain or better retention.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because long periods on screens cause eye strain, and I find paper helps me concentrate and remember information better.

제안: Answer both parts clearly: say when careful reading is necessary and when skimming is acceptable. Give specific examples and use linking words (e.g., 'when..., but'). Correct unclear phrases like 'the body' and avoid hesitation.

예시: I need to read carefully when the text contains important facts or instructions, such as contracts or study materials, but I skim when I’m browsing news articles or looking for a specific detail.

제안: Clarify your choice and give a logical reason. 'Scanning' is about locating specific information, so explain how it helps you and avoid contradictory statements. Use proper vocabulary ('skimming' vs 'scanning') and finish your thought without trailing off.

예시: I prefer scanning (or skimming) when I’m looking for key facts or characters’ names because it lets me find information quickly; I do detailed reading only when I need full understanding of the plot or arguments.

× I think reading is really helpful because it bring a lot of knowledge and experience for me to prove myself and reading is one of the most hobby which I can relax in my free time.

✓ I think reading is really helpful because it brings a lot of knowledge and experience to me and reading is one of the hobbies with which I can relax in my free time.

Subject-verb agreement and count noun usage: 'reading' (singular gerund) requires the third person singular verb 'brings' (Grammar problem type ID 27 and 2). Also 'the most hobby' is incorrect because 'hobby' is a countable noun and needs the plural 'hobbies' or a different modifier; 'one of the hobbies' is correct. Use 'to me' rather than 'for me to prove myself' to improve clarity; optionally include 'with which' to connect 'hobbies' and 'I can relax'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and use plural forms for countable nouns when using 'one of the...'.

× I prefer reading on paper to reading on screen because spend too much time on screen can call, uh, some eye problems. For me. I think reading on paper can help me see.

✓ I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because spending too much time on screens can cause some eye problems. For me, I think reading on paper helps my eyesight.

Preposition and verb form errors: use the article 'a' before 'screen' and plural 'screens' with general statements (Grammar problem type ID 17 and 11). 'Spend' should be the gerund 'spending' after 'because'. 'Can call' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'can cause'. Also 'help me see' is awkward; use 'helps my eyesight' or 'helps me see better'. Suggestion: after 'because' use gerund or clause, choose correct verbs like 'cause', and use articles with singular countable nouns or plural for generalization.

× I think I need to read carefully when I come to the body where have a lot of information and the main story and ah forget.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I come to a section that has a lot of information or contains the main story, otherwise I might forget.

Awkward sentence structure and missing words: 'the body where have a lot of information' is ungrammatical; use 'a section that has a lot of information' or 'the body that has a lot of information' (Grammar problem type ID 26). Also 'and ah forget' should be expressed as a consequence 'otherwise I might forget'. Suggestion: use clear relative clauses ('that has') and express consequences with 'otherwise' or 'so that I won't forget'.

× I prefer scanning because I want to make sure that I don't miss any words or any information about the story, the character and moreover, scanning can help me improve my skin skill which.

✓ I prefer scanning because I want to make sure that I don't miss any words or information about the story and the characters; moreover, scanning can help me improve my skimming skills.

Gerund and word choice errors: 'scanning' is fine, but 'the character' should be plural 'the characters' when speaking generally (Grammar problem type ID 1). 'Skin skill' is incorrect; the correct term is 'skimming skill' or 'skimming skills'. Also sentence ending 'which' is incomplete; restructure to a full clause. Suggestion: use gerunds consistently, choose correct term 'skimming', pluralize general nouns, and avoid dangling relative words like 'which' without a clause.