Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You should give a clear direct topic sentence, use correct grammar, avoid hesitations and irrelevant phrases, and provide one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep the answer concise (max 4–5 sentences). Focus on simple, accurate vocabulary (e.g., "reading helps me learn new words").

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I find that reading helps me learn new vocabulary and improves my concentration. For example, I often read short articles on social media and books about technology to stay informed. Therefore, reading is both enjoyable and useful for my personal development.

제안: Respond with a clear preference and give two specific reasons using linking words (because, however, and). Avoid irrelevant brand names and unclear clauses. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it more comfortable and less distracting. Also, paper books help me concentrate better than reading on my phone. However, when I travel, I sometimes use my phone because it is more convenient.

제안: Start with a direct answer about situations requiring careful reading, then give clear examples and reasons with linking words (for example, because, so). Keep sentences short and avoid repetition. Use specific contexts (textbooks, instructions, contracts).

예시: I need to read carefully when I study textbooks or follow instructions because accuracy matters. For example, when I read a history chapter or a scientific article, I read slowly to understand names, dates, and concepts. In contrast, I skim social media posts when I only want a quick idea.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain why with two specific reasons using linking words (because, therefore). Contrast with the alternative briefly. Use correct noun forms (detailed reading) and avoid filler words.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the meaning and remember information. For instance, when preparing for exams I read passages carefully to learn vocabulary and ideas. I use scanning only when I need to find specific facts quickly.

× Yeah, I really like readings because when I read go something in social media.

✓ Yeah, I really like reading because when I read something on social media,

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'reading' not the plural noun 'readings'. Also the phrase 'read go something' is ungrammatical; it should be 'read something'. Use the preposition 'on' with 'social media'. Suggestion: use 'like reading' and 'read something on social media'.

× Feel a guilt and to makes my uh, brand my uh, uh skill like in reading to become a burial that's now especially when we try to read and to learn a new capillary as well as.

✓ I feel guilty and it helps improve my reading skills, especially when I try to read and learn new vocabulary.

This sentence has multiple structure errors: incorrect noun form 'a guilt' (use 'feel guilty'), incorrect verb forms 'to makes', and wrong nouns 'brand', 'burial', 'capillary' that seem intended as 'improve', 'ability', 'vocabulary'. The corrected version simplifies and uses correct verb forms and nouns. Suggestion: identify intended meaning and rewrite using simple clauses: 'I feel guilty and it helps improve my reading skills...'.

× Basically, I prefers on on the papers because when I respond people make feel exciting and feel comfortable and on social media not we don't compare is we call it a good Samsung.

✓ Basically, I prefer paper because when I read physical books I feel excited and comfortable; social media is different and we don't compare them.

Use 'prefer' (not 'prefers') with subject 'I'. 'Papers' is better as 'paper' or 'physical books'. 'Respond people make feel exciting' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I feel excited'. Avoid irrelevant words like 'Samsung'. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb agreement and simpler phrases: 'I prefer paper... I feel excited and comfortable.'

× When we go outside, we don't have a book we can add on social media as well.

✓ When we go outside and don't have a book, we can use social media instead.

Incorrect preposition 'add on' is awkward; use 'use' or 'turn to' social media. Also add conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: 'we can use social media instead.'

× Basically, I try to read carefully because I I just want to know about something in the book that in this book that what I've learned or have I want to know about the book that I had to learn something or to learn vocabulary to learn about the history of someone or in the textbook as well.

✓ Basically, I try to read carefully because I want to learn from the book, such as vocabulary, history, or other information in the textbook.

The original repeats and uses awkward forms. Use simple present 'want' rather than 'have I want'. Use infinitives appropriately: 'to learn vocabulary' rather than 'to learn new something'. Suggestion: simplify and use parallel structure: 'I want to learn... such as vocabulary or history.'

× Because when I try to wait, I try to learn new something.

✓ Because when I read carefully, I try to learn something new.

'Try to wait' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'try to read' or 'when I read'. Word order 'learn new something' should be 'learn something new'. Suggestion: use correct collocation 'learn something new' and keep verb tense consistent.

× So basically I prefer to detail reading because I try to focus on reading then before scanning because like you on the exam I prefer to the scanning manifold.

✓ So basically I prefer detailed reading because I try to focus on reading rather than scanning; on the exam I sometimes prefer scanning.

After 'prefer' use noun or gerund: 'detailed reading' (adjective + noun) or 'reading in detail'. 'Prefer to detail reading' is incorrect. Also 'rather than' is the correct conjunction to contrast. Suggestion: use 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer reading in detail'.

× I have to learn or to gain now likes more. No like I prefer to detail reading as well because happy to.

✓ I need to learn or gain more, but I prefer detailed reading because it makes me happy.

The original contains fragments and unclear phrases ('likes more', 'No like'). Rephrase with clear subjects and verbs: 'I need to learn more' and 'it makes me happy'. Suggestion: combine ideas into coherent sentences and use proper verb forms.