Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Give a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Use one or two linking phrases to connect ideas and provide one specific example of a recent book or author to make your answer more concrete.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading and do it regularly as a hobby. For example, after studying I read novels for about 30 minutes to relax and clear my mind. In particular, I like contemporary mystery novels such as those by Gillian Flynn because they keep me engaged with surprising plot twists.

제안: Clarify vocabulary and correct word choice (e.g., 'Outspring' and awkward phrases). State your preference clearly, then give two concise reasons linked with logical connectors. Use precise words like 'e-books' and avoid contradictory phrases.

예시: I prefer reading on a screen, especially e-books, because they are very convenient. For instance, I can read on my phone or tablet anywhere, and e-books are often cheaper or even free, which gives me access to many more titles.

제안: Use more accurate wording and a clearer contrast. Begin with a direct statement, then use linking words (for example, 'however' or 'whereas') to compare careful reading with skimming. Provide a brief specific example of a legal clause or a menu item to illustrate.

예시: You need to read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as a housing lease that includes clauses about deposits and maintenance responsibilities. However, for low-risk items, such as a coffee shop menu or a social media post, it is fine to skim the information quickly.

제안: Correct word choice and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence stating you use both methods, then explain when you use each with linking words ('when'/'but'). Replace unclear phrases ('feel the reading', 'wants to confuse', 'mean ideas', 'face to face details') with precise language like 'read in detail', 'author's intention', 'main ideas', 'specific facts or dates'.

예시: I use both methods. When I have time, I read in detail to understand the author's main ideas and intentions. But when I need quick information—such as checking train times or finding a specific statistic—I scan the text to locate the exact facts.

× Yes, I read regularly if one of my hobbies.

✓ Yes, I read regularly; it is one of my hobbies.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and a wrong conjunction 'if'. Replace with a clear linking phrase ('it is one of my hobbies') and use a semicolon or a period to join related clauses. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I find reading helps clear my mind, I recharge it.

✓ I find reading helps clear my mind and recharge it.

Two independent clauses were joined with a comma (comma splice). Combine them with a coordinating conjunction ('and') and remove the repeated subject to create a single coherent sentence.

× So after staying study, I usually read novels for about 30 minutes as an essential place to relieve stress.

✓ So after studying, I usually read novels for about 30 minutes as an essential way to relieve stress.

'Staying study' is ungrammatical; use the gerund 'studying'. 'Place' is incorrect in this context; 'way' or 'method' is appropriate. This corrects word choice and sentence structure.

× I essentially enjoy contemporary mysteries and literary features.

✓ I especially enjoy contemporary mysteries and literary fiction.

'Essentially' is the wrong adverb here; 'especially' expresses preference. 'Literary features' is incorrect noun usage; the intended phrase is 'literary fiction'. This fixes word choice and meaning.

× I prefer to read Outspring because ebooks are very possible and convenient.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because ebooks are very portable and convenient.

'Outspring' appears to be an incorrect word; likely 'on a screen' is intended. 'Possible' is wrong; 'portable' correctly describes ebooks. This corrects word choice and clarity.

× I can read anywhere on my phone or tablet.

✓ I can read anywhere on my phone or tablet.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It correctly uses pronouns and prepositions.

× Also, many titles are available for free or at low cost or not, which makes reading more affordable and gives you access to a wider range of resources.

✓ Also, many titles are available for free or at low cost, which makes reading more affordable and gives readers access to a wider range of resources.

The phrase 'or not' is unnecessary and awkward. Replace 'you' with 'readers' to keep a consistent, neutral register. This improves clarity and removes redundancy.

× I think you need to read carefully when you find an important agreement such as a housing or car contract, because those documents contain legal terms as obligations.

✓ I think you need to read carefully when you encounter an important agreement, such as a housing or car contract, because those documents contain legal obligations and terms.

Use 'encounter' rather than 'find' for documents; 'as obligations' is awkward—'legal obligations and terms' is clearer. This corrects preposition/word choice and improves collocation.

× But for low safety, like a coffee menu or a casual poster online, it's fine to judge the skim or scroll through it quickly.

✓ But for low-risk items, like a coffee menu or a casual online poster, it's fine to skim or scroll through them quickly.

'Low safety' is not idiomatic; 'low-risk' is appropriate. 'Judge the skim' is incorrect; use the verb 'skim'. Match plural 'items' with 'them'. This corrects adjective choice, verb usage, and agreement.

× If I have plenty of time, I prefer to feel the reading because I can understand what the author wants to confuse and grasp the mean ideas.

✓ If I have plenty of time, I prefer to read carefully because I can understand what the author wants to convey and grasp the main ideas.

'Feel the reading' is incorrect; use 'read carefully'. 'Wants to confuse' is opposite meaning; use 'wants to convey'. 'Mean ideas' should be 'main ideas'. This fixes multiple word choice and meaning errors and corrects sentence structure.

× But when I need information quickly, for example once researching sets or checking a schedule, I usually scan the text to find the face to face details.

✓ But when I need information quickly, for example when researching or checking a schedule, I usually scan the text to find the specific details.

'Once researching sets' is ungrammatical; use 'when researching'. 'Face to face details' is incorrect and unclear; 'specific details' conveys the intended meaning. This corrects sentence structure and word choice.