Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 문장 흐름을 자연스럽게 고치세요. 복수/단수(a books → a book / books)와 시제·조동사 오류(I have to study at English → I have to study English, it getting a tired → it gets tiring)를 수정하고, 중복 표현을 줄여 한두 문장으로 명확히 답하세요. 또한 연결어와 구체적 정보(어떤 종류의 책을 읽는지 등)를 추가하면 점수가 올라갑니다.

예시: Yes, I love reading. These days I have to study English, so I read a book every day. Sometimes it gets tiring, but I enjoy it because reading helps me learn new vocabulary.

제안: 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 만드세요. 불필요한 반복(And the first, now, now)을 제거하고 선호의 변화를 논리적으로 연결하는 표현을 사용하세요. 예: start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why preference changed with linking words (however, now, because).

예시: At first I preferred reading on paper because I found it easier on my eyes. However, I've gradually changed my habits and now I enjoy both paper and screens, since e-books are convenient when I travel.

제안: 의도 전달이 분명하지 않으니 단어 선택과 문장 구조를 고치세요 (lead → read, shop drawing → technical drawings). 또한 두 가지 상황을 명확히 구분하고 이유를 덧붙이세요. 짧은 주제문과 이유, 예시 순으로 답하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm studying from a textbook or examining technical drawings, because accuracy matters. But in my free time I usually read novels more casually for enjoyment.

제안: 좋은 답변 구조지만 표현을 더 자연스럽게 다듬고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요 (detail reading → detailed reading, that's why → so). 이유를 구체적으로 확장하고 간단한 예시를 추가하면 더욱 설득력 있습니다.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I'm quite organized and like to understand things thoroughly. For example, when I study a topic I take notes and re-read paragraphs to make sure I haven't missed anything.

× Yeah, I love reading a books.

✓ Yeah, I love reading books.

The noun 'books' should be plural without the article 'a' because 'a' is for singular countable nouns. Use either 'a book' (singular) or 'books' (plural). Suggestion: remove 'a' when talking about reading in general: 'I love reading books.'

× These days I have to study at English so I I'm reading a book every day and sometimes it getting a tired but I like reading a book.

✓ These days I have to study English, so I'm reading a book every day and sometimes it gets tiring, but I like reading books.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'study at English' is incorrect preposition and article use; say 'study English.' 'I I'm' has repetition—use 'I'm.' 'it getting a tired' is incorrect: use third person singular present 'it gets' and use adjective form 'tiring' rather than 'a tired.' Also consistency: when speaking generally, use 'reading books' rather than 'a book.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms and collocations: 'study English', 'I'm reading', 'it gets tiring.'

× And the first I like reading, reading on a paper.

✓ At first I liked reading on paper.

'And the first' is incorrect phrasing; use 'At first.' 'on a paper' is wrong article use; say 'on paper' generally without article. Tense adjusted to past 'liked' if referring to initial preference. Suggestion: use 'at first' and 'on paper.'

× But now, now I'm gradually changed.

✓ But now I'm gradually changing.

'Changed' is past participle; with 'gradually' and 'now' you need the present continuous 'I'm gradually changing' to indicate an ongoing process. Suggestion: use present continuous for ongoing change: 'I'm changing.'

× Now I'm both of them like it.

✓ Now I like both of them.

Word order and pronoun use incorrect. 'Both of them' should follow the verb object position: 'I like both of them.' Do not add 'like it.' Suggestion: say 'I like both' or 'I like both of them.'

× When I lead it carefully it is textbook or shop drawing, but except this situation I'm usually reading a book.

✓ When I read carefully, it is for textbooks or shop drawings, but except in those situations I usually read for pleasure.

Several errors: 'lead' should be 'read.' Missing comma after dependent clause. 'it is textbook or shop drawing' is ungrammatical—clarify purpose: 'it is for textbooks or shop drawings.' 'except this situation' should be 'except in those situations.' 'I'm usually reading a book' is awkward; use 'I usually read for pleasure.' Suggestion: correct verb, add prepositions, and clarify meaning.

× Very lovely.

✓ I think they're lovely.

Standalone 'Very lovely' is fragment and not appropriately connected. To express opinion, use a full sentence: 'I think they're lovely' or 'It's very enjoyable.' Suggestion: make it a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× I prefer to detail reading because my personality is a little detailed and organized, so that's why I like detailed reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because my personality is a bit detail-oriented and organized, so that's why I like detailed reading.

'to detail reading' uses incorrect infinitive+noun construction; use 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer to read in detail.' 'a little detailed' is unnatural; use 'a bit detail-oriented.' Suggestion: use 'detail-oriented' or 'reading in detail' for clarity.