Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), and use correct verb forms. Provide one or two specific supporting details (e.g., favorite genres and when you read) and keep to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like "also" or "because" for coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read suspense thrillers and romantic novels because I like stories that keep me guessing, and I have been reading with my mother since childhood, so it’s an important part of my life.

제안: State your preference clearly, correct word choice and grammar (e.g., "it is more convenient," "I can use my imagination"), and link contrasting ideas with "however" or "but." Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a brief reason for each preference.

예시: I prefer reading books on paper because it’s more convenient for me and helps me use my imagination in a quieter environment. However, I usually read news on a screen since it’s faster and more up-to-date.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence addressing both parts. Use correct grammar (e.g., "we have to read for exams") and avoid repetitions. Provide specific examples of "important" materials and contrast them with casual reading using linking words like "whereas" or "but."

예시: I need to read carefully when studying for exams or preparing important documents because I must remember details and avoid mistakes. By contrast, I skim news articles or current affairs for general information since I just want the main points.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use smoother grammar and linking words (e.g., "depending on the purpose"). Give concise, specific examples of when you scan versus read in detail. Keep answers to 2–3 sentences.

예시: It depends on the purpose: for books or academic material I read in detail to understand fully, whereas for newspapers or current affairs I usually scan to catch the main points quickly.

× 'Yes, I do, uh, reading usually actually, I'm a fond of reading, uh, I like to uh, read novel like uh, any suspense thriller or sometimes love stories.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. I usually enjoy reading. I'm fond of reading; I like to read novels, such as suspense thrillers or sometimes love stories.'

'Incorrect use of pronouns' applies because 'I'm a fond of reading' incorrectly uses the article and pronoun structure; 'a fond' is wrong. Also 'read novel' uses singular noun without article. Corrected sentence removes the wrong pronoun/article combination and uses plural 'novels' and appropriate verbs. Suggestion: use 'I'm fond of' (no article) and pluralize countable nouns or add articles when singular.'

× 'And uh yeah, I used to reading, I used to reading with Ma since my childhood.'

✓ 'And yeah, I used to read; I used to read with my mother since my childhood.'

'Verb + -ing form' applies because 'used to' for past habitual actions must be followed by the base form of the verb (read), not the -ing form. Also 'Ma' is better rendered as 'my mother' for clarity. Suggestion: use "used to + base verb" for past habits.'

× 'I like to uh, read novel like uh, any suspense thriller or sometimes love stories.'

✓ 'I like to read novels, such as suspense thrillers or sometimes love stories.'

'Singular and plural issue' applies because 'novel' and 'suspense thriller' should be plural when speaking generally. Use plural forms to indicate types of books. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when referring to categories.'

× 'I prefer to read on paper if, uh, if I'm reading a book because it is convenience and, uh, I can imagination, uh, through books and I can read in, uh, peace environment.'

✓ 'I prefer to read on paper when I'm reading a book because it is convenient, I can use my imagination through books, and I can read in a peaceful environment.'

'Incorrect use of prepositions' fits because 'in peace environment' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'in a peaceful environment'. Also 'because it is convenience' misuses a noun where adjective 'convenient' is required, and 'I can imagination' needs a verb phrase 'use my imagination.' Suggestion: choose correct adjective forms and prepositions and include articles ('a peaceful environment').'

× 'because it is convenience and, uh, I can imagination, uh, through books'

✓ 'because it is convenient, and I can use my imagination through books'

'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' applies as 'convenience' (noun) is incorrectly used where adjective 'convenient' is needed. 'I can imagination' incorrectly places a noun where a verb phrase 'use my imagination' is required. Suggestion: convert nouns to adjectives where necessary and use verb phrases for actions.'

× 'But if I want to, uh, read newspaper, uh, news, then I prefer screen.'

✓ 'But if I want to read the newspaper or news, then I prefer the screen.'

'Article errors' applies because 'read newspaper' and 'prefer screen' need definite articles when referring to a specific medium generally: 'the newspaper' and 'the screen.' Suggestion: use 'the' before newspapers and screens when speaking about a specific format or medium in general contexts.'

× 'Well, I would say whenever we have to reading for exam or any important thing, then I I need to read carefully because I need to remember those.'

✓ 'Well, I would say whenever we have to read for an exam or anything important, then I need to read carefully because I need to remember it.'

'Verb + -ing form' applies because 'have to' must be followed by the base verb 'read' not 'reading.' Additionally, 'exam' requires an article 'an exam' and 'those' referring to information is better as 'it.' Suggestion: use 'have to + base verb' and correct articles and pronouns for clarity.'

× 'But if I'm like reading a news or some something, a Current affair, then I just came the paper, that's it.'

✓ 'But if I'm just reading the news or some current affairs, then I just skim the paper, that's it.'

'Sentence structure errors' apply because the original sentence has word order and word choice problems ('came the paper' is incorrect). 'a Current affair' needs capitalization and article fixes. The intended meaning is likely 'skim the paper.' Suggestion: use correct verbs for the intended action (skim) and correct noun phrases ('the news', 'current affairs').'

× 'If I reading uh, any book or something then I uh, detail. I do detail reading but if I uh, read newspaper or something current affair then I prefer scanning only.'

✓ 'If I'm reading any book or something, then I do detailed reading. But if I read a newspaper or something related to current affairs, then I prefer scanning only.'

'Present tense issue' applies because 'If I reading' is incorrect; use present continuous 'If I'm reading'. 'detail' should be adjective 'detailed' and 'a newspaper' needs article. Suggestion: use correct tense forms (present continuous) in conditional clauses and correct adjective forms.'