Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and self-corrections, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar for noun phrases and tense. For example, say you like reading celebrity news online and briefly explain why (interest in personalities or current events).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially online articles about celebrities. For example, I often follow news about actors like Johnny Depp because I’m interested in their careers and recent events in their lives.

제안: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give concise, specific reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid repetition and hesitations. Correct phrasing: 'read on paper' not 'on a paper'; 'staring at a screen' and 'it strains my eyes.'

예시: I prefer reading on paper because staring at electronic screens strains my eyes. Therefore I avoid long periods of screen reading to prevent headaches and discomfort.

제안: Give a clear, structured answer: one sentence stating when you need to read carefully, then a contrasting sentence for when you don't. Use correct verb forms and linking words (for example, 'when' and 'but'). Be specific about why exams require careful reading and what relaxed reading looks like.

예시: I need to read carefully when I’m taking exams because I must understand instructions and avoid mistakes. But when I read for relaxation, such as novels or magazines, I read more quickly and focus on enjoyment rather than detail.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your general preference and then give specific examples contrasting scanning and detailed reading. Use linking words (however, for example) and correct grammar ('depends on what I’m reading', 'I prefer scanning for news but detailed reading for novels').

예시: It depends on what I’m reading, but I mostly prefer scanning for information like news articles because I want the main points quickly. However, I use detailed reading for novels when I want to understand characters and their emotions.

× Yes, I like reading very much, especially the article online that provide me the story of uh the celebrity that the Hollywood celebrity that I like, for example the umm, I mean the actors.

✓ Yes, I like reading very much, especially the articles online that provide me with stories about the Hollywood celebrities I like, for example, actors.

The student used 'the article online' and 'the celebrity' incorrectly. Use plural 'articles' and 'celebrities' to match the general meaning. Add 'provide me with' (preposition and object) to complete verb usage. Remove redundant phrasing and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general references and include correct prepositions: 'articles online that provide me with stories about the Hollywood celebrities I like.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× His name is Johnny Depp. He has a a legal term with his ex-wife.

✓ His name is Johnny Depp. He has a legal dispute with his ex-wife.

'Legal term' is incorrect collocation. Use noun 'dispute' or 'case' to describe legal issues. Also remove duplicate article 'a a'. Suggestion: replace with 'a legal dispute' or 'a legal case.' Grammar problem type ID:10

× I would rather read on a paper because reading on the screen can hurt my eyes.

✓ I would rather read on paper because reading on a screen can hurt my eyes.

Do not use the article 'a' before 'paper' when referring to reading on paper in general. 'On paper' is the correct idiom. Keep present tense 'can hurt' is fine. Suggestion: use idiomatic expression 'read on paper.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× And right now I think I have a condition of like, I couldn't read, uh, like staring too much in the screen, electronic screen.

✓ Right now I think I have a condition where I can't read after staring too much at an electronic screen.

Use 'where' to introduce clause, 'can't' for present inability, 'after' to indicate cause, and 'at' for the correct preposition with 'screen.' Use 'an electronic screen' or 'screens' for countable noun. Suggestion: 'I can't read after staring too much at an electronic screen.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× It made me make my eyes crash and I think.

✓ It made my eyes feel strained, I think.

Phrase 'make my eyes crash' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'made my eyes feel strained' or 'caused eye strain.' Also combine fragments to complete sentence. Suggestion: use standard medical phrase 'eye strain' or 'my eyes feel strained.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× I will say that how that I can read carefully.

✓ I will say when I can read carefully.

Original is ungrammatical. 'When' introduces the time clause. Use 'can read carefully' for present ability. Suggestion: 'I will say when I can read carefully.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× I need to read carefully is that when I taking the exam because of I like you know is it an exam and is need concentrate concentration to do so O otherwise reading for relaxation like a reading above serebility I just.

✓ I need to read carefully when I am taking an exam because it requires concentration; otherwise, when reading for relaxation I just skim for general understanding.

Multiple issues: use 'when I am taking an exam' (present continuous), 'it requires concentration' is correct phrasing, 'otherwise' separates clauses, and 'skim' fits meaning. 'Above serebility' is unclear; replaced with 'general understanding.' Suggestion: use clear clause structure: 'I need to read carefully when I am taking an exam because it requires concentration; otherwise I skim.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× It's depend on what I reading, but mostly I like scanning because of detail.

✓ It depends on what I am reading, but mostly I like scanning because of the details.

Use third person singular 'depends' with 'it.' Use present continuous 'am reading.' 'Because of detail' should be 'because of the details' or 'because detailed reading ...' Suggestion: 'It depends on what I am reading; mostly I prefer scanning because I only need the details.' Grammar problem type ID:27

× Reading is for just a novel that I just want to emerge in the story.

✓ Detailed reading is for novels when I want to immerse myself in the story.

'Reading is for just a novel' is awkward; use 'Detailed reading' or 'reading in detail.' Use 'immerse myself' rather than 'emerge in.' Correct article use before nouns and improve verb choice. Suggestion: 'Detailed reading is for novels when I want to immerse myself in the story.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Like I want to know more about the character, their emotions, but, uh, other thing that I just want to know the information life from news, uh, article or.

✓ For example, I want to know more about a character and their emotions, but for other things I just want to get information from news articles.

Use consistent pronouns and plural nouns: 'a character and their emotions' is acceptable singular they. Replace 'information life' with 'get information' and 'news articles' plural. Finish the sentence. Suggestion: simplify and complete: 'I want to know more about a character and their emotions, but for news I just want to get information from articles.' Grammar problem type ID:12}]} PMID:22