Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., saying "helps to" multiple times) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Use linking words like "because" or "which" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading because it broadens my perspective. For example, reading history books has helped me understand different cultures and improved my vocabulary, which is useful for my studies.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with concise wording. Use correct nouns without repeating "problem" and use linking words such as "because" and "so". Mention a brief example if possible.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because long periods on screens often cause eye strain and headaches. For instance, when I study on a tablet for hours I usually get a sore head, so I switch to print books for longer reading sessions.

제안: Be direct and structured: say when you read carefully and when you skim. Avoid unclear phrases like "really neat" and fix grammar and word order. Use a linking word (e.g., "but") to contrast, and give a specific example of exam reading vs casual reading.

예시: I usually read carefully during exams or when studying important texts, because I need to understand details and remember facts. However, when I read news or light stories for pleasure, I skim to get the main idea quickly.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence and provide concise, specific reasons. Avoid vague negatives like "scanning is not." Use linking words such as "because" and give a brief example of when you use each method.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me concentrate and fully understand the material, especially for study. For quick tasks like checking headlines or finding a specific fact, I use scanning instead.

× Yes, I like reading, it broaden my perspective and helps to gain a valuable knowledge and skills and helps to improve my reading skills as well.

✓ Yes, I like reading. It broadens my perspective, helps me gain valuable knowledge and skills, and improves my reading skills as well.

Multiple subject-verb agreement and article/word choice issues: 'it broaden' is incorrect because the singular subject 'it' requires the verb 'broadens' (subject-verb agreement) (ID 27). 'helps to gain a valuable knowledge and skills' contains article and word choice errors: 'knowledge' is uncountable so 'a' should be removed and 'helps me gain' is a more natural verb pattern (ID 22 and ID 13). Repeating 'and helps' is redundant; combine verbs in a parallel structure. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verb forms, remove incorrect articles before uncountable nouns, and keep parallel structure for verbs.

× I prefer to read on paper rather on a screen because too much time on a screen can cause the eye problem and headache problem which makes body feel uncomfortable and unhealthy.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because spending too much time on a screen can cause eye problems and headaches, which make the body feel uncomfortable and unhealthy.

Preposition and comparison word errors: 'rather on a screen' should be 'rather than on a screen' (ID 11 and ID 16). Also 'too much time on a screen' is better expressed as 'spending too much time on a screen' (verb + -ing form usage, ID 8). 'the eye problem and headache problem' is incorrect: use plural 'eye problems and headaches' and no definite article for general conditions (ID 22 and ID 13). 'which makes body feel' has subject-verb agreement and missing article: 'which make the body feel' (ID 27 and ID 22). Suggestion: use 'rather than', use -ing when describing spending time, use plural forms for general ailments, and include appropriate articles.

× Generally I prefer to read everyday, like I like to study stories, books, articles, newspaper but in during exams it's really neat to read carefully.

✓ Generally I prefer to read every day; I like to study stories, books, articles, and newspapers, but during exams it's really necessary to read carefully.

Multiple tense and word choice issues: 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning common; use 'every day' for frequency (ID 6). 'articles, newspaper' needs plural 'newspapers' (singular/plural issue ID 1). 'in during exams' is wrong preposition combination; use 'during exams' (ID 11). 'it's really neat to read carefully' is incorrect collocation; 'necessary' or 'important' fits better (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs ID 13). Suggestion: use 'every day' for frequency, keep noun lists parallel and plural where appropriate, remove redundant prepositions, and choose correct collocations like 'necessary to read carefully.'

× I prefer detail reading rather than scanning. Detailed reading helps me to concentrate more and gain knowledge about what I read, but scanning is not.

✓ I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning. Detailed reading helps me concentrate more and gain knowledge about what I read, but scanning does not.

'detail reading' is incorrect adjective form; use the adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading' (ID 13 and ID 18). 'helps me to concentrate' is acceptable, but 'helps me concentrate' is more natural. 'scanning is not' is incomplete; the correct negative form is 'scanning does not' or 'scanning does not help as much' (sentence structure/verb omitted ID 23 and ID 26). Suggestion: use correct adjective forms, omit unnecessary 'to' after 'help', and ensure negatives include a verb.