Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant and gives supporting details (when and what you read). To improve, make the response more natural by using varied vocabulary, correcting small grammar errors (e.g., 'at night' not 'at the night'), and linking ideas with short connectors. Also avoid minor redundancy (e.g., 'very informative' repeated implicitly). Aim for a concise topic sentence followed by 1–2 supporting details.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I often read English books during lunch because they help me improve my language skills, while in the evening I read Japanese books to learn about economics and society.

제안: Good direct response and balanced view. To improve, remove filler words like 'uh', use smoother linking phrases (e.g., 'however' or 'on the other hand'), correct small grammar ('I can read them anytime' or 'I can read e-books anytime'), and keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Vary vocabulary (e.g., 'concentrate' → 'focus') for more natural expression.

예시: I generally prefer paper books because they help me focus, however e-books are convenient since I can read them anytime on my phone, so I enjoy both formats depending on the situation.

제안: Your idea is clear but the answer has grammatical mistakes and repetition. Improve sentence structure (use plural/singular correctly: 'medical articles', 'cartoons'), avoid repetition ('very very', 'I don't read, I don't'), and use linking words like 'because' and 'whereas' to contrast. Provide one clear example of what you do when reading carefully (e.g., take notes, check facts) to add specificity.

예시: I read carefully when studying medical articles because they contain complex information that I often take notes on and check against other sources, whereas I usually skim cartoons for fun and don't analyze them in detail.

제안: The response answers the question but contains errors and awkward phrasing. Fix grammar ('I really love detailed reading', 'reading in detail', 'check the facts'), avoid colloquial fillers, and use linking phrases to contrast (e.g., 'however', 'on the other hand'). Add a brief example of when you scan vs. read in detail to be more concrete.

예시: It depends, but I generally prefer detailed reading because it allows me to learn deeply and verify facts online; however, I scan articles when I'm short on time, such as during a busy commute.

× At lunch time, I enjoy reading English books.

✓ At lunchtime, I enjoy reading English books.

Use 'lunchtime' as one word for the meal period; 'lunch time' is not the preferred form. This is an article/word form issue: replace the two-word form with the standard compound noun 'lunchtime'. Suggestion: write common compound time expressions as single words when standard (e.g., 'lunchtime', 'bedtime').

× And at the night I enjoy reading Japanese books.

✓ And at night I enjoy reading Japanese books.

When referring to the period 'night' in general, do not use the definite article 'the'. Using 'the night' implies a specific night. Remove 'the' to say 'at night'. Suggestion: use 'at night' for general habitual actions during nighttime.

× I can get a lot of information about economics, society.

✓ I can get a lot of information about economics and society.

The original uses a comma to join two nouns, which is unnatural. Use the conjunction 'and' to list multiple topics. This is a sentence structure/listing error. Suggestion: connect items in a list with 'and' (or commas with an 'and' before the last item).

× I prefer reading on paper because reading paper books makes me concentrate.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because reading paper books helps me concentrate.

'Makes me concentrate' is not idiomatic here. Use 'helps me concentrate' or 'allows me to concentrate'. This concerns verb choice and form to convey meaning correctly; change to 'helps me concentrate'. Suggestion: use collocations like 'helps me concentrate', 'allows me to focus'.

× But uh, digital books are also useful. I can read it anytime.

✓ But digital books are also useful. I can read them anytime.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'digital books' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them'. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal responses. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and agreement. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents ('books' -> 'them').

× So it depends on the situation.

✓ So it depends on the situation.

This sentence is acceptable as written; no correction needed. (Included for completeness.)

× I can enjoy both reading.

✓ I can enjoy both.

'Both' already implies the two things mentioned (paper and digital reading); adding 'reading' is redundant and awkward. Remove the extra noun for concision. This is a verb/phrase usage issue. Suggestion: say 'I can enjoy both' or 'I enjoy both paper and digital books.'

× I usually read carefully when I read medical article because they are very very informative and to understand the contents we should read it in detail.

✓ I usually read carefully when I read medical articles because they are very informative, and to understand the content we should read them in detail.

Multiple errors: 'medical article' should be plural 'medical articles' (article error/singular-plural), 'very very' is redundant (use one 'very'), 'contents' often is used as singular 'content' in this context, and pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with 'articles'. Also add a comma and 'and' to connect clauses. Fixes involve article/plural and pronoun agreement. Suggestion: ensure noun number agreement and pronoun agreement, avoid redundant words ('very very').

× But when I read cartoon, I don't read intentionally so much because it's enjoyable.

✓ But when I read cartoons, I don't read intentionally so much because they're enjoyable.

Use plural 'cartoons' if speaking generally. Also match pronoun: 'they're' for plural. 'Read intentionally so much' is awkward; consider 'read very carefully' or 'read intentionally' alone. This is an article/number and pronoun agreement issue. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and ensure pronouns match; rephrase 'don't read intentionally so much' to 'don't read very carefully' for clarity.

× I don't read, I don't.

✓ I don't, not really.

The original repeats 'I don't' and is unclear. Provide a concise response like 'I don't, not really' to convey that you do not read carefully. This is a sentence structure/clarity issue. Suggestion: use short, natural responses such as 'Not really' or 'I don't, not usually.'

× It totally depends on the situation, but in general a real love detailed reading.

✓ It totally depends on the situation, but in general I really love detailed reading.

The original omits the subject pronoun 'I' and misorders 'a real love'; it should be 'I really love'. This is an incorrect use/missing pronoun and word order problem. Suggestion: include the subject and use adverb 'really' before the verb: 'I really love...'.

× I can get a lot of information by reading it detail and I also check the fact using Internet.

✓ I can get a lot of information by reading in detail, and I also check the facts using the Internet.

Multiple issues: use 'read in detail' rather than 'read it detail', use plural 'facts' if checking multiple facts, and include the definite article 'the' before 'Internet'. These are article, phrase, and pluralization errors. Suggestion: use set phrases like 'read in detail', use 'check the facts', and include 'the' before 'Internet'.

× But sometimes I prefer scanning when I don't have free time.

✓ But sometimes I prefer scanning when I don't have free time.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present habitual context; no correction needed.