Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời lặp từ và sai ngữ pháp nhiều (work thay cho walk), câu dài không rõ ràng, cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ phù hợp và sửa ngữ pháp. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, tiếp theo nêu tần suất và lý do cụ thể, dùng thì đúng (I walk / I usually walk).

예시: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually walk to school and to the market every day because it helps me exercise and clear my mind, so I feel more energetic afterwards.

제안: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi (confuses 'walk' with 'work'), thì và cấu trúc động từ không đúng (try/used to), thiếu liên từ và chi tiết rõ ràng. Nên nói rõ tần suất trong quá khứ, mô tả nơi chốn và hoạt động cụ thể, dùng cấu trúc 'used to' đúng cách.

예시: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. I used to go to the park every afternoon with my friends, where we played games and explored the neighborhood.

제안: Câu trả lời chung chung, ngữ pháp và collocation sai ('park is a safe facility', 'a fresh air', 'work in the morning'). Cần nêu 2–3 lý do rõ ràng với liên từ (for example, because) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích sức khỏe hoặc tinh thần.

예시: People like walking in parks because they are safe and have clean air. For example, I usually walk there in the morning to get fresh air and to relax, which helps me stay healthy and focused.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu hoàn chỉnh, ngữ pháp sai ('a work', 'because.'), không nêu lý do cụ thể. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu điều kiện ngắn, nêu địa điểm cụ thể và giải thích chi tiết vì sao (cảnh đẹp, không khí trong lành, đường mòn thuận tiện).

예시: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in the countryside because the trails are peaceful and the air is fresh, which makes long walks more enjoyable.

제안: Câu trả lời không trả lời rõ câu hỏi thời gian (lately) và dùng thì sai ('often study in the past'), câu lộn xộn, ý không rõ. Nên nêu một địa điểm gần đây, thời điểm cụ thể và mô tả cảm xúc/ lợi ích ngắn gọn, dùng thì quá khứ đơn hoặc hiện tại hoàn thành nếu cần.

예시: Lately I went to the campus garden for a walk. It is a quiet and pleasant place near my school, and being outside helps me feel relaxed and refreshed when I'm stressed.

× Yes, I work a lot. I usually work to school and to market every day because it's a good way to exercise and clear my mind and I feel relaxed, refresh and more energy after daily work.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to school and to the market every day because it's a good way to exercise and clear my mind, and I feel relaxed, refreshed, and more energetic after my daily walks.

The student used incorrect verbs and forms for habitual actions; 'work' should be 'walk' to answer the question. Use simple present for routines (I walk, I feel). 'To school' and 'to market' need 'walk to' and 'the market'. 'Refresh' is an adjective form error; use past participle 'refreshed' or adjective 'refreshed'. 'More energy' should be 'more energetic' or 'have more energy'. Also add 'my' before 'daily walks' for clarity.

× I used to go for work a lot. When I try, I often went to park in the afternoon with my friend because we like play game and explore the neighborhood.

✓ I used to go out a lot. When I was free, I often went to the park in the afternoon with my friends because we liked to play games and explore the neighborhood.

Mixing tenses and wrong verbs: 'go for work' is incorrect for walking; use 'go out' or 'go for walks'. 'When I try' is wrong in past context; use 'When I was free' or 'When I had time'. Use past simple consistently: 'often went', 'we liked'. 'To park' needs article 'the park'. 'Friend' should be plural if referring to more than one or keep singular with 'my friend'; match verb forms. 'Like play game' needs 'liked to play games'.

× Because park is a safe facility and a fresh air, I enjoy going there. Uh, for example, I often work in the morning because it's have me realize and keep my healthy.

✓ Because the park is a safe place and has fresh air, I enjoy going there. For example, I often walk in the morning because it helps me stay healthy and makes me feel more aware.

Article and word choice errors: 'park' needs 'the park'. 'Safe facility' is unnatural; use 'safe place'. 'A fresh air' is wrong; 'fresh air' is uncountable, no 'a'. 'I often work in the morning' should be 'I often walk in the morning' to match topic. 'It's have me realize and keep my healthy' is ungrammatical: use 'it helps me stay healthy' or 'it makes me feel more alert'. Use correct verb 'helps' + infinitive or 'makes me feel' + adjective.

× I would like to a work in the country because. They are a good path for walking which make comfortable for a long walk.

✓ I would like to work in the countryside because there are good paths for walking that make long walks comfortable.

Article and structure mistakes: 'to a work' is incorrect; use 'to work' or 'to take a walk' depending on meaning. 'In the country' vs 'in the countryside'—both possible; 'countryside' fits. Sentence fragment 'because.' must be completed. 'They are a good path' mixes plural and singular; use 'there are good paths' or 'it has good paths'. 'Which make comfortable' needs object and agreement: 'that make long walks comfortable'.

× I often study in the past because it's a quiet and pleasant place when I'm very busy and straight as a school, being outside make me feel relaxed and refresh.

✓ I often go there because it's a quiet and pleasant place when I'm very busy, and being outside makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

Tense and verb agreement errors: 'I often study in the past' is wrong—use 'I often go there' to describe current or habitual action. 'Straight as a school' is unclear and incorrect; likely meant 'like school' or 'as a student'—omit or replace. 'Being outside make' needs subject-verb agreement: 'being outside makes'. 'Refresh' should be 'refreshed' (past participle/adjective).'