Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you walk a lot?
수험생
Yes, I work quite often. I prefer walking to taking the bus. Walking keeps me healthier and improves my mood, so I try to work whenever I have free time.
시험관
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
수험생
No, I didn't go out much when I was a child because at the time I was addicted to video games, so I usually stayed at home and spend most of my time playing games rather than going outside with my friends.
시험관
Why do people like to walk in parks?
수험생
People like walking in parks for several reasons. First, it is good for their health because working is a simple form of exercise and it and it is very easy to enjoy. Also, parts offer pleasant scenery and fresh air which helps people relax.
시험관
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
수험생
If I had a chance, I would walk alone in a quiet park near my home because it is, umm, peaceful and has many trees. I prefer green spaces to busy urban street.
시험관
Where did you go for a walk lately?
수험생
I went for a walk every century at Sumner Park which is close to my home. The park was has rivers, open skies and many beautiful trees and I enjoyed watching people walking and relaxing there. It's very famous for cherry blossom in spring.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you walk a lot?
점수: 70.0제안: 문법과 어휘 선택에서 실수가 있습니다. 동사 'work'와 'walk'를 혼동한 부분과 반복되는 표현을 피해야 합니다. 답변 구조는 좋지만 주제문(topic sentence)을 명확히 하고, 연결어(for example, because 등)를 사용해 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 표현하세요. 또한 문장 수를 3~4문장으로 유지하면서 구체적인 이유나 예를 하나 추가하면 좋습니다.
예시: Yes, I walk quite often, as I prefer walking to taking the bus. It helps me stay healthy and boosts my mood, so I usually walk whenever I have free time. For example, I often walk to the nearby market instead of taking public transport.
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
점수: 75.0제안: 전반적으로 의미는 전달되지만 시제와 동사 형태(spend → spent) 오류가 있습니다. 간결한 주제문을 먼저 말한 뒤, 이유를 연결어로 명확히 제시하세요. 감정 표현이나 한 가지 구체적 예시를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.
예시: No, I didn't. When I was a child I stayed indoors a lot because I was addicted to video games. As a result, I spent most of my free time playing games instead of going out to play with friends.
Why do people like to walk in parks?
점수: 60.0제안: 여러 오타와 단어 선택 오류('working'→'walking', 'parts'→'parks', 반복 표현 'and it and it')가 눈에 띕니다. 답변은 구조화되어 있지만 정확한 단어 사용과 문장 연결에 신경쓰세요. 'First... Also...' 같은 연결어는 좋으니, 구체적인 예(예: jogging, watching birds)로 내용을 풍부하게 하세요.
예시: People enjoy walking in parks for several reasons. Firstly, walking is a simple form of exercise that benefits their health. Secondly, parks provide pleasant scenery and fresh air, which helps people relax—for example, many enjoy watching birds or sitting by a pond.
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
점수: 80.0제안: 좋은 답변 구조와 이유 제시입니다. 다만 'umm' 같은 말버릇은 피하고 명확한 표현을 사용하세요. 복수 형태와 관사 사용('busy urban streets')에 주의하고, 한두 문장으로 구체적 활동(예: reading, birdwatching)을 추가하면 더 자연스럽습니다.
예시: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk alone in a quiet park near my home because it is peaceful and full of trees. I prefer green spaces to busy urban streets and would probably sit on a bench and read while enjoying the fresh air.
Where did you go for a walk lately?
점수: 55.0제안: 문법과 단어 선택에서 여러 문제가 있습니다('every century'→'recently', 'was has'→either 'has' or 'was'). 시제를 일관되게 유지하고 장소 설명을 간결하게 정리하세요. 또한 구체적인 경험(언제 갔는지, 누구와 갔는지, 무엇을 했는지)을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이면 더 풍부한 답변이 됩니다.
예시: I went for a walk recently at Sumner Park, which is close to my home. The park has a river, wide open skies and many beautiful trees, and I enjoyed watching people relax there. It's especially famous for cherry blossoms in spring.
문법
× Yes, I work quite often. I prefer walking to taking the bus. Walking keeps me healthier and improves my mood, so I try to work whenever I have free time.
✓ Yes, I walk quite often. I prefer walking to taking the bus. Walking keeps me healthier and improves my mood, so I try to walk whenever I have free time.
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