Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use correct verb forms and articles), simplify and organize information into 2–3 clear sentences, and give specific details (how often, where, distance/time). Use linking words like “usually” and “for”.

예시: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually walk in the evenings during the week and on weekends, and I do one round of my village which is about two or three kilometres. I walk for at least 30 minutes each time.

제안: Use correct tense consistency (past simple), keep it concise with a clear topic sentence, and add one specific detail or memory. Use linking words like “often” or “usually”.

예시: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. I usually walked with my parents along the road to the market or a small café near our house, and I remember enjoying the street food on the way.

제안: Speak more naturally and precisely: state the main reason then give a clear supporting detail. Correct vocabulary (trees produce oxygen, fresh air) and avoid hesitation words. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: People like to walk in parks because the environment is calm and the air is fresher. Parks have many trees that produce oxygen and reduce pollution, which makes walking more pleasant and healthy.

제안: Use correct conditional form and combine ideas into a concise answer: start with a clear main sentence (I would like to...), give a specific place and a reason, and correct grammar (‘‘not tired’’). Use linking words like “because” or “so”.

예시: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in Japan, especially along coastal paths. The climate is mild and often breezy, so I think I wouldn’t feel tired and could walk for hours.

제안: Use past simple for a recent action, be specific and concise. State where you went, what you did there, and why. Avoid repetition and correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘cat’ likely wrong—use ‘food’ or specific item).

예시: Recently I walked to the market to buy ingredients for my parents' dinner. I bought vegetables and rice and returned home to help prepare the meal.

× Yes, I'm walk a lot, especially in week, in the evening, weekend and Saturday and Sunday and I am walking in my village one round it have estimate two or three kilometer. Yes and I am walk least 30 minute.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot, especially during the week, in the evenings, and on weekends. I walk around my village; one round is about two or three kilometers. I walk for at least 30 minutes.

Errors: incorrect use of 'I'm walk' and 'I am walk' (present continuous vs simple present) and inconsistent tense; missing prepositions and plural forms (week -> during the week, evening -> evenings, weekend -> weekends), missing articles and measurement wording. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I walk' for habitual actions, use 'during' for time periods, pluralize recurring time words, add 'for' with durations, and use clear phrasing for distances (about two or three kilometers).

× Absolutely yes, when I was young and go outside and walk along the road with my parents to go to the market or cafeteria near my house.

✓ Absolutely. Yes, when I was young I went outside and walked along the road with my parents to go to the market or the cafeteria near our house.

Errors: present tense 'go' and 'walk' used when describing past events. Use past tense verbs 'went' and 'walked' to match 'when I was young'. Also add definite article 'the' for specific places and change 'my house' to 'our house' to match 'parents' context or keep 'my house'. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently when narrating past activities and include articles for specific nouns.

× Uh, because uh, in the park have uh many trees and have a fresh air because tree receives carbon dioxide and express the oxygen, the oxygen is the air with people must to use for leave, yes.

✓ Because in the park there are many trees and fresh air. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which people need to breathe.

Errors: missing existential 'there are' (There be issue) and incorrect articles ('a fresh air' -> 'fresh air'), incorrect verb choices ('receives' -> 'absorb', 'express' -> 'release'), and awkward relative clause. Suggestion: Use 'there are' to state existence, use uncountable 'fresh air' without 'a', choose correct verbs for biological processes, and use 'breathe' instead of 'leave' to express respiration.

× If I had a chance, I want to walk. I want a long walk in anywhere in Japan because Japan has already is windy. When I'm long walk I'm not try or not exhausted.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk anywhere in Japan because it is already windy there. When I walk for a long time I don't get tired or exhausted.

Errors: incorrect conditional form—'If I had a chance' (second conditional) requires 'would' or 'would like' in result clause; 'I want' should be 'I would like' or 'I would want'. 'Has already is windy' is ungrammatical; use 'it is already windy there.' 'When I'm long walk' mixes forms; use 'When I walk for a long time' and use present tense 'don't get' to express general truth. Suggestion: For hypothetical situations use 'If + past, would + base verb'; use 'would like' for polite desire; fix verb forms and natural adverb placement.

× I walk. I walk to the market and buy some cat, buy some ingredients to make my dinner for my parents. Yes.

✓ I went for a walk. I walked to the market and bought some things, ingredients to make dinner for my parents.

Errors: tense inconsistency—question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' requires past tense. The student uses present simple 'I walk'. Also 'buy some cat' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'buy some food' or 'bought some items'. Suggestion: Use past tense 'went', 'walked', 'bought' to answer a past question and choose correct nouns ('ingredients' or 'food').