Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用自然且時態正確的句子回答，避免重複與語法錯誤。可以直接說明頻率、地點和原因，並用連接詞豐富句子結構。比如說明每天散步的時間、目的或感受。

예시: Yes, I walk almost every day in the small park near my home because it helps me relax and stay fit. Usually I go in the morning for about 30 minutes.

제안: 用過去時回答兒時習慣，注意時態一致和完整句子，補充具體細節如年齡段、頻率或活動內容，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, I often walked in the park when I was a child. From about age six to twelve, I went there almost every weekend to play and explore with my friends.

제안: 回答要語法正確並提供具體理由。使用多個支持點時用連接詞連接，避免直譯或單字用法錯誤（例如 'parking' 非此處所指）。可以談健康、放鬆、社交等方面的好處。

예시: People like walking in parks because the air is fresher and the environment is peaceful, which reduces stress. Also, parks offer safe paths and green scenery that encourage exercise and socialising.

제안: 回答要更具體並語法正確。先直接回答一個地方，然後給出原因或細節，用連接詞連接各點。避免語句斷裂和猶豫詞過多。

예시: I would love to take a long walk in Yellowstone National Park in the United States because of its unique landscapes and wildlife. Alternatively, I would enjoy hiking along the coast in Australia to experience the scenery and climate.

제안: 使用正確時態和清晰表達最近的習慣，避免重複詞（如 'Central Central'）。可以說明具體時間、路線或感受，並用連接詞補充細節。

예시: Lately I have been walking in the central park near my home almost every evening. I usually follow a one-kilometre path and enjoy watching the sunset while I walk.

× Yes I will. Every day I will go in the park near home.

✓ Yes, I do. Every day I go to the park near my home.

原句中學生用“will”表示習慣性動作不恰當。一般習慣或常態性動作應使用一般現在時（do / go），而不是將來時（will）。另外，介詞搭配應為“go to the park”，“near my home”需要所有格。建議：描述日常習慣時使用一般現在時，例如“I go to the park every day.”

× Yes, I was kid. I often go outside in the park.

✓ Yes, I was a kid. I often went outside to play in the park.

第一句缺少不定冠詞“a”，應為“was a kid”。第二句談論過去習慣時應使用一般過去時（went），原句混用了一般現在時。並且語意上通常說“go outside to play”或“go to the park”。建議：描述過去習慣時用過去時，如“I often went to the park.”

× I often go outside in the park.

✓ I often went outside to play in the park.

介詞搭配不自然：通常說“go to the park”而不是“in the park”來表示去某地；若強調在公園內做某事，可說“play in the park”。且句子為過去背景，需用過去時。建議：學習常見動詞與介詞搭配，例如“go to the park”，“play in the park”。

× Because park have nice air and parking.

✓ Because the park has fresh air and parking facilities.

主謂一致錯誤：“park”為單數名詞，動詞應用第三人稱單數“has”。此外需加定冠詞“the park”，以及“nice air”更自然為“fresh air”，“parking”需明確為“parking facilities”。建議：注意單數名詞用第三人稱單數動詞並正確使用冠詞。

× Give the people good bodies.

✓ It is good for people's health.

原句語法與用詞不自然。“Give the people good bodies”不是地道表達，可用固定搭配“It is good for people's health”或“helps people stay healthy”。建議：用更自然的名詞短語表示健康，例如“good for health”或“helps people stay healthy”。

× Oh, this difficult question. Uh, I want go there, Canada, maybe Australia. Uh, I want go there Yellowstone.

✓ Oh, that's a difficult question. I want to go to Canada, or maybe Australia. I also want to go to Yellowstone.

多處句子結構錯誤：缺少be動詞（that's a difficult question）；“want go”缺少不定式“to”應為“want to go”；列舉地點時需正確使用介詞“to”，且地名間用連詞連接。建議：注意be動詞、動詞不定式“to”及介詞“to”用法，並用簡潔句子列出想去的地方。

× Lately, I often go for walks in Central Central Park near my home.

✓ Lately, I have often been going for walks in Central Park near my home.

時間副詞‘lately’表示最近一段時間的持續動作，通常用現在完成進行時（have been going）或現在完成時（have gone）更恰當；原句還有重複“Central Central”錯誤，且一般說“Central Park”。建議：對於最近的習慣使用現在完成（進行）時，如“I have often been going for walks lately.”