Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答を明確で文法的に正しい現在形で始め、理由を一つ述べてから具体的な習慣を付け加えてください。接続詞（because, so, and）を適切に使い、冗長な繰り返しや不必要な語順の誤りを避けること。発音や語選びに注意して“walk”と“wake”等の混同を直すと良いです。

예시: Yes, I walk every morning because walking is good for my health. I also listen to an English radio program while I walk, which helps me practice listening.

제안: 過去形で一貫して答え、冗長な繰り返しを避けて文を整理してください。主文で直接答えた後、距離や時間など具体的な詳細を付け加え、接続語（because, so）でつなげると流れが良くなります。

예시: Yes, I usually walked to school when I was a child because my junior high school was far from home. It took about 40 minutes on foot, so I walked a lot every day.

제안: 一般的理由を述べた後、より具体的な例や結果（例えばリラックスできる・運動になる等）を一つ加えてください。語順と単語（feel nature → feel close to nature, unusual → often）を正しく使い、接続詞で文を滑らかにつなげること。

예시: People like walking in parks because they can feel close to nature and escape the busy city. For example, parks offer fresh air and quiet paths, so walking there helps people relax.

제안: 仮定法の聞き方には丁寧に答え、まず行きたい場所を明確に言い、その理由を具体的に述べてください。単語の誤用（soaps→species? smells?）を直し、短く論理的な文（最大5文）でまとめること。

예시: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in the mountains because I could see many kinds of plants and enjoy the fresh air. Walking there would be very relaxing.

제안: 過去形で時を明確に述べ、場所の前に冠詞や形容詞を正しく使ってください（a famous temple）。理由を言うときは簡潔にし、文法的に正しい表現（I went there to relax/play/visit）を用いてください。不要な繰り返しと語順の乱れを直すこと。

예시: I went for a walk to a famous temple last year. I walked there because I wanted to visit the site and enjoy the peaceful atmosphere.

× Yes, I woke every morning because a story is good for our health.

✓ Yes, I wake up every morning because walking is good for our health.

The student used 'woke' (past) incorrectly for a habitual present action; use present simple 'wake up'. Also 'a story' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'walking'. Use 'walking is good for our health' to state a general truth.

× I like. To I walk every morning with listening English radio.

✓ I like it. I walk every morning while listening to English radio.

Sentence fragments and incorrect word order: 'I like.' needs an object 'it'. 'To I walk' is incorrect order; use 'I walk'. Use 'while listening to' to indicate simultaneous actions and include preposition 'to' after 'listening'.

× Yes, I I went to my school by foot, on foot.

✓ Yes, I went to my school on foot.

Redundant words 'I I' and both 'by foot' and 'on foot' used; standard idiom is 'on foot'. Past tense 'went' is correct for past habitual action, so keep tense but remove duplication and choose correct preposition.

× My junior high school is far from here.

✓ My junior high school was far from here.

The speaker refers to past time (when they were a child), so use past tense 'was' instead of present 'is' to match context.

× It takes about 40 minutes to walk.

✓ It took about 40 minutes to walk.

Context is about past (when they were a child); change present 'takes' to past 'took' to maintain consistent tense.

× So I I walked a lot every day.

✓ So I walked a lot every day.

Remove duplicated 'I'. Past tense 'walked' is appropriate here because referring to past routine.

× People want to feel nature in parks.

✓ People want to experience nature in parks.

'Feel nature' is non-idiomatic; 'experience nature' or 'feel close to nature' is better. Also 'in parks' is fine; improvement is lexical choice rather than preposition error.

× These days many people live in city and they they don't have opportunity to feel nature unusual.

✓ These days many people live in the city and they don't have the opportunity to experience nature.

Add definite article 'the city' and 'the opportunity'. Remove duplicate 'they'. 'Feel nature unusual' is ungrammatical; use 'experience nature'.

× So people want to.

✓ So people want to experience nature.

Sentence fragment 'So people want to.' needs an infinitive object; add 'experience nature' to complete the thought.

× I want to walk in mountain.

✓ I want to walk in the mountains.

Use plural 'mountains' or 'the mountain'; add definite article 'the' and pluralize to match natural usage: 'in the mountains'.

× I mountain.

✓ I mean the mountains.

Fragment 'I mountain.' is unintelligible; likely intended 'I mean the mountains.' Provide complete phrase to convey correction.

× We can feel many kinds of plants and soaps.

✓ We can see many kinds of plants and birds.

'Soaps' is incorrect noun here; probably meant 'songs' or 'birds' or 'scents'. Context suggests nature (birds); replace with a natural element. Also 'feel' can be 'see' or 'experience'.

× This is it's it makes us relaxed.

✓ It makes us feel relaxed.

Remove redundant 'this is it's it'. Use clear structure 'It makes us feel relaxed.' Present simple is appropriate for general truth.

× I went to. Famous temple on foot the last year I. I went here because I want I play, play for.

✓ I went to a famous temple on foot last year. I went there because I wanted to pray.

Multiple errors: fix word order and articles: 'a famous temple'. 'the last year' -> 'last year'. 'I went here' -> 'I went there'. Tense consistency: past 'wanted'. 'play, play for' is likely 'pray'. Provide corrected verb 'pray' to match visit to temple.