Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correggi errori grammaticali e usa frasi più concise e naturali. Evita ripetizioni come "some some" e "going walking"; usa "one of my favourite activities" e articoli appropriati. Usa una struttura chiara: affermazione principale + una o due frasi di supporto con connettori semplici.

예시: Yes, I walk a lot. It’s one of my favourite activities and I think it’s important for my health. Usually I walk around my neighbourhood with friends or family, and at weekends I like hiking in the mountains.

제안: Migliora la grammatica e la scorrevolezza; evita costruzioni errate come "go a lot on walking" e frasi ripetute. Usa il passato semplice o "used to" correttamente e aggiungi dettagli specifici su frequenza e con chi andavi.

예시: Yes, I used to go walking a lot as a child, especially hiking in the mountains because my parents enjoyed it. I often went with my cousins almost every weekend.

제안: Correggi lessico e struttura: usa il termine corretto "walking" non "working" e rendi le frasi più concise. Usa connettori per chiarire ragioni (e.g. "because", "so") e fornisci esempi concreti come aria pulita, spazi verdi, e tranquillità.

예시: People like walking in parks because there is less traffic and the air is cleaner, so it feels more peaceful. Parks also offer green spaces and benches where you can relax or exercise.

제안: Correggi errori lessicali e grammaticali: "If I had the chance" è la forma corretta, non "If I had the sons"; evita frasi confuse come "that are mountains present here". Sii specifico sul luogo e spiega perché lo scegli, usando due frasi al massimo.

예시: If I had the chance, I would go hiking in the Dolomites near my town. The area has stunning scenery and beautiful lakes, which makes it perfect for a long walk.

제안: Rendi la risposta più naturale e grammaticale usando il present perfect appropriatamente e semplifica: evita numeri scritti come "1" e frasi ridondanti. Specifica quando sei andato e cosa ti è piaciuto di quel posto.

예시: Lately I have been walking around a nearby lake called Garden Lake, which is close to where I live. I go there often because it’s beautiful and many of my friends live nearby.

× I think it's one of my favorite activity.

✓ I think it's one of my favorite activities.

Uso del singolare invece del plurale dopo 'one of': quando si usa 'one of' seguito da un sostantivo conteggiabile si deve usare la forma plurale (one of my favorite activities). Suggerimento: ricordare che 'one of' richiede il plurale per il sostantivo che segue.

× I often go walking around in my neighborhood with maybe some friends or some some member of my family.

✓ I often go walking around my neighborhood with maybe some friends or some members of my family.

Ripetizione e uso errato del singolare 'some member' quando ci si riferisce a membri della famiglia in generale; 'some' richiede il plurale 'members' o usare 'a member' per singolare. Suggerimento: evitare ripetizioni e usare 'some members of my family' per indicare membri vari.

× Otherwise, in my free time, I also like going walking in the mountains.

✓ Otherwise, in my free time, I also like going for walks in the mountains.

Combinazione errata 'going walking' non idiomatica. Si usa 'going for a walk' o 'going for walks' oppure semplicemente 'walking'. Suggerimento: scegliere una forma idiomatica: 'like going for walks' o 'like walking in the mountains'.

× When I was a child, I used to go a lot on walking, especially hiking in the mountains because my parents really liked this type of activity.

✓ When I was a child, I used to walk a lot, especially hiking in the mountains because my parents really liked this type of activity.

Uso errato della preposizione 'on' con 'walk/walking' e ordine lessicale sbagliato. 'Used to walk' è la forma corretta per abitudine passata. Suggerimento: usare 'used to' + base verb per abitudini passate: 'used to walk'.

× And so I went off and with my cousins, especially during the weekend, almost quite each weekend.

✓ And so I went out with my cousins, especially on weekends, almost every weekend.

Uso scorretto di 'went off and with' e scelta errata di 'each weekend' e 'during the weekend'. 'Went out with' è la collocazione corretta; 'on weekends' o 'every weekend' sono le espressioni idiomatiche. Suggerimento: usare 'went out with' e 'almost every weekend'.

× I think that the beauty of working in parks is that there is not all the traffic that there is in a city center, so you can also breathe better and cleaner and you can stay more in a place that is more peaceful and quiet.

✓ I think that the beauty of walking in parks is that there isn't all the traffic that there is in a city center, so you can also breathe cleaner air and stay in a place that is more peaceful and quiet.

Più errori: 'working' invece di 'walking'; uso di 'there is not all the traffic' non idiomatico; 'breathe better and cleaner' non corretto per collocazione di 'cleaner' con 'air'. Suggerimento: usare 'walking', 'there isn't', e 'breathe cleaner air' per chiarezza e forma idiomatica.

× If I had the sons, I would like to go hiking in the Dolomites that are mountains present here near the town I am currently living.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go hiking in the Dolomites, which are mountains near the town where I am currently living.

Errore lessicale 'sons' invece di 'chance'; uso scorretto di 'that are mountains present here near the town I am currently living'. Correzione: usare 'which' per aggiungere informazione relativa e 'where I am currently living' per indicare luogo. Suggerimento: attenzione alle parole scelte e alla costruzione della frase relativa.

× There are there beautiful, amazing places in those mountains and otherwise near my city?

✓ There are beautiful, amazing places in those mountains and also near my city.

Duplicazione 'there' e punteggiatura errata con '?' invece di '.'; struttura 'There are there beautiful' sbagliata. Suggerimento: usare una sola 'there' e collegare le idee con 'and also'.

× Lately I have been walking around the garden lake that is 1 lake near where I am living here and it was really amazing.

✓ Lately I have been walking around the garden lake, which is a lake near where I live, and it was really amazing.

Uso scorretto dell'articolo numerico '1' e struttura relativa. Meglio 'which is a lake near where I live'. Suggerimento: usare articoli corretti ('a lake') e il presente semplice 'where I live' per indicare residenza attuale.

× I often go there since it is near and I have also a lot of friends living there.

✓ I often go there since it is near and I also have a lot of friends living there.

Posizione di 'also' errata: 'I have also a lot of friends' suona innaturale; collocazione corretta è 'I also have a lot of friends' o 'I have a lot of friends there'. Suggerimento: posizionare gli avverbi come 'also' correttamente prima del verbo principale o dopo 'have' a seconda dell'enfasi.