Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够直接且有明显语法和词汇错误，句子冗长且不连贯。应先用主题句直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一到两句简洁说明频率与原因，注意动词用法和时态。比如把“work”改为“walk”，并去掉重复和填充词。

예시: Not really. I don’t walk much because I tend to be lazy and prefer staying in bed. However, I do try to walk a little several times a week for my health.

제안: 回答总体方向正确但语法和用词有误（把walk和work混淆，重复表述）。应使用过去式，避免冗余，增加具体细节并用连接词衔接。保持不超过5句。

예시: Yes, I often went out to walk when I was a child. I preferred playing outside to staying at home and usually walked with my friends and our pets. Those outings made me feel free and happy.

제안: 回答包含合理观点但表达混乱且有停顿和词汇错误（work->walk，冗余填词）。应使用清晰排列的要点并用连接词（first, second）后面补充具体说明。每点控制在一句话内。

예시: There are several reasons. First, walking in a park lets people be close to nature, which helps them relax. Second, it is good exercise and improves physical health.

제안: 回答内容具体且有感情，但有重复和语法小错误（Gongqing Sending Park 名称可能不准确，'there's many'应为'there are many'）。应简化重复，用一到两句描述地点特点和感受，注意主谓一致和流畅度。

예시: I would like to walk in Gongqing Forest Park because it has many flowers, trees and birds. Listening to birdsong and viewing the plants would make me feel calm and happy.

제안: 答案时态混用且表达不清楚（go->went，St.=street 应完整写出，'I work there'与过去时间矛盾）。应用过去式描述最近一次散步的地点、特点和所做的事，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Recently I went to Changzhou Qingguo Xiang, a historic street that now has many shops and cafes. I walked around the area and tried a delicious dessert at a local bakery.

× Actually I didn't work a lot because I'm a little lazy so I always live on my bed but sometimes but I work hard wait.

✓ Actually I don't walk a lot because I'm a little lazy, so I usually lie on my bed, but sometimes I work hard. Wait.

该句多处时态与动词用法不当：原句用的是过去式 "didn't work" 与语境不符（询问习惯性行为应使用一般现在时），且将 "walk" 错写为 "work"，把 "lie on my bed" 写成 "live on my bed"（live 表示居住，lie 表示躺）。建议：描述习惯时用一般现在时（don't walk/don't work），描述躺在床上用 lie，注意单词拼写与语义。

× Yes, as a child I always go out to work because I don't like to stay in my stay at home. I always walk out with my friends, with my pets, with my dogs and cats. That makes me happy and that and I.

✓ Yes, as a child I always went out to play because I didn't like to stay at home. I always walked out with my friends and my pets, like dogs and cats. That made me happy.

句中描述过去习惯却使用了一般现在时（比如 "always go"、"don't like"），与语境不符。应使用过去时（went, didn't like, walked）。另外 "stay in my stay at home" 是冗余且不正确的表达，应为 "stay at home"。"That and I" 是残缺，应改为完整句子。建议：叙述过去习惯统一使用过去时，删除多余词并把残缺句补全。

× I think there's a lot of reasons, uh, first, work in the park may means, uh, being more be, be close to the nature that makes you calm down. Second, it makes you, it makes your body stronger and, uh, you can.

✓ I think there are a lot of reasons. First, walking in the park may mean being closer to nature, which helps you calm down. Second, it makes your body stronger.

原句中有多处介词和短语搭配错误：应为 "walking in the park"（而非 "work in the park"），"be closer to nature"（而非 "be close to the nature"，且不加定冠词）。另外主句结构不完整（"and, uh, you can" 未完）。建议：使用正确短语搭配（walk/ walking in the park, closer to nature），去掉多余词并补全句子。

× Maybe the Gongqing Sending Park, because there are, there are many kinds of flowers and trees there and there's many birds Seeing, uh, just listening to the bird and seeing the flowers and the trees makes me calm down and makes me happy.

✓ Maybe Gongqing Forest Park, because there are many kinds of flowers and trees there and many birds to see. Just listening to the birds and seeing the flowers and trees makes me calm and happy.

句中时态总体为一般现在时，但存在名词与动词形式错误："there's many birds" 应为复数结构 "there are many birds"；"Seeing" 用法断裂，建议用不定式或动名词短语（"to see" 或 "seeing" 需与句子结构一致）。此外地名可能拼写错误（'Sending' 应为 'Forest' 的音译）。建议：保持一般现在时，注意主谓一致（there are）和名词复数形式，使用连贯的短语如 "listening to the birds"。

× Lately I go to Changzhou Qingguo Xiang. It is a historic St. and but it it it's more like a business St. I work there and ate some delicious dessert.

✓ Lately I went to Changzhou Qingguoxiang. It is a historic street, but it's more like a business street. I walked there and ate some delicious desserts.

该句开头使用 "Lately"（最近）常与现在完成时或过去时连用，而原句用一般现在时 "I go" 不够自然，建议用过去时或现在完成时（went / have gone）。句中 'St.' 应写为 'street'，并注意单复数（delicious desserts）。"I work there" 如果指过去发生的动作应改为过去时 "I worked"；若指职业则语境不符。建议：根据语境统一使用过去时或现在完成时，写出完整单词并注意名词复数。