Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答太简短或缺失。请直接回答问题并给出一个主题句，然后用1–2个具体细节支持回答，控制在最多5句话内。例如说明频率、原因或场景，使用连接词（like, because, so）使表达连贯。避免模糊或只有单词的回答。

예시: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually walk to work and around my neighborhood three or four times a week because I find it helps me relax and stay fit. For short trips I prefer walking rather than driving, so it saves time and keeps me healthy.

제안: 回答缺失。请用过去时直接作答并给出1–2个具体回忆（例如和谁、去哪里、多久），用连接词（when, because, so）让叙述流畅，句子不超过5句。避免只说“Yes/No”。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked to the park with my parents on weekends because we didn’t have a car. Those walks usually lasted about an hour and I remember collecting leaves and watching birds.

제안: 回答缺失。请先给出一个概括性主题句（原因），然后用1–2个具体细节或例子支撑（如环境、运动、社交），使用连接词（for example, because, therefore）使逻辑清晰。注意用词贴切、自然。

예시: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and a peaceful environment. For example, parks have trees and ponds that help people relax, and many enjoy walking there for exercise or to meet friends.

제안: 回答缺失。请先给出明确的地点或类型（例如海边、山路、historic city），然后说明原因并提供1–2个具体细节（景色、体验、时间）。使用条件句和连接词（if, because, so）让答案完整且自然。

예시: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the coast. The sea breeze and wide views would be refreshing, and I could stop at small villages along the way to try local food and rest.

제안: 回答缺失。请用最近时态（past simple/present perfect）直接回答并补充1–2个具体细节（地点、同伴、活动、时长），用连接词（last, because, so）连接信息，保持语言自然简洁。

예시: I went for a walk in the city park last weekend. I walked there with a friend for about an hour because we wanted to get some fresh air and chat away from home.