Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要直接切题并且语法正确。简短陈述后用一两句具体补充说明原因或频率，避免时态和动词形式错误。例如把“working”改为“walk”并使用完整句子。

예시: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk every day because walking helps me calm down when I feel nervous, and a short walk clears my mind.

제안: 注意时态一致性和短语使用，避免直译中文句式。可以用连词使表达更连贯，并给出具体例子或频率。

예시: Yes, I did. I often went for walks with my parents because they believed children should be closer to nature, which they thought was good for our health.

제안: 问题是泛指“people”，答案应从一般角度回答并提供原因。注意名词和形容词形式（e.g. reduce stress）以及冠词使用，句子要连贯。

예시: People like walking in parks because parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery, and walking there can help reduce stress and improve mood.

제안: 句子结构混乱且有重复。要先给出直接回答，再用一到两句具体理由，注意词序和删去多余词。使用连词使表达自然。

예시: I would like to take a long walk on a beach. Walking beside the sea sounds beautiful and relaxing, and the sound of the waves would make the walk even more peaceful.

제안: 注意过去时态和动词形式（went, walked）、冠词和复数（cats）。避免重复短语，尽量给一两个具体细节使描述更生动。

예시: Lately I went to a park near my house. I like that park because it has a beautiful view and many friendly cats that people often feed.

× Yes, I work every day because when I am nervous I usually working to reduce my nervous feeling.

✓ Yes, I work every day because when I am nervous I usually work to reduce my nervous feelings.

句中“usually working”使用了动词的 -ing 形式，但此处需要一般现在时的动词形式来表示经常性动作，应该用“usually work”。此外“nervous feeling”应为复数“nervous feelings”或更自然的“feelings of nervousness/feel nervous”。建议：用一般现在时表达习惯性动作，注意可数名词的单复数。

× When I was a child I'd often go outside to have a walk because my parents think as a child I should more close to the nature.

✓ When I was a child I'd often go outside for a walk because my parents thought that as a child I should be closer to nature.

句中时态混用：主句是过去时（'When I was a child' 和 'I'd often'），但后半句用现在时 'think' 不一致，应该改为过去时 'thought'。另外短语 'have a walk' 更自然为 'go for a walk'，并且 'should more close to the nature' 语序和用词错误，应为 'should be closer to nature'，且通常不加定冠词 'the' 于 nature。建议：保持全句时态一致，注意固定搭配（go for a walk），使用形容词比较结构 'be closer to'。

× I usually walked in a park which is near my house because the park has very beautiful view and when I walk in the parks I can reduce my nerves and stressed.

✓ I usually walk in a park near my house because the park has a very beautiful view, and when I walk in the park I can reduce my nervousness and stress.

错误包括时态、冠词和词形使用：'I usually walked' 与习惯性动作应使用一般现在时 'I usually walk'。'a park which is near my house' 可简化为 'a park near my house'。'has very beautiful view' 缺少不定冠词，应为 'has a very beautiful view'。'when I walk in the parks' 中 'parks' 不需要复数且前后一致，改为单数 'park'。最后 'reduce my nerves and stressed' 中 'nerves' 和 'stressed' 用词不当，应改为名词 'nervousness and stress'。建议：注意时态一致性、冠词使用和名词/形容词形式。

× I would like to go to a beach to take a long walk because I think if I walk on the beach and in by my side is the sea will it will be a beautiful.

✓ I would like to go to a beach to take a long walk because I think if I walk on the beach with the sea by my side it will be beautiful.

句子有词序和多余助动词的问题：'in by my side is the sea will it will be a beautiful' 语序混乱且重复了 'will'。应将修饰短语放在合适位置 'with the sea by my side'，并只保留一个将来助动词 'it will be beautiful'。建议：整理从句结构，删除重复助动词，使用正确的介词短语 'with...by my side' 表示并列位置。

× I went to a park which near my house to walked lately. I like the park because it has it has a beautiful view and it has many cats in it and the cat is very lovely.

✓ I went to a park near my house recently. I like the park because it has a beautiful view and many cats in it; the cats are very lovely.

句中错误包括不正确的固定搭配、时态和重复：'which near my house' 应为 'near my house'（或者 'which is near my house'）；'to walked lately' 时态和动词形式错误，正确为过去式 'went' 已包含过去含义，时间副词应为 'recently'，不需要 'to walked'。'it has it has' 重复，删除一个。'the cat is very lovely' 若指多个猫应为复数 'the cats are very lovely'。建议：使用正确的时间副词 'recently'，避免动词形式重复，注意主谓和名词单复数一致。