Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と流暢さに改善が必要です。冗長な表現（“it is I think it is so wholesome”）を避け、主題文の後に短い具体的な補足（頻度や時間帯、目的）を付け加えると自然になります。接続語を使って論理的につなげ、語彙をもう少し多様にしましょう。

예시: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually take my dog for a 30-minute walk around the neighborhood every morning because it helps both of us stay active and relaxed.

제안: 記憶がはっきりしないことを表すのは良いですが、'I've never remembered'は不自然です。過去の習慣について話すときは過去形を使い、理由や具体例（どんな活動をしたか）を加えると説得力が増します。接続表現で文をまとまりよくしましょう。

예시: I can't remember clearly, but I think I did. My mother enjoyed outdoor activities, so we often visited parks and went hiking together when I was young.

제안: 主張は分かりますが、表現がぎこちなく重複（“wild, wild nature”）や文法誤りがあります。比較をする際は明確にし、具体的な理由（空気がきれい、景色が良い、安全など）を挙げて、接続語でつなぎましょう。

예시: People enjoy walking in parks because the environment is cleaner and safer than in completely wild areas, and parks often have pleasant paths and scenery that help people relax.

제안: 意欲は伝わりますが、言い淀み（'I've I've seen I've just seen before'）や語順の乱れがあります。仮定法を使って明確に述べ、理由や準備（体力作り、装備など）を加えると説得力が出ます。

예시: If I had the chance, I'd like to climb Mount Fuji because I'm interested in mountain climbing and it would be a great challenge and experience.

제안: 現在の習慣と最近の行動が混ざっています。文法（'a largest park'→'the largest park'）や冗長な語（'uh'）を避け、過去形で最近行った場所とその具体的な活動（距離、時間、気持ち）を簡潔に述べましょう。

예시: Recently I went to the largest park near my home with my dog. We ran for about 40 minutes, so I felt completely exhausted but refreshed afterwards.

× Basically, I usually go walk around my neighborhood with my lovely dog and it is I think it is so wholesome and I want to continue this routine.

✓ Basically, I usually walk around my neighborhood with my lovely dog, and I think it is very wholesome so I want to continue this routine.

Use the simple present 'walk' instead of the verb phrase 'go walk' which is not idiomatic; remove the redundant 'it is' and combine clauses with a comma and conjunction; replace 'so wholesome' placement with 'very wholesome' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'I usually walk' and avoid repeating 'it is'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I've never remembered, but I suppose I loved to go outside.

✓ I don't really remember, but I suppose I loved going outside.

'I've never remembered' is incorrect for expressing lack of memory; use 'I don't really remember' or 'I have no memory of it'. Also 'loved to go outside' is acceptable but 'loved going outside' is more natural. Suggestion: use present simple for current state of memory and gerund after 'loved'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× This is because my mom also likes to go to outside and conduct outdoor activities.

✓ This is because my mom also likes to go outside and do outdoor activities.

Do not use 'to' before 'outside'; use 'go outside'. 'Conduct outdoor activities' is grammatical but formal; 'do outdoor activities' is more natural in speech. Suggestion: remove 'to' and use 'do'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I think people can feel the nature which are more clean compared with the wild, wild nature.

✓ I think people can enjoy nature which is cleaner compared with wild nature.

'Feel the nature' is unnatural; 'enjoy nature' or 'experience nature' is better. 'Which are' disagrees with singular 'nature' so use 'which is'. Use comparative 'cleaner' not 'more clean'. Suggestion: use 'nature is cleaner' and avoid repetition 'wild, wild'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Personally, I'm a big fan of going to park.

✓ Personally, I'm a big fan of going to the park.

'Park' as a specific place requires the definite article 'the'. Use 'the park' when referring generally to parks visited. Suggestion: include 'the'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Definitely I'd like to climb Mount Fuji as I've I've seen I've just seen before I'm interested in climbing mountains.

✓ Definitely I'd like to climb Mount Fuji because I've seen pictures of it before, and I'm interested in climbing mountains.

The original has repetition 'I've I've seen' and mixed clause order. Use 'because' to give reason, mention 'seen pictures of it' or 'seen it before' for clarity, and separate ideas with a comma and 'and'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and organize reasons clearly. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I've I've seen I've just seen before I'm interested in climbing mountains.

✓ I've seen it before, and I'm interested in climbing mountains.

Multiple uses of 'I've' and redundant 'just' create confusion. Use a single present perfect 'I've seen it before' to indicate prior experience and then state interest. Suggestion: keep clauses concise and use proper punctuation. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I tend to go to a largest park near the my home with my lovely dog and also we run a lot and uh, and at the end I totally exhausted.

✓ I tend to go to the largest park near my home with my lovely dog, and we also run a lot, and at the end I am totally exhausted.

Use the definite form 'the largest park' not 'a largest park'; remove extra article 'the' before 'my home'; place 'also' appropriately; 'I totally exhausted' lacks a verb 'am'. Suggestion: correct articles, include linking verb, and use commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 22}]}**Note**: Grammar problem type IDs are included in each suggestion's explanation as requested. The JSON uses single quotes in strings and '\n' for newlines as instructed.** (This note is not part of the JSON output) **.**}