Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar, pronunciation and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid filler sounds ("uh", "umm"). Mention specifics (e.g., why you used to carry many keys and what changed).

예시: I used to carry many keys because I lived in different places with separate locks. However, I rarely carry many keys now because most buildings use electronic keypads or keycards, so I only need one or two keys for my home.

제안: Answer directly with correct tense and concise reasons. Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly. Reduce repetition and fillers. Provide a specific example or frequency (e.g., "a few times"), and explain what you did afterward.

예시: Yes, I have lost my keys a few times because I am often in a hurry and do not have a fixed place to keep them. As a result, I started using a key hook by the door and a small pouch in my bag to avoid losing them.

제안: Give a clear, concise account with correct past tense and complete conclusion. Avoid trailing off; finish the story with what happened and how you resolved it. Use linking words ("then", "so", "after that") to organize events and include a specific outcome.

예시: I have only locked myself out once. I visited my grandparents and went into the garden when I realized I had left my key inside. After calling my grandfather, he let me in with a spare key, and since then I always keep a spare with a trusted neighbour.

제안: State your opinion clearly in one sentence, then give specific reasons and a short example. Correct phrasing and vocabulary (e.g., "get along with" instead of unclear phrasing). Avoid repetition and fillers. Mention trust and alternatives (like a lockbox or trusted family member).

예시: I think it can be a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour if you trust them and get along well. For example, I would only give a spare key to a close neighbour I know well, otherwise I prefer a secure lockbox or a family member.

× I used to had a lot of kids with me, but now I uh, don't have many, uh, keys.

✓ I used to have a lot of keys with me, but now I don't have many keys.

The phrase 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past form. 'Used to had' is incorrect; use 'used to have'. Also 'kids' is likely a speech error for 'keys' so corrected to 'keys'. Suggestion: after 'used to' always use the base verb (have, go, live).

× So, umm, many of the buildings are AK less inter uh, so you need just the code to in enter in the K pad and go inside your house.

✓ Many buildings are keyless, so you just need the code to enter on the keypad and go inside your house.

Problems: incorrect prepositions 'to in enter in', wrong word order, and mistaken words ('AK less inter' should be 'keyless', 'K pad' is 'keypad'). Use 'enter on the keypad' or 'enter the code on the keypad'. Suggestion: simplify to 'you just need the code to enter on the keypad'.

× I often lost my key and because I always, I was always in rush and I don't have proper, uh, place to keep my, uh, keys.

✓ I often lost my key because I was always in a rush and I didn't have a proper place to keep my keys.

Mix of tenses: 'often lost' should be simple past or present perfect depending on meaning, but context uses past habits so keep past: 'I often lost'. Remove extra 'and' and use article 'a rush' and 'a proper place'. Also 'don't' should be 'didn't' to match past. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past habits and use articles correctly ('a rush', 'a proper place').

× Uh, and I, I also I, I was forgetful.

✓ I was also forgetful.

Redundant pronoun repetition and wrong auxiliary. Use single subject 'I' and past adjective 'was forgetful'. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'I' and use correct verb 'was' for state in past.

× Umm, in my life, I just once I, uh, forgot the key and the lock myself, uh, out.

✓ Once in my life, I forgot the key and locked myself out.

Word order and verb forms: 'just once I forgot' is awkward; better 'Once in my life, I forgot'. Use past 'locked' rather than 'the lock myself'. Suggestion: use correct past verb 'locked' and clear word order 'locked myself out'.

× Umm, I, I remember, I visited my grandpa, uh, grandma and suddenly I hear some, some weird sound at the garden.

✓ I remember visiting my grandparents, and suddenly I heard some weird sounds in the garden.

Tense inconsistency: 'I remember' (present) can be followed by a past clause 'visiting...' or use past tense 'I remembered'. Here use present 'I remember visiting' plus past 'heard' is acceptable but keep verb form: 'heard' not 'hear'. Also 'grandpa, uh, grandma' should be 'grandparents', 'at the garden' -> 'in the garden'. Suggestion: use 'heard' for past event and 'in the garden' for location.

× So I, we uh, went there and.

✓ So we went there.

Incomplete sentence with filler words. Remove unnecessary 'I' if subject is 'we'. Finish the sentence without trailing 'and'. Suggestion: keep simple 'So we went there.'

× It depends how you, umm, familiar with your, uh, neighbors.

✓ It depends on how familiar you are with your neighbors.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'depends' and incorrect word order 'you familiar' -> 'you are familiar'. Suggestion: use 'depends on' + clause 'how familiar you are with...'.

× I have just nodding Ecuador's with my, a neighbor.

✓ I have just gotten to know a neighbor.

Original contains unintelligible phrase 'nodding Ecuador's'. Likely intended 'just gotten to know'. Also correct article use 'a neighbor'. Suggestion: use 'gotten to know' or 'recently met'.

× So, umm, I just want to leave my keys to who I trusted, so I never, uh, leave uh, the key with them.

✓ So I only want to leave my keys with someone I trust, so I never leave my key with them.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'who I trusted' should be 'someone I trust' for present general preference, or 'trusted' if past. Also preposition 'leave keys to' -> 'leave keys with'. Keep present tense 'trust' and 'leave'. Suggestion: use 'someone I trust' and 'leave my key with them'.