Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), avoid filler words (uh, um) and repetition, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and give one specific detail.

예시: No, I usually carry only one key for my front door because I live alone. For example, if nobody is at home, I use that key to unlock the door and get inside.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence about whether you have lost keys, then briefly tell a specific incident with chronological linking words (e.g., 'once', 'then', 'after that'). Reduce repetition and correct basic grammar (past tense). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, once I lost my house key. I had put it in the back pocket of my jeans, and when I reached home I realized it had fallen out, so I had to search and eventually found it on the street nearby.

제안: Provide a clear frequency statement (e.g., 'sometimes' or 'rarely'), then explain why with a concise reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid filler and grammatical mistakes; use simple past or present perfect correctly.

예시: Sometimes I do forget my keys, especially when I'm in a hurry. Because I leave them on a table by the door, I only notice after I get home and then have to call someone to let me in.

제안: Answer directly with a clear opinion and one reason or condition. Use clearer linking words ('because', 'if') and give a specific condition or precaution (e.g., trustworthiness). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I think leaving a spare key with a trusted neighbour is a good idea because it helps if you forget your keys in an emergency. However, you should only do this with someone reliable and maybe hide the key in a secure spot.

× Well, I only bring one key of my uh, of the main door of my house because it is a very important when uh there.

✓ Well, I only bring one key for the main door of my house because it is very important.

Incorrect article and preposition use: 'one key of the main door' is unnatural; use 'one key for the main door.' 'a very important' is incomplete; 'very important' needs a noun or be used predicatively as here. Also removed filler words. Suggestion: use 'key for' or 'key to' and complete the adjective with a noun or use predicatively (is very important).

× When there is a no someone at my home, then I usually use my key and unlock the door and enter into the home.

✓ When there is no one at my home, I usually use my key to unlock the door and enter the house.

Subject-verb and word order: 'a no someone' is incorrect word order and articles; use 'no one.' Use infinitive 'to unlock' after 'use my key' and 'enter the house' is more natural than 'enter into the home.'

× It not happen usually uh but one time it happened with me when I put my home key at the back of at the back pocket at the back pocket of my Jean and I don't know where it fell down when I reached the home and uh I need a key to unlock the door and when I search it into my pocket.

✓ It doesn't usually happen, but one time it happened to me when I put my house key in the back pocket of my jeans and I didn't know where it fell when I reached home and needed a key to unlock the door while searching my pocket.

Tense and auxiliary errors: use present simple negative 'doesn't usually happen.' Use past simple for the past event ('happened to me', 'put', 'didn't know', 'fell', 'reached', 'needed'). Preposition and noun corrections: 'in the back pocket of my jeans.' Avoid repeating phrases. Use 'while searching my pocket' for clarity.

× Yes, it happened a lot of time when I forget uh, to bring the key with me when I go outside and uh, when uh, I reach the home and I have to open the door on that time, umm, I felt that I forget the key inside.

✓ Yes, it has happened many times when I forget to bring the key with me when I go out, and when I reach home and have to open the door, I realize I left the key inside.

Subject-verb and tense consistency: use present perfect 'has happened' for repeated past experiences. Use 'many times' (quantifier) not 'a lot of time.' Use base form 'forget' after 'when I' for habitual present. For past realization, present simple 'realize' or past 'realised' depending on viewpoint; here present reflection uses 'realize.' Use 'left the key inside' instead of 'I felt that I forget the key inside.'

× I think so it is a good idea to leave a key, uh, at the neighbor house because when, because sometime, uh, we are in hurry, so we forget to bring, uh, some to bring a key with us.

✓ I think it is a good idea to leave a key at a neighbor's house because sometimes we are in a hurry, so we forget to bring a key with us.

Preposition and article errors: use 'at a neighbor's house' or 'with a neighbor.' Use 'sometimes' (spelling) and 'in a hurry' with article. Remove redundant phrases. Use 'a key' consistently.

× So on that time we can ask them to give that key in order to open a door and get inside.

✓ So at that time we can ask them to give us the key to open the door and get inside.

Awkward sentence structure and pronoun omission: use 'at that time' not 'on that time.' Include object 'give us the key.' Use 'to open the door' (no article necessary before 'door' in this context) and 'get inside' is fine. Suggest using concise connectors.