Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be natural and clear: correct word choice, reduce redundancy, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect reasons. Avoid mispronounced or incorrect words (e.g. “KISS” → “keys”).

예시: Yes, I usually carry quite a few keys. For example, I need separate keys for my apartment door, the building entrance and the mailbox, so I always keep them on a single keyring to avoid losing any.

제안: Make the response more concise and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific habit as supporting detail. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly.

예시: No, I have never lost my keys. I always keep them in the same pocket of my bag and check that pocket before I leave, so I rarely worry about misplacing them.

제안: Clarify and simplify: give a direct answer, then one clear reason. Correct word choice and grammar (e.g. “kiss” → “keys”). Avoid vague phrases and repeated clauses. Use a linking word like “because” one time to connect cause and effect.

예시: No, I don’t often forget my keys because I keep them on a keyring in my bag and check for them before I leave. If I ever did forget them, I wouldn’t be able to get into my apartment, so I’m careful.

제안: Answer directly then give a conditional detail. Correct word choice ("kids" → "keys") and avoid hesitation. Use linking words like “if” and “because” to show reasoning, and give a brief example of when it’s appropriate.

예시: It depends on the neighbour. If you have a close, trustworthy relationship with them, it can be fine to leave your keys with them because they can help in an emergency; otherwise, it’s safer to use a spare key or a secure lockbox.

× Yes, I carry a lot of KISS, usually because my apartment required me to unlock the doors and the elevators and mailboxes by using the different keys.

✓ Yes, I carry a lot of keys, usually because my apartment requires me to unlock the doors, the elevator and the mailbox using different keys.

The student used 'KISS' (likely a mispronunciation) and incorrect verb forms. This is a singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issue: 'a lot of keys' is the correct plural noun, and 'my apartment requires' uses present simple for habitual fact. Also 'elevators and mailboxes' is better singular here because each building typically has one elevator and one mailbox in context; use commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'keys' and match verb to subject in present simple (my apartment requires). Use commas to separate items in a list.

× I have never lost my keys in my memory at least. I bring the keys, uh, in the back of the same place, so I'll be careful. More than other people, I want to check my keys frequently.

✓ I have never lost my keys, at least to my memory. I always keep my keys in the same place, so I am careful. More than other people, I tend to check my keys frequently.

Errors include awkward phrasing and incorrect verb choices. 'In my memory' should be 'to my memory'. 'I bring the keys... in the back of the same place' is incorrect; use 'I always keep my keys in the same place' (present simple for habitual action). 'I'll be careful' changes meaning and tense; use 'I am careful' or 'I try to be careful'. 'More than other people' and 'I want to check' is unnatural; use 'I tend to check my keys frequently'. Suggestion: Use standard present-tense expressions for habits (I always keep, I tend to) and clearer idioms like 'to my memory'.

× I have never experienced forgetting my kiss and unlocking the doors because my apartment is the outlook so if I forgot to bring my key I cannot enter the apartment so.

✓ I have never experienced forgetting my keys and being unable to unlock the doors because my apartment has secure access, so if I forgot my key I would not be able to enter the apartment.

Multiple issues: 'kiss' is incorrect noun; should be 'keys'. 'Experienced forgetting' is acceptable but must be followed by consistent structures: 'forgetting my keys and being unable to unlock the doors'. Also tense and modality: hypothetical past should use conditional 'would not be able'. 'My apartment is the outlook' is incorrect phrasing; replaced with 'has secure access'. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'keys', use '-ing' forms for experiences (forgetting, being unable), and use conditional modal 'would' for hypothetical situations.

× Well, it's depending on the relationship with your neighbor. If you, uh, build a good relationship with with your neighbor, it's OK to leave your kids with them because they are trusted.

✓ Well, it depends on the relationship with your neighbor. If you build a good relationship with your neighbor, it's OK to leave your keys with them because they are trustworthy.

Problems: 'it's depending' is incorrect; correct present simple is 'it depends' (conjunction/verb form). 'With with' is duplicated. The sentence incorrectly uses 'kids' instead of 'keys'; this is a word choice error. 'They are trusted' is awkward; use 'they are trustworthy' or 'you can trust them'. Suggestion: Use 'it depends' for conditional general statements, avoid duplicating words, and choose the correct noun ('keys') and adjective ('trustworthy').