Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Pay attention to verb forms, articles, and plural/singular agreement. Limit to max 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually bring several essential keys with me when I go out. For example, I carry my house key, car key and an office key. I always keep them on a single keyring so I don’t lose any.

제안: Use correct past tense and avoid stuttering or repeating phrases. Give a brief clear account: state what happened, why it was a problem, and one consequence or solution. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I lost my house key several years ago. Because I was young and unfamiliar with locksmith services, I panicked and worried I wouldn’t be able to get into the house. In the end I called a locksmith and learned to make a spare key.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then give a concise reason and one specific habit as evidence. Correct awkward phrasing and redundancies (e.g., "go out to everywhere" -> "go out"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I don't. I’m quite meticulous, so before I go out I always check that my keys are in my bag. This simple habit helps me avoid being locked out.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., "neighbors are" not "neighbors is"). Use linking words like "because" and finish the sentence fully. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because you cannot be completely sure about their judgment or who they might let into your home. Instead, it's safer to leave a spare with a trusted family member or use a secure key box.

× Every times I go out I always bring essential keys with me along with me such as my house keys get keys and also local keys that I use when I when when I go to work.

✓ Every time I go out I always bring essential keys with me, such as my house key, gate key, and also the local key that I use when I go to work.

Use 'every time' not 'every times' because 'time' is singular after 'every' (singular and plural issue). 'House key' and 'gate key' are singular items here; use commas to separate items in a list and include 'the' before 'local key' for specificity. Remove repeated words ('along with me', duplicate 'when'). Suggestion: Practice using 'every' + singular noun (every time, every day) and list items with commas and appropriate articles.

× Yes, I did lost my house key several several years ago.

✓ Yes, I lost my house key several years ago.

In English, do-support with 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'did lose' or simply use the past simple 'lost'. Using 'did lost' is incorrect (past tense issue). Also remove duplicate 'several'. Suggestion: Use 'I lost' for past simple or 'I did lose' for emphasis with base verb 'lose'.

× At that time I was still young and didn't didn't know about locksmith about locksmith.

✓ At that time I was still young and didn't know about locksmiths.

Duplicated words should be removed. 'Didn't' requires base form; 'know about locksmith' is unnatural—use plural 'locksmiths' or phrase 'how to contact a locksmith' (incorrect use of pronouns/word choice). Also remove duplicate phrase. Suggestion: Say 'didn't know about locksmiths' or 'didn't know how to contact a locksmith.'

× So I was very panic and worried that I may that I that I may cannot enter my house.

✓ So I was very panicked and worried that I might not be able to enter my house.

'Panic' is a noun; use adjective 'panicked' or 'in a panic'. 'May cannot' is ungrammatical; use 'might not be able to' for past-tense possibility. Remove repeated fragments. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjective forms and modal + 'be able to' for ability/possibility in past contexts.

× I am someone that is very meticulous so before I go out to everywhere I usually check my essential keys with me first so that I won't get myself getting locked out.

✓ I am someone who is very meticulous, so before I go out I usually check that I have my essential keys so that I won't get locked out.

Use 'who' for people not 'that' (pronoun choice). 'Go out to everywhere' is incorrect—use 'go out' or 'go everywhere'. 'Check my essential keys with me' is awkward; use 'check that I have my essential keys'. Remove redundant 'myself getting'. Also ensure tense consistency. Suggestion: Use relative pronoun 'who', simpler adverbial phrases ('go out'), and 'check that I have' to confirm possession.

× In my opinion, I think that it is a bad idea because even though we we think that our neighbors is a nice is a nice person, but we still don't know what kind of people they are.

✓ In my opinion, I think that it is a bad idea because even though we may think that our neighbors are nice people, we still don't know what kind of people they are.

Remove duplicate 'we'. 'Neighbors' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement/incorrect use of pronouns). 'Is a nice person' should be 'are nice people' for plural. Also avoid using both 'because' and 'but' together. Suggestion: Use plural agreement for 'neighbors' and avoid redundant conjunctions.

× They might be letting bad person to enter our house and.

✓ They might let a bad person enter our house.

'Might be letting ... to enter' is awkward and incorrect; use modal + base verb 'might let' or 'might allow'. Include the article 'a' before 'bad person'. Remove trailing 'and'. Suggestion: Use 'might let a bad person enter' or 'might allow a bad person to enter' for clearer structure.