Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail and a brief reason. Use correct tense and articles, avoid repetition, and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, I usually only carry one key. I do this because I worry about theft, so I prefer to take just the main house key when I leave for work or school.

제안: Organize the story with a clear past-tense topic sentence and two concise supporting details (what happened and why). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (past simple). Use linking words like 'when' and 'because' to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I lost my key once when I was in my first year at university. I had it in my pocket when I went shopping, but I must have dropped it, because I noticed it was gone as soon as I reached home.

제안: Give a direct negative answer, then briefly explain with specific measures you take to avoid losing keys. Use clearer sentence structure and avoid filler words.

예시: No, I rarely forget my keys. After the incident last year I started keeping my key in a specific pocket and using a small keychain so I always know where it is.

제안: State your opinion clearly, give one or two reasons, and use softer language if appropriate (e.g., 'personally' or 'I prefer not to'). Avoid absolute statements and refine grammar for fluency.

예시: Personally, I wouldn't leave my keys with a neighbour. I prefer not to because I don't always know how reliable others are, and I worry about my home's security.

× Not lot of keys.

✓ Not a lot of keys.

Missing article 'a' before 'lot' causes singular/plural error; 'a lot' is the correct quantifier for countable context. Use 'a lot of' for many items or 'not a lot of' for few.

× I prefer to bring only one key because there is a fear of theft.

✓ I prefer to bring only one key because I am afraid of theft.

'There is a fear of theft' is awkward and uses existential 'there is' incorrectly; replace with active present expression 'I am afraid of' to match 'prefer' and clarify the subject's feeling.

× So now I'm bringing only one key.

✓ So now I bring only one key.

Present continuous 'I'm bringing' suggests an ongoing action; for habitual behavior use simple present 'I bring' or 'I carry'. That matches 'prefer' and general habit.

× It is a key of the main house door so I keep with me when I was going to work or going to school.

✓ It is the key to the main house door, so I keep it with me when I go to work or to school.

Use definite article 'the' and preposition 'key to' rather than 'key of'. Also 'keep it with me' needs object pronoun 'it'. Tense must be simple present 'I go' to indicate habitual action rather than past 'was going'.

× Uh, yes, I was, remember when I lost my key is, uh, is when I was in my first year of graduation.

✓ Yes, I remember when I lost my key; it was when I was in my first year of university.

Sentence contained unnecessary 'was' and clutter; use past simple 'it was' to locate the event in the past and 'first year of university' is a natural phrasing. Remove filler words for clarity.

× Uh, I was, uh, take the key with me, but when I was going for shopping, I forget where I keep this key and it may be fell from my pocket.

✓ I had taken the key with me, but when I went shopping, I forgot where I had put it and it may have fallen out of my pocket.

Sequence of past events requires past perfect 'had taken' and 'had put' to show earlier actions; 'went' and 'forgot' are past simple. 'May be fell' is incorrect; use modal perfect 'may have fallen'.

× So at the time I lost my key.

✓ So at that time I lost my key.

Use 'that time' to refer back to the previously mentioned moment; this is a simple past narration and 'lost' is correct but needs 'that' for coherence.

× No, I'm not a kind of the person who often lose the key.

✓ No, I'm not the kind of person who often loses keys.

Use 'the kind of person' (no 'a' before 'kind'), plural 'keys' or 'the key' with context, and third-person singular verb 'loses' to agree with 'who'.

× Uh, it's the situation, uh, of only last year after that, the incident, I carefully, uh, take the keys and keep it with me with the safe.

✓ That happened only last year; after that incident I have been careful and take my keys and keep them safe with me.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrasing. Use present perfect 'have been careful' to show ongoing result of a past event, plural pronoun 'them' for 'keys', and 'keep them safe' is natural. Avoid filler words.

× I don't think so it is a good idea to give the key to the neighbor because today we can't trust anybody so, so we can't give the key to the neighbors according to my perceptions.

✓ I don't think it is a good idea to give a key to a neighbor because today we can't trust people, so we shouldn't give our keys to neighbors in my opinion.

Fix word order 'I don't think it is...' and replace 'anybody' with 'people' for generalization. Use modal 'shouldn't' to express advisability rather than 'can't'. Use article 'a' before 'key' and 'a neighbor', and 'in my opinion' is a clearer expression than 'according to my perceptions'.