Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g., 'I think that bringing a lot of keys is uncomfortable for me because they are heavy and not portable').

예시: No, I don't. I only carry a car key and a house key, because carrying many keys is uncomfortable and bulky.

제안: Improve clarity and correctness. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly how you keep keys safe. Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g., 'keep my keys in a zipped pocket' rather than 'boot' or 'bank'). Avoid confusing phrases and be specific.

예시: No, I've never lost my keys. I always keep them in a zipped pocket inside my bag, so they are safe and hard for anyone to steal.

제안: Make the sentence complete and use more natural phrasing. Begin with a clear negative or positive response, then add a concise reason with linking words. Correct pronouns and verb forms (e.g., 'I don't often forget my keys or lock myself out because...').

예시: No, I don't often forget my keys or lock myself out because I always keep them in a zippered compartment in my bag.

제안: Provide a clearer opinion and clearer reasons. Use a topic sentence (e.g., 'It depends on the neighbour'), then give one or two specific criteria for trustworthiness. Avoid unclear words and phrases; use 'reliable' or 'trustworthy' instead of 'burned' and avoid irrelevant phrases.

예시: It depends on the neighbour. If they are trustworthy and reliable, I would leave a spare key with them; otherwise I would prefer to keep a spare in a secure place like a locked box.

× Definitely not because I only bring a car key and a house key.

✓ Definitely not, because I only bring a car key and a house key.

No plural error here; sentence is acceptable. Added a comma for clarity. Suggestion: use punctuation to separate clauses for readability.

× I think that bring a lot of keys is not comfortable for me because it's really heavy and not portable.

✓ I think that bringing a lot of keys is not comfortable for me because they are really heavy and not easy to carry.

The verb after 'think that' requires the -ing form when the noun phrase functions as the subject (bringing a lot of keys). 'It' was incorrectly used to refer to 'keys' (plural), so use 'they' and change 'not portable' to 'not easy to carry' for naturalness.

× I have never lost my keys because I have a bag which I can boot my keys into so no one thief can rob them out and I really sure that really make sure that all the keys in the bank.

✓ I have never lost my keys because I have a bag where I can put my keys, so no thief can steal them, and I am sure that this keeps all my keys safe.

Multiple errors: 'boot' should be 'put' (verb choice), 'which I can put my keys into' better as 'where I can put my keys' (preposition/relative clause), 'no one thief' should be 'no thief' (quantifier), 'rob them out' incorrect verb phrase — use 'steal them', and 'I really sure that really make sure that all the keys in the bank' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I am sure that this keeps all my keys safe.' Tense remains present perfect where appropriate.

× Don't often forget my keys and look myself out because I always put them into a zippered bag to make sure that I don't forget any key such as car keys or house keys.

✓ I don't often forget my keys or lock myself out because I always put them in a zippered bag to make sure I don't forget any key, such as car keys or house keys.

Errors: missing subject 'I' at start, 'look myself out' is incorrect — use 'lock myself out' (verb choice), 'put them into' is acceptable but 'put them in' is more natural, and redundant 'to make sure that' simplified. Maintain present simple tense.

× I think it depends on the type of neighbor.

✓ I think it depends on the type of neighbor.

Sentence is correct as is. No change needed. Suggestion: you can say 'the neighbour' or 'the neighbor's personality' for clarity.

× They are burned or they are good.

✓ They may be rude, or they may be trustworthy.

'They are burned' is not a correct description of people here. The intended contrast is between unreliable and reliable neighbours. Use adjectives like 'rude' or 'untrustworthy' versus 'trustworthy' to convey meaning. Also add modal 'may' to indicate possibility.

× Yeah and you know, keep it, bring it into a zebra bank for myself is more safe favorite than.

✓ Yes, you know, keeping my keys in a safe place for myself is safer and preferable.

Several problems: 'zebra bank' is unclear/incorrect — likely intended 'safety deposit box' or 'secure place'; 'keep it, bring it into' is ungrammatical; use gerund 'keeping' as subject, 'is safer and preferable' corrects comparative and word order. Suggest specific phrase like 'a safe place' or 'a safety deposit box' for clarity.