Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural: give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting detail. Use linking words and specific reasons. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'Anki').

예시: No, I usually only carry one or two keys. I prefer to keep the number small because I tend to lose things, so carrying fewer keys helps me keep track of them.

제안: Answer directly and organize time references clearly. Use correct tenses and fewer fillers. Give a specific recent example and brief context with linking words like 'for example' or 'last time'.

예시: Yes, I've lost my keys several times. For example, I lost them just yesterday when I visited the waterfront station; I realized they were missing when I reached home.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and give a concise reason with a specific past example. Use past tense correctly and avoid fillers. Link the cause and effect with words like 'because' or 'since'.

예시: No, I rarely lock myself out because I became more careful after an incident about seven years ago. Since then I always check my pockets and keep a spare key at a trusted place.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and better vocabulary. Avoid awkward phrases like 'depict your safety'. Use linking words and offer an alternative solution.

예시: No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because it could compromise safety and privacy. Instead, I would leave a spare key with a close family member or use a secure key safe.

× No I don't get a lot of Anki with me.

✓ No, I don't carry a lot of keys with me.

The speaker used 'get a lot of Anki' which is incorrect word choice and quantifier usage. 'Get' is not the best verb here; 'carry' or 'bring' fits. 'Anki' appears to be a mistake for 'keys'. Use 'a lot of' before a plural count noun (keys). Improve by using correct noun and verb: 'I don't carry a lot of keys.'

× I just getting one or two key with me because I have a bad habit and I frequently lose my key.

✓ I just bring one or two keys with me because I have a bad habit and I frequently lose my keys.

The original uses the present participle 'getting' without an auxiliary; use the base verb 'bring' to match simple present. Also correct singular/plural: 'one or two keys' (plural) and 'my keys' (plural) to agree with 'frequently lose'. Suggestions: use simple present 'I just bring' and plural 'keys' where appropriate.

× Before I mentioned that I have a bad habit, yes uh, I had lost a key a plenty of time and last time I lost my key yesterday when I had visit a waterfront station.

✓ As I mentioned, yes, I have lost keys many times; the last time was yesterday when I visited a waterfront station.

The sentence mixes past perfect and simple past incorrectly. Use present perfect 'have lost' for experiences up to now ('many times'). 'A plenty of time' is ungrammatical—use 'many times'. For the specific past event use simple past 'was' and 'visited'. Also remove redundant 'had' before 'visit'. Suggestions: separate general experience (present perfect) from a specific past event (simple past).

× No, I do not because I am much serious about this matter. Uh, because it happened, uh, me around, uh, uh, seven years ago I faced a lot of difficulties.

✓ No, I do not, because I take this matter very seriously. It happened to me around seven years ago and I faced many difficulties.

Use the phrasal verb 'take seriously' rather than 'am much serious'. 'It happened to me' requires the preposition 'to'. 'A lot of difficulties' is acceptable but 'many difficulties' is more natural. Also reorder clauses for clarity. Suggestions: say 'I take this matter very seriously' and 'It happened to me around seven years ago.'

× No, definitely no, because leaving the key with neighbors is also a depict your safety and privacy.

✓ No, definitely not, because leaving the key with neighbors can jeopardize your safety and privacy.

'Depict' is the wrong verb; use 'jeopardize' or 'endanger'. 'Also a depict your safety' is ungrammatical. Use 'can jeopardize your safety and privacy.' Also 'definitely not' is the correct phrase. Suggestions: replace incorrect verb with 'jeopardize' and fix 'definitely not.'

× Privacy is really matter for every family and every person, so I never prefer to keep the key by never.

✓ Privacy really matters for every family and person, so I would never prefer to leave my key with them.

'Privacy is really matter' lacks verb agreement—use 'privacy really matters.' 'I never prefer to keep the key by never' is ungrammatical; use 'I would never leave my key with them' or 'I prefer never to leave my key with neighbors.' Also adjust article and pronoun usage. Suggestions: use correct verb 'matters' and clear expression 'I would never leave my key with them.'