Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar and word choice. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. For example, say you carry several keys and briefly give one concise reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if adding detail.

예시: Yes, I usually carry several keys. I do this because I want to avoid being locked out, and having them ensures I can access my home and workplace when needed.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence. Correct small awkward phrases and use a linking word to show the change of habit. Provide a specific detail about what you do now.

예시: Yes, I have misplaced my keys a few times because I'm a bit absent-minded. However, I now always put them on a hook by the door, so I can find them easily the next day.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast past and present. Fix tense and phrasing (e.g., 'I developed a habit' → 'I've developed the habit of'). Keep sentences concise and specific about the habit.

예시: Rarely — I've developed the habit of always putting my keys in the same spot and checking for them before I leave. It used to happen often, but these routines have solved the problem.

제안: Provide a direct answer and then two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Correct minor phrasing and avoid repetition (e.g., 'comfortable and secure' overlap).

예시: No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because I don't know them well and I worry about security. If I needed a spare key, I would leave it with a trusted family member instead.

× Yes, usually I carry several keys with me 'cause I want to make sure that I never be locked out and I have access to any place that I need at any times.

✓ Yes, usually I carry several keys with me because I want to make sure that I am never locked out and I have access to any place that I need at any time.

The phrase 'never be locked out' is incorrect because English requires a finite verb form with the subject; here the correct passive finite form is 'am never locked out' (present simple passive). 'Cause' is informal; use 'because' in formal speech. 'At any times' is nonstandard; use 'at any time' (adverbial phrase singular). Suggestions: use 'I am never locked out' for correct subject-verb structure and 'at any time' for idiomatic usage.

× To your keys, Yes, I have misplaced my keys a few times because I'm a bit absent minded. Now I try to place my keys at the same spot so I can always find them the next day.

✓ Yes, I have misplaced my keys a few times because I'm a bit absent-minded. Now I try to put my keys in the same spot so I can always find them the next day.

'To your keys' is an unnecessary and incorrect phrase here; it should be removed. 'Absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded' when used as a compound adjective. 'Place my keys at the same spot' is awkward; 'put my keys in the same spot' or 'in the same place' is more natural. Suggestions: remove irrelevant phrases, hyphenate compound adjectives, and use 'put...in' or 'leave...in' for locations.

× It rarely happens to me now because I developed my habit, always put my keys on the same spot and to check on them from time to time before leaving the house.

✓ It rarely happens to me now because I developed the habit of always putting my keys in the same spot and checking them from time to time before leaving the house.

Parallel structure and gerund use are needed: 'the habit of always putting' uses the gerund 'putting' after 'habit of.' 'Always put my keys... and to check' mixes base form and infinitive; both should be gerunds ('putting' and 'checking') for parallelism. 'On the same spot' should be 'in the same spot.' Suggestions: use 'the habit of' + gerund and maintain parallel gerund forms.

× I'm always trying to check if I put them in my purse or not, but it used to happen a lot to me in the past.

✓ I'm always trying to check if I put them in my purse or not, but it used to happen to me a lot in the past.

The phrase 'used to happen a lot to me in the past' is wordy and mildly awkward; moving 'a lot' to follow 'to me' improves natural word order: 'used to happen to me a lot.' The rest is correct tense-wise: 'used to' expresses past habitual actions. Suggestion: prefer natural adverb placement 'to me a lot'.

× No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave the keys with the neighbor especially.

✓ No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave the keys with a neighbor, especially.

Using 'the neighbor' implies a specific neighbor already known; since the speaker says they don't know their neighbors well, 'a neighbor' is more appropriate. Also punctuation and word order improved by placing 'especially' after the clause. Suggestions: use 'a neighbor' for a non-specific person and place adverbs naturally.

× I don't really know my neighbors well enough and I wouldn't feel comfortable and secure knowing that someone has access to my place.

✓ I don't really know my neighbors well enough, and I wouldn't feel comfortable or secure knowing that someone has access to my place.

Use 'or' rather than 'and' when listing alternative feelings (comfortable or secure) is more natural here; 'and' is not strictly wrong but 'or' better conveys either feeling. Also add a comma before 'and' for compound sentence clarity. Suggestion: use 'or' between related adjectives expressing similar concerns.