Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid filler words (uh), and structure the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'back keys' → 'house and bike keys') and correct grammar (use present simple for habits).

예시: No, I don't. I usually forget keys, so I only take the essentials like my house key and bike key to avoid losing too many items.

제안: Answer directly with a past experience using correct past tense and clearer sequence words. Avoid vague phrases like 'threw my key away' if you mean you misplaced it. Add a brief consequence or result to enrich the response.

예시: Yes, I have. Once after a football match I misplaced my keys and couldn't find them, so I had to get a replacement key made the same day.

제안: Expand beyond a one-word answer: give a topic sentence and one brief supporting detail or frequency indicator. Use linking words if giving an explanation or example.

예시: Yes, I do sometimes forget them. For example, I lock myself out about once every few months when I'm in a hurry.

제안: Give a balanced opinion: state your view clearly, provide a reason and use linking words. Remove fillers and correct phrasing ('close with them' → 'close to them'; 'you are know him' → 'you have known them').

예시: I think it can be acceptable if you know and trust your neighbour. However, I wouldn't do it myself because I don't know my neighbours well and therefore prefer other options like a spare key with a family member.

× I usually lost my key, especially when I go to play football.

✓ I usually lose my key, especially when I go to play football.

The sentence mixes habitual present meaning with a past-tense verb 'lost'. Use simple present 'lose' for habitual actions ('usually' indicates habit). Change 'lost' to 'lose' to match tense and meaning.

× I just threw my key away and when I finish my match I didn't find out my key and so I have to make a new key.

✓ I often throw my key away, and when I finish my match I can't find my key, so I have to get a new one.

Several issues: 'threw' (past) conflicts with habitual context—use 'throw' or 'often throw'. 'didn't find out my key' is incorrect phrasing; use 'can't find my key' for present inability or 'couldn't find my key' for past. 'make a new key' is acceptable but 'get a new one' sounds natural. Adjust verbs to match habitual present and correct verb phrases.

× I usually forgot, uh, key when I go out.

✓ I usually forget my keys when I go out.

Mix of past 'forgot' with present time expression 'usually' and 'go out'. Use simple present 'forget' for habitual actions. Also 'key' should be plural 'keys' for generalization and include possessive 'my'.

× So I just bring my home keys or just my back keys, something like that.

✓ So I just bring my house keys or my back-up keys, something like that.

'Home keys' is acceptable but 'house keys' is more natural. 'Back keys' is unclear; likely 'back-up keys' or 'spare keys' is intended. Ensure plural form 'keys' remains if referring to more than one key.

× I usually lost my key, especially when I go to play football. I just threw my key away and when I finish my match I didn't find out my key and so I have to make a new key.

✓ I usually lose my keys, especially when I go to play football. I sometimes misplace them, and when I finish my match I can't find them, so I have to get new keys.

Use plural 'keys' when speaking generally. 'Misplace' is a natural verb for losing temporarily. Keep verb tenses consistent for habitual actions (simple present) and use natural expressions like 'can't find them' and 'get new keys'.

× Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?

✓ Do you always bring a lot of keys?

Adding 'with you' is redundant after 'bring' because 'bring' already implies carrying to a place; in questions about habit, 'bring a lot of keys' is sufficient. If emphasizing accompaniment, 'with you' is possible but not necessary.

× I'm the person who, uh, usually forgot, uh, key when I go out.

✓ I'm the person who usually forgets my keys when I go out.

Relative clause has third-person singular subject 'who' referring to 'I' conceptually but the verb should agree with the implied subject; use 'forgets' in many colloquial corrections, but more natural is 'who usually forgets' if referencing 'person'. Alternatively 'who usually forget' is incorrect. Also 'key' should be plural 'keys' and possessive 'my'.

× It's OK if your neighbor is a good person and you close with them or you are know him for a long time and you trust him.

✓ It's OK if your neighbor is a good person and you are close to them or have known them for a long time and you trust them.

Use 'close to' rather than 'close with'. 'You are know him' is ungrammatical—use present perfect 'have known them'. Maintain gender-neutral 'them' or consistently use 'him'/'her'. Also 'trust him' should match pronoun choice.

× I think I do not leave my key with, uh, a neighbor because I do, I, I am not a person who talk too much with the neighbors, so I don't trust him.

✓ I don't think I would leave my key with a neighbor because I'm not someone who talks much with the neighbors, so I don't trust them.

'I do not leave' is awkward for hypothetical; 'I don't think I would leave' expresses preference. Use 'talks' for third-person singular 'someone who'. Use gender-neutral 'them' to match 'neighbor' or keep pronouns consistent. Make verb forms consistent and natural.