Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and grammar, avoid repetition, and add a brief specific detail about taste or ingredients using linking words. Keep answers natural and within five sentences.

예시: My favourite food is Pacapao, a spicy Thai stir-fry my mother often cooked when I was a child. It combines tender meat, crunchy celery and a bold chili-garlic sauce, so it’s both savory and slightly sweet. I especially like it with a runny fried egg on top because the yolk adds richness to the dish.

제안: Correct pronoun and agreement errors, be concise and specific about the food and memory, and use linking words to connect ideas. Limit to up to five sentences and avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of menu.'

예시: When I was young, I loved the braised pork belly my grandmother made. She packed it in my lunch every day, so I associated that rich, soy-sweet flavor with comfort and energy for school. Because of that routine, her cooking became my favourite childhood food.

제안: Improve coherence and word choice, provide one clear reason and a specific example of seasonal variation or lack thereof using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'same stable.'

예시: Not really. I tend to eat the same fruits year-round because convenience matters and some seasonal ingredients are hard to find where I live. For example, I rarely switch my meals between summer and winter, so I usually buy bananas and apples that are available all year.

× My favorite food is Pacapao, a spicy Thai stir fry that my mother often cook when I was a child.

✓ My favorite food is Pacapao, a spicy Thai stir-fry that my mother often cooked when I was a child.

Subject 'my mother' is third person singular so the verb should be in past tense 'cooked' to match the time frame 'when I was a child'. Also 'stir fry' is better hyphenated as 'stir-fry' when used as a noun or adjective. Suggestion: use third-person singular or past form depending on time reference; here use past 'cooked' to match 'was'.

× I love it, both celery flavor and the way it tastes.

✓ I love it for both its celery flavor and the way it tastes.

This sentence needs a prepositional phrase 'for both' and a possessive pronoun 'its' to link 'celery flavor' to 'it'. Without 'its' the noun phrase is awkward. Suggestion: add 'for both its' to express two reasons clearly.

× Even better with a fried egg on top.

✓ It is even better with a fried egg on top.

The original fragment lacks a main verb and subject. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence and maintains the present general truth about the dish. Suggestion: include an explicit subject and verb when making a complete sentence.

× When he was young, Avery enjoyed different pork belly that my grandma made.

✓ When I was young, I enjoyed the pork belly that my grandma made.

Pronouns and subjects are inconsistent: the question asked about the student, but 'he' and 'Avery' mismatch. Use 'I' to refer to the student. Also 'different pork belly' is odd; 'the pork belly' or 'pork belly dishes' is better. Suggestion: keep subject consistent and choose correct noun form.

× She used to pack my lunch every morning so I could enjoy a tasty meal and have enough energy for school, so I loved her cooking.

✓ She used to pack my lunch every morning so I could enjoy a tasty meal and have enough energy for school, so I loved her cooking.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but contains a style issue: repeating 'so' twice is redundant. Consider combining clauses: 'She used to pack my lunch every morning so I could enjoy a tasty meal and have enough energy for school, and I loved her cooking.' Suggestion: avoid repetitive conjunctions for smoother flow.

× She has a lot of menu that I like to enjoy.

✓ She has a lot of dishes on the menu that I like to enjoy.

'A lot of menu' is ungrammatical because 'menu' is a countable or collective noun treated differently; use 'a lot of dishes on the menu' or 'many items on the menu'. Also add a relative pronoun 'that' is okay but 'on the menu' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use appropriate quantifier with countable noun and specify 'dishes' or 'items'.

× Not really, I mostly eat the same type of fruit throughout the year because I prefer convenient and some seasoning ingredients are hard to find where I live.

✓ Not really. I mostly eat the same types of fruit throughout the year because I prefer convenience and some seasoning ingredients are hard to find where I live.

'Same type of fruit' should be plural 'same types of fruit' if referring to several fruits across the year. 'Prefer convenient' is incorrect; use noun 'convenience'. Sentence originally had comma splice; split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: match noun forms and use correct nouns after 'prefer'.

× For example, I rarely change my meal for summer or winter, so I often buy the same stable.

✓ For example, I rarely change my meals for summer or winter, so I often buy the same staples.

'Change my meal' should be plural 'change my meals' when talking about seasons generally. 'Buy the same stable' is incorrect word choice; 'staples' (staple foods) is correct. Ensure noun plurality agrees with general habitual actions. Suggestion: use plural nouns 'meals' and 'staples' when speaking about recurring items.