Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm), and use correct verb forms and articles. Add one specific detail about the cake (type or flavor) and a linking phrase to make the answer coherent.

예시: I love cake, especially rich chocolate yule cake. Every Christmas, my boyfriend and I buy a special cake and enjoy it together; this tradition makes the holiday feel warm and memorable.

제안: Correct grammar and be specific. Use past tense consistently and remove fillers. Give a brief reason and one concrete memory to support your statement, linked clearly.

예시: When I was a child, my favourite food was curry rice. My parents cooked it almost every night, and I loved the spicy, aromatic sauce; it reminds me of family dinners and my mother teaching me to mix the rice and sauce.

제안: Answer directly and grammatically. If saying no, briefly explain and provide a contrasting example if relevant. Remove fillers, correct plurals/articles, and use linking words to make the statement coherent.

예시: Not really. I tend to eat the same types of food year-round, such as fish, meat and cheese. However, I do enjoy seasonal fruits in summer, like watermelon, which I only eat when they are in season.

× My favorite food is cake because I like something sweet.

✓ My favorite food is cake because I like sweet things.

The phrase 'something sweet' is awkward here; 'sweet' should modify a noun. Use the plural noun 'things' after 'sweet' to express general preference. This fixes adjective-noun agreement and sounds natural in English.

× ...and eat with my boyfriend and enjoying the meal together umm it is something special we do every year.

✓ ...and eat with my boyfriend and enjoy the meal together. It is something special we do every year.

After 'and' coordinating two verbs sharing the same subject, both verbs should be in base form: 'eat and enjoy', not 'eat and enjoying'. Also split into two sentences to avoid a run-on and to capitalize 'It' at the start of the new sentence.

× My favorite food when I was child was a Curry rice.

✓ My favorite food when I was a child was curry rice.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' causes incorrect noun phrase. Also 'curry rice' should be lowercased unless it's a proper noun, and there is no need for 'a' before 'curry rice' when used uncountably; however with 'was' you can say 'was curry rice' without an extra article.

× It is something my parents would umm, cook me every night.

✓ It is something my parents would cook for me every night.

In English, 'cook me' is ambiguous and nonstandard for 'cook for me' when referring to preparing food on someone's behalf. Use the preposition 'for' to indicate the beneficiary of the action.

× I really like that because of the flavor and it brings back on so much memories from childhood.

✓ I really like that because of the flavor, and it brings back so many memories from my childhood.

The phrasal verb 'bring back' does not take the preposition 'on' here, so remove 'on'. Use 'so many' with countable noun 'memories' (not 'so much memories'). Add 'my' before 'childhood' for natural possessive reference. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× No, I don't eat a different foods at different time of the year because I do have umm, my favorite food that I eat every day which is including umm, fish, meat, cheese.

✓ No, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year because I have my favorite foods that I eat regularly, including fish, meat, and cheese.

Multiple issues: 'a different foods' mixes singular article with plural noun—remove 'a'. 'different time' should be plural 'different times' when referring to seasons. 'I do have' is unnecessary; 'I have' is simpler. 'my favorite food that I eat every day which is including' is awkward—use 'my favorite foods that I eat regularly, including' and list items with commas. Also add Oxford comma before 'and cheese' for clarity.