Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your favourite food, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words like “dried.” Use correct tense and articles.

예시: My favourite food is pizza because it’s comforting and versatile. For example, I enjoy the contrast of the crispy crust and the gooey, cheesy topping. Also, it’s convenient to eat when I’m busy, so I often choose pizza for a quick, satisfying meal.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence about what you liked, correct grammar (use ‘I’ and past tense), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘for example’. Avoid unfinished sentences.

예시: When I was young, my favourite food was pasta because my mum always cooked it for me. It was easy to eat and comforting; for example, she would make tomato spaghetti whenever I was upset, and it always cheered me up.

제안: Answer directly, use present tense, and be specific about when and why you try different foods. Use linking words like ‘for example’ or ‘also’. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect expressions (e.g. “a worthy person”).

예시: Yes, I often try different foods throughout the year, especially during festivals or when I travel. For example, I try seasonal dishes in winter and local street food when I visit a new country, which helps me adapt to different cultures and expand my tastes.

× For the food that made me feel comfortable is pizza because I feel like it can help me to try many taste many tastes just on it, like crispy and cheesy on it and it is easy to eat and dried.

✓ My favourite food is pizza because it makes me feel comfortable; it lets me try many tastes, like crispy and cheesy flavors, and it is easy to eat.

Original sentence has a confused structure and redundant phrases (e.g., 'For the food that made me feel comfortable is pizza', 'many taste many tastes just on it'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The corrected sentence presents a clear subject ('My favourite food'), verb ('is'), and reasons separated by a semicolon and commas. Suggestions: state the main idea first, avoid repetition, and use parallel phrasing for lists ('crispy and cheesy flavors').

× When it was young my mum always made pasta for me because it easy to eat and is my number one food that I really like it so she know that pasta can heal me in everything when I'm sad or.

✓ When I was young, my mum always made pasta for me because it was easy to eat and my favourite food; she knew that pasta could comfort me when I was sad.

This sentence misuses pronouns and subjects ('When it was young' refers incorrectly to 'it' instead of 'I'; 'because it easy' lacks subject/verb; 'I really like it so she know' mixes tenses and pronouns). These are incorrect pronoun and verb form issues (ID 12 and ID 5). I applied past tense consistently ('was', 'was', 'knew', 'could') to match 'When I was young' and removed redundant phrases. Suggestions: ensure pronouns clearly refer to the correct noun (use 'I' for the speaker), match tense across the sentence, and avoid trailing incomplete clauses.'

× So I am open minded person so I would try new food on every year or every opportunity that I had.

✓ I am an open-minded person, so I try new foods every year or whenever I have the opportunity.

Original uses inconsistent modals/tenses ('I am' then 'I would try' then 'that I had') which is a present-tense context; this is a present tense issue (ID 6). Also missing article 'an' and plural 'foods'. Corrections: use 'I am' with simple present 'I try' for habitual actions, add articles ('an'), hyphenate 'open-minded', and pluralize 'foods' for generality. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habitual statements and include necessary articles.'

× I think that it will help me a worthy person that can eat anything and I can adapt on in every country that I go.

✓ I think that it will help me become a more adaptable person who can eat anything and adapt in every country I visit.

Original uses incorrect forms and prepositions ('help me a worthy person', 'adapt on in every country that I go'). This includes incorrect present participle and verb forms (ID 10) and preposition misuse. The corrected sentence uses 'become' to express change, 'adapt' without 'on', and 'visit' instead of 'go' for clarity. Suggestions: use correct verb forms after 'help' ('help me become'), avoid unnecessary prepositions ('adapt in'), and use 'visit' or 'go to' for countries.