Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and give specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say you like Thai food despite not loving spicy dishes, then explain why (e.g., balance of sweet, sour, salty, and aromatic herbs) and give a short example of a favorite dish. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and fix word choices (e.g., ‘rather than’, ‘combines many flavors’, not ‘ditch’).

예시: I like Thai food most, even though I don't enjoy very spicy dishes. This is because Thai cuisine balances sweet, sour, salty and aromatic flavors, which makes every meal interesting. For example, I enjoy pad thai because its tamarind sauce and peanuts create a perfect sweet-and-sour contrast.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct verb forms, remove filler words, and give specific details about why you liked it. Use linking words to add coherence (e.g., ‘because’, ‘for example’, ‘also’). Describe flavors and memories briefly and accurately. Keep to 1–3 concise sentences.

예시: When I was young, I used to love fried rice because it was easy to eat and widely available. For example, my family often added sweet soy sauce and eggs, which gave the dish a mild, comforting flavor.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatical topic sentence and then a specific supporting detail with a linking word. Correct subject-verb agreement and awkward phrases, avoid repetition, and finish the thought. Mention one or two seasonal examples and a reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I avoid very spicy dishes because the heat makes me prefer lighter, cooler foods like salads and fruit.

× I really like Thai food, even I don't like spicy food, but I prefer Thai food than other cuisine because it combines a lot of flavors in one ditch and I can.

✓ I really like Thai food; although I don't like very spicy food, I prefer Thai cuisine to other cuisines because it combines many flavors in one dish and I can enjoy it.

The sentence has several issues: incorrect conjunction use ('even' should be 'although' to contrast), wrong comparative structure ('prefer ... to' not 'prefer ... than'), incorrect noun ('ditch' should be 'dish'), incorrect quantifier ('a lot of flavors' better as 'many flavors'), and an incomplete clause at the end ('and I can' is incomplete; completed to 'and I can enjoy it'). Suggestion: use 'although' to express contrast, use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons, check spelling (dish), choose appropriate quantifiers, and finish clauses with a clear verb phrase. Grammar problem type ID:16

× I used to like fried rice, it's a common dish in my country. It's uh, have a simple flavors like sweet story.

✓ I used to like fried rice; it's a common dish in my country. It has simple flavors, like a sweet story.

Several problems: tense and subject-verb agreement ('it's uh, have' should be 'it has'), article and quantifier issues ('a simple flavors' should be 'simple flavors' or 'a simple flavor') and unclear phrase 'sweet story' likely intended 'a sweet taste' or 'a sweet flavor'—here corrected to 'like a sweet story' kept but better is 'a sweet taste'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree (it has), remove extra filler 'uh', and choose correct noun phrases and articles. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I eat different food depend on the time of the years. For example in summer I more I'm more likely to avoid spicy dish because in Thailand during summer it's really hot better and.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods depending on the time of year. For example, in summer I'm more likely to avoid spicy dishes because in Thailand it gets really hot.

Multiple issues: plural/singular ('different food' should be 'different foods'), verb form ('depend' should be 'depending'), article/number ('the years' should be 'year'), word order and redundancy ('I more I'm more likely' reduced to 'I'm more likely'), plural form for countable noun ('spicy dish' -> 'spicy dishes'), awkward clause 'it's really hot better and' corrected to 'it gets really hot'. Suggestion: use 'depending on the time of year', ensure pluralization for general foods, fix word order and remove redundant words, and complete clauses with clear verbs. Grammar problem type ID:14